Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains redundancy. Try to make your sentences more concise and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is usually cloudy, with frequent rain in the evenings. Additionally, the wind tends to be quite strong at times.

Sugestão: Your answer conveys your preference but has some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to use clearer vocabulary and avoid repeating words. Also, explain briefly why you prefer hot weather.

Exemplo: I usually prefer hot weather because I find cold climates uncomfortable. Cold weather often affects my mood and makes me feel less energetic.

Sugestão: Your answer has repetition and is incomplete. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid repeating words. Provide specific reasons why you prefer dry weather.

Exemplo: I usually prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient. Wet weather often causes problems like slippery roads and traffic delays.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your sentences and provide specific details about when and how often you check the weather forecast. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I often check the weather forecast, especially when it is raining. I usually do this before going out for work or important errands to plan accordingly.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Try to avoid repeating words and complete your thoughts. Provide specific effects of climate change to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: I believe pollution and deforestation are the main causes of climate change recently. As a result, we see more extreme weather events like floods and droughts.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and lacks detail. Try to finish your sentences and provide reasons why you want to visit cities with different climates. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to visit Nilgiris in Tamil Nadu because it has a cool and pleasant climate, which is very different from where I live.

× The weather in my place is quite cloudy and evenings are full of rains and sometimes the wind is very very much faster in the place I live, so it is more.

✓ The weather in my place is quite cloudy and evenings are full of rain, and sometimes the wind is very strong in the place I live, so it is more.

The word 'rains' is incorrect here because 'rain' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, 'very very much faster' is awkward; 'very strong' is a better adjective to describe wind speed. The phrase 'so it is more' is unclear and unnecessary, so it is omitted for clarity.

× I usually prefer hot weather because I cannot tolerate cold climates and I don't enjoy Moody kind of kind of weather. It makes my day off.

✓ I usually prefer hot weather because I cannot tolerate cold climates and I don't enjoy moody kinds of weather. It ruins my day off.

The adjective 'Moody' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun. Also, 'kind of kind of' is repetitive and should be 'kinds of' to indicate types of weather. 'It makes my day off' is unclear; 'It ruins my day off' better expresses the intended meaning.

× I usually prefer dry weather because it doesn't cause any discomfort to me and and the wet weather causes a lot of difficulties to people who who who.

✓ I usually prefer dry weather because it doesn't cause any discomfort to me, and wet weather causes a lot of difficulties for people.

The sentence has repeated words 'and and' and 'who who who' which are errors. Also, 'causes a lot of difficulties to people who who who' is incomplete and unclear. The corrected sentence removes repetitions and clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I do have the habit of checking the weather very often and most probably I check the weather when it is raining because when we have to go outside for work or for some something very important, I usually.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather very often, and I most probably check it when it is raining because when we have to go outside for work or for something very important, I usually check the forecast.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'I usually.' which is incomplete. The phrase 'some something' is redundant. The correction completes the sentence and removes redundancy for clarity.

× The main cause of climate change in these years is because of pollution and the cutting down of trees. These are the two major, major things that that is affecting the climate change in recent years and in my opinion, I think.

✓ The main causes of climate change in recent years are pollution and the cutting down of trees. These are the two major things that are affecting climate change, and in my opinion, I think so.

'Cause' should be plural 'causes' because two things are mentioned. 'That that is' is incorrect; it should be 'that are' to agree with plural 'things'. The phrase 'in these years' is better as 'in recent years'. The sentence is completed for clarity.