Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a more direct and structured answer without filler words like 'umm'. Start with a clear topic sentence about the weather, then add specific details about the climate in Iran. Avoid redundancy and unnecessary phrases like 'thank you'.

Exemplo: The weather where I live in Iran is mostly hot and dry. I enjoy this kind of weather because it allows me to spend more time outdoors. For example, summers here are sunny and warm, which I find very pleasant.

Sugestão: Provide a complete answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler phrases like 'OK, OK, let's go'. Explain why you prefer hot weather to make your answer more informative and natural.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy outdoor activities like swimming and hiking. Hot weather also makes me feel more energetic and comfortable compared to cold weather.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but could be improved by using clearer linking words and more natural phrasing. Avoid negative or awkward expressions like 'you smell so bad'. Instead, explain the discomfort caused by humidity in a polite way.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because wet weather can be unpredictable, especially in tropical areas where sudden rains occur. Also, humid places like Dubai make you sweat a lot during the day, which can be uncomfortable.

Sugestão: Try to avoid awkward phrases like 'You want to be honest'. Use a clear topic sentence and organize your answer logically. Also, improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast every morning. This helps me decide what to wear or whether to bring an umbrella to work. Checking once a day is usually enough for me.

Sugestão: Your answer is informative but could be improved by using smoother linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid phrases like 'If I want to mention one of them'. Instead, state your point directly.

Exemplo: One major effect of climate change is global warming, which causes hotter summers in cities, rising sea levels, and melting ice caps at the North and South Poles.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but could be improved by correcting grammar and vocabulary errors, such as 'hunting beers' which should be 'hunting bears'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy adventurous experiences and like visiting cities with different climates and cultures. For example, I once traveled to Siberia in Russia, which is extremely cold. There, I tried ice bathing and bear hunting, which was a memorable experience.

× I like hot weather. It's good, amazing and I like it and umm, umm, I live in Iran and I love weather like Iran.

✓ I like hot weather. It's good and amazing, and I like it. Umm, umm, I live in Iran and I love weather like that in Iran.

The phrase 'weather like Iran' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'weather like that in Iran' to correctly refer to the type of weather experienced in Iran. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed proper punctuation to separate ideas.

× I like to visit cities with different cultures, climates and people from where you live.

✓ I like to visit cities with different cultures, climates, and people from where I live.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to their own place of residence. It should be 'I' to maintain consistency and clarity.

× it was nice experience to have a ice bath or hunting beers.

✓ It was a nice experience to have an ice bath or go hunting bears.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'nice experience' and uses 'a' before a vowel sound word 'ice' which requires 'an'. Also, 'hunting beers' is a typo; it should be 'hunting bears'. Additionally, 'hunting bears' needs the verb 'go' to be grammatically correct.