Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak natural. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang langsung dan mudah dimengerti dengan kalimat yang sederhana dan terstruktur. Hindari kata-kata yang tidak relevan dan gunakan kalimat yang koheren.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is generally mild and pleasant. It is not too hot or too cold, which makes it comfortable for daily activities. For example, schools and parks are well maintained and the air feels fresh.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, namun ada pengulangan kata dan sedikit kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk menghindari pengulangan dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih variatif serta perhatikan grammar.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing and energizing, especially after staying indoors for a long time. For instance, I enjoy wearing cozy clothes and drinking hot beverages, which make the cold weather more comfortable.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada beberapa kata yang tidak tepat. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan alasan yang spesifik.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable for outdoor activities. For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet, and it is easier to plan events and training sessions.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik dan jelas. Namun, perhatikan penggunaan kata dan struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan lancar.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before going to work. It helps me plan my day, such as bringing an umbrella if rain is expected and dressing appropriately to avoid bad weather.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan banyak kesalahan tata bahasa serta kosakata yang tidak tepat. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang lebih terstruktur dengan contoh spesifik dan kalimat yang mudah dipahami.

Exemplo: In recent years, climate change has caused serious effects on the environment. For example, there have been more frequent hurricanes, floods, and droughts, which have made life difficult for many people.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda mengandung kalimat yang tidak lengkap dan kurang jelas. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lengkap dan memberikan alasan yang spesifik serta contoh yang jelas.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. Experiencing colder or tropical weather can be refreshing and exciting. For example, visiting a snowy city would be a unique experience because we don't have snow where I live.

× No matter what I do is genuinely mild and puzzled Toronto or several South Korea but with excessively pop which means operativities enjoyable.

✓ No matter what I do, the weather is genuinely mild in Toronto or several parts of South Korea, but with excessive pollution which affects the quality of life.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper sentence structure, making it difficult to understand. It needs to be broken down into clearer clauses with correct subject-verb agreement and appropriate vocabulary to convey the intended meaning.

× Additionally you experience majority including the school which have kept their environment and fresh.

✓ Additionally, you experience a majority of places, including schools, which have kept their environment fresh.

The original sentence misuses 'majority' without a quantifier and has incorrect pronoun reference. Adding 'a majority of places' clarifies the meaning, and correcting verb agreement with 'have' matches the plural subject 'schools'.

× I enjoy wearing cozy clothes and cooking hot beverage, which make cool things more comfortable.

✓ I enjoy wearing cozy clothes and drinking hot beverages, which make cold things more comfortable.

The phrase 'cooking hot beverage' is incorrect; 'drinking hot beverages' is appropriate. Also, 'make cool things' should be 'make cold things' to correctly describe the effect. Quantifiers and noun forms need correction for clarity.

× I put it over try later because it is more comfortable and confident for the new activities.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for new activities.

The phrase 'I put it over try later' is incorrect and unclear. Replacing it with 'I prefer dry weather' fits the context. Also, 'confident' is incorrect here; 'convenient' is the correct adjective to describe suitability.

× I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or sleeping on wet surfaces.

✓ I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or sitting on wet surfaces.

'Sleeping on wet surfaces' is unlikely in this context; 'sitting on wet surfaces' is more appropriate when discussing comfort in dry weather. The preposition use is corrected to fit the intended meaning.

× Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning if I leave it for work.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I leave for work.

The phrase 'if I leave it for work' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'before I leave for work' to indicate the time when the weather forecast is checked.

× I find it helpful to plan my day, especially to carry an umbrella for example if rain is expected, and make sure to dress accordingly and avoid getting caught in the bad weather.

✓ I find it helpful to plan my day, especially to carry an umbrella if rain is expected, and to make sure I dress accordingly to avoid getting caught in bad weather.

The phrase 'for example if rain is expected' is awkward and redundant. Removing 'for example' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and flow. Also, adding 'to' before 'make sure' maintains parallel structure.

× In recent years, climate change has had proven effect on the environment and in life.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had a proven effect on the environment and life.

The phrase 'has had proven effect' is missing the article 'a'. Adding 'a' before 'proven effect' corrects the noun phrase. The tense is correct as present perfect.

× Firstly, we have less events such as hurricanes, plots and droughts which have caused a difficult image to compete as well by.

✓ Firstly, we have fewer events such as hurricanes, floods, and droughts, which have caused significant challenges to compete as well.

'Less events' should be 'fewer events' because 'events' is countable. 'Plots' is likely a typo for 'floods'. The phrase 'a difficult image to compete as well by' is unclear and rephrased for clarity.

× From my own experience of new climates such as colder or more tropical and farming can be refreshing and exciting.

✓ From my own experience, encountering new climates such as colder or more tropical ones can be refreshing and exciting.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and clarity. Adding commas and rephrasing improves readability and meaning.

× For example, visiting a snowy city will **** ** to travel.

✓ For example, visiting a snowy city will be a unique experience to travel.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Completing the sentence with 'will be a unique experience to travel' provides clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think it is that are not possible where I live, which would be a unique and memorable experience.

✓ I think these experiences are not possible where I live, which would make them unique and memorable.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used; 'these experiences' correctly refers to the plural subject. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.