Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is informative and mostly natural, but you can improve by correcting the verb agreement ('temperature usually drops') and by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Since Thailand is located in the tropical zones, the weather is usually hot and humid; however, in November and December, the temperature usually drops to around 25°C, and it's quite windy in the morning as well.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy, for example, 'because' and 'so'. Also, use more precise vocabulary like 'comfortable' instead of 'more happy'.

Exemplo: Having lived in a hot and humid city all my life, I prefer cold weather because I sweat less and feel more comfortable and calm when the temperature is low.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words to connect your reasons and by choosing more natural expressions, such as 'sweat dries quickly' instead of 'my sweats get dried out very fast'.

Exemplo: Since I sweat a lot, I prefer dry weather because my sweat dries quickly, and wet weather tends to attract bugs and insects, which can be quite annoying.

Sugestão: Your answer is detailed but a bit disorganized and contains some grammatical errors. Try to use linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect ideas, and avoid repeating phrases like 'is like'. Also, break your answer into shorter, clearer sentences.

Exemplo: Of course, I usually check the weather forecast before leaving the house to know the temperature and whether it will be windy. Also, I like to check the sunset time because watching sunsets makes me feel calm.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'also' to organize your ideas. Correct verb forms and clarify phrases like 'it changed the ocean oxygen' to 'it has affected ocean oxygen levels'.

Exemplo: That's a very interesting question. For example, I have noticed that Thailand is getting hotter every year due to climate change. Also, natural disasters such as flooding and drought happen more frequently, and these changes have affected ocean oxygen levels.

Sugestão: Your answer is well-structured and informative. To improve, correct the typo 'chi mates' to 'climates' and use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' more smoothly to enhance coherence.

Exemplo: Of course, I would love to visit cities with different climates from where I live because I enjoy experiencing new environments. For example, I'm particularly interested in the Mediterranean climate, which has warm, wet winters and hot, dry summers. I think living there would be fascinating because of the variety of weather throughout the year.

× Since Thailand is located in the tropical zones, the weather is usually hot and humid, but in November and December, the temperature usually drop to around 25°C and it's quite windy in the morning as well.

✓ Since Thailand is located in the tropical zone, the weather is usually hot and humid, but in November and December, the temperature usually drops to around 25°C and it's quite windy in the morning as well.

The phrase 'tropical zones' should be singular 'tropical zone' because Thailand is generally considered to be in one tropical zone. Also, 'temperature usually drop' is incorrect because 'temperature' is singular and requires the verb 'drops' with an 's' to agree in number (subject-verb agreement).

× As someone who's living in a hot and humid city my whole life, I actually prefer cold weather, but not so cold that I'm freezing because I sweat less when it's cold and I'm more happy and calm when the temperature is low.

✓ As someone who has lived in a hot and humid city my whole life, I actually prefer cold weather, but not so cold that I'm freezing because I sweat less when it's cold and I'm happier and calmer when the temperature is low.

The phrase 'who's living' is incorrect for a lifelong condition; 'who has lived' is appropriate to express experience over a lifetime (present perfect). Also, 'more happy and calm' should be 'happier and calmer' because comparative adjectives require the '-er' form for short adjectives like 'happy' and 'calm'.

× As someone who sweats a lot, I prefer dry weather because my sweats get dried out very fast and wet weather tends to attract bugs and insects which can be pretty annoying.

✓ As someone who sweats a lot, I prefer dry weather because my sweat gets dried out very fast and wet weather tends to attract bugs and insects which can be pretty annoying.

The word 'sweats' is incorrect here; 'sweat' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, 'my sweat gets' uses singular verb to agree with the uncountable noun 'sweat'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Of course, I usually check the weather forecast before I leave the house because I want to know how the temperature of the day is like is it windy or not?

✓ Of course, I usually check the weather forecast before I leave the house because I want to know what the temperature of the day is like and whether it is windy or not.

The original sentence has a run-on structure and incorrect phrasing 'how the temperature of the day is like is it windy or not?'. It should be restructured to 'what the temperature of the day is like and whether it is windy or not' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× That's a very interesting question because the first side effect of climate change that I noticed is the hotter and hotter Thailand gets every year.

✓ That's a very interesting question because the first side effect of climate change that I noticed is that Thailand is getting hotter and hotter every year.

The phrase 'the hotter and hotter Thailand gets' is awkward. It is better to say 'Thailand is getting hotter and hotter' to correctly express the ongoing change. Also, adding 'that' after 'is' improves sentence clarity.

× And I believe natural disasters such as flooding or drought happens every year and it changed the ocean oxygen.

✓ And I believe natural disasters such as flooding or drought happen every year and they change the ocean's oxygen levels.

'Flooding or drought happens' is incorrect because the subject is plural ('disasters'), so the verb should be 'happen' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'it changed the ocean oxygen' is incorrect; 'they change the ocean's oxygen levels' is correct to match plural subject and proper possessive form.

× Of course, I would love to visit cities with different chi mates from where I live because I enjoy experiencing new environments.

✓ Of course, I would love to visit cities with different climates from where I live because I enjoy experiencing new environments.

The word 'chi mates' is a misspelling of 'climates'. This is a spelling error but relates to the plural noun 'climates' which is correct here.