Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cavabınızda daha təbii ifadələrdən istifadə edin və cümlələrinizi daha qısa və aydın edin. Məsələn, mövsümləri təsvir edərkən, keçid sözləri əlavə edin və cümlələri tamamlayın.

Exemplo: I live in Azerbaijan, where the weather is generally mild. Summers are quite hot, while winters can be cold. In autumn, the weather changes frequently, and it is often windy.

Sugestão: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlardan qaçın və fikirlərinizi daha səlis ifadə edin. Həmçinin, keçid sözləri istifadə edərək fikirlərinizi əlaqələndirin.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer hot weather because cold weather makes me feel unwell. When it's cold, I often get sick, so I don't like it. On the other hand, hot weather makes me feel happy and energetic.

Sugestão: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və qrammatik cəhətdən düzgün qurun. Məsələn, 'bad weather' əvəzinə 'wet weather' istifadə edin və səbəbləri daha dəqiq ifadə edin.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather to wet weather because wet conditions often make me feel sick. I don't enjoy rain or dampness, so dry weather is more comfortable for me.

Sugestão: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlardan qaçın və fikirlərinizi daha aydın ifadə edin. Həmçinin, keçid sözləri istifadə edərək fikirlərinizi əlaqələndirin.

Exemplo: I usually check the weather forecast if I have an important meeting or event the next day. Otherwise, I don't pay much attention to it because it doesn't affect my daily routine.

Sugestão: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və qrammatik cəhətdən düzgün qurun. Məzmunu genişləndirin və daha spesifik nümunələr verin.

Exemplo: Climate change has had serious effects on both nature and people. For example, it has caused drier weather in some areas, which affects agriculture and can lead to health problems for people.

Sugestão: Cavabınızı daha aydın və məntiqli edin. Sualı birbaşa cavablandırın və fikirlərinizi dəstəkləyən əlavə məlumat verin.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates. For instance, Ganja is colder than Baku, and I am interested in experiencing the cooler weather there.

× in the autumn the weather is change

✓ in the autumn the weather changes

The verb 'change' should be in the present simple form 'changes' to agree with the singular subject 'the weather' and to correctly express a habitual action.

× Sometimes it will be windy or.

✓ Sometimes it will be windy.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'or'. Removing 'or' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× I hate I don't like cold weather because I can't bear cold weather.

✓ I hate cold weather because I can't bear it.

The original sentence is redundant and awkward. Simplifying it to 'I hate cold weather because I can't bear it' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× When the weather is so cold it makes me sick.

✓ When the weather is very cold, it makes me sick.

Adding a comma after the introductory clause improves readability. Also, 'so cold' can be replaced with 'very cold' for better formality, but 'so cold' is acceptable.

× But when when the weather is so hot, it makes me happy.

✓ But when the weather is very hot, it makes me happy.

Removed the repeated word 'when'. Also, similar to previous, 'so hot' can be replaced with 'very hot' for formality.

× I prefer dry weather than bad weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather to bad weather.

The correct preposition after 'prefer' when comparing two things is 'to', not 'than'.

× Because the weather is wet, it makes it affect me negatively.

✓ Because the weather is wet, it affects me negatively.

The phrase 'it makes it affect me' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'it affects me negatively'.

× I can feel me sick.

✓ I can feel sick.

The reflexive pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used here. The correct expression is 'I can feel sick'.

× it makes me badly.

✓ it makes me feel bad.

'Badly' is an adverb and does not correctly modify 'makes me'. The correct phrase is 'makes me feel bad'.

× There is no something.

✓ There is nothing.

'There is no something' is ungrammatical. The correct expression to indicate absence is 'There is nothing'.

× If I if I have a important meeting or important something, yeah, I generally check, I generally check the weather forecast of what happened, what will happen for tomorrow.

✓ If I have an important meeting or something important, I generally check the weather forecast for what happened and what will happen tomorrow.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound in 'important'. The phrase 'important something' is awkward; 'something important' is correct. Also, 'weather forecast of what happened' is incorrect; 'weather forecast for what happened' is better, though typically forecasts are for the future only.

× But, but generally, no, I don't check any weather forecast.

✓ But generally, no, I don't check the weather forecast.

The phrase 'any weather forecast' is less natural here; 'the weather forecast' is more appropriate. Also, removing the repeated 'but' improves fluency.

× when the climate change happen happens, the weather is so dry and especially people feel sick and bad.

✓ when climate change happens, the weather is very dry and especially people feel sick and bad.

'Climate change' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. The verb should be 'happens' to agree with singular subject. 'So dry' can be replaced with 'very dry' for formality.

× I think that Ganja is colder than Baku and especially regions are colder than cities in Azerbaijan like this.

✓ I think that Ganja is colder than Baku and especially the regions are colder than the cities in Azerbaijan like this.

The plural nouns 'regions' and 'cities' need the definite article 'the' when referring to specific known places.