Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较完整，表达了四季分明和温和气候的特点，但句子结构稍显复杂，建议简化句子并使用更多连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Exemplo: I live in a city with four distinct seasons. Summers and winters are mild without extreme temperatures. Moreover, spring and autumn are very pleasant because of the comfortable weather.

Sugestão: 回答内容具体，表达了偏好冷天气的原因，但句子较长且重复，建议使用连接词简化表达，避免冗余。

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because hot summers make me sweat a lot, which distracts me from work. In contrast, cold weather helps me concentrate and relax better.

Sugestão: 回答具体且有个人经历支持，表达清晰自然。建议在句子间加入连接词，使逻辑更连贯。

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because I used to live in a dry city in northern China. The harsh wind there irritated my skin, so I find wet weather better for my health.

Sugestão: 回答内容完整，但语法和用词有小错误，如冠词使用和句子结构。建议注意冠词和复数形式，简化句子结构。

Exemplo: I check the weather forecast almost every day, especially after moving to Shanghai. The summer weather is very changeable, so I need to know if I should bring an umbrella.

Sugestão: 回答内容有价值，但表达不够自然，语法和词汇使用需改进。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词，避免语法错误。

Exemplo: I think climate change has caused more frequent extreme heat in recent summers. For example, temperatures over 40 degrees Celsius happen more often in southern China, leading to large economic losses.

Sugestão: 回答表达不够流畅，语法错误较多，如动词搭配和主谓一致。建议简化句子，注意语法，使用连接词使表达更自然。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, especially island cities like Xiamen or Hainan. Their weather is unpredictable, with a mix of sunny and rainy days.

× The city I live in has four distinct seasons to experience and no extreme temperatures will exist in summer or winter.

✓ The city I live in has four distinct seasons to experience and no extreme temperatures exist in summer or winter.

这里的“will exist”使用了将来时态，但描述的是一个普遍事实，应该使用一般现在时态“exist”。

× I prefer cold weather because in hot weather, especially in summers, I will sweat too much to concentrate on my job and I will have difficulty in calming down when the temperature is higher than my body.

✓ I prefer cold weather because in hot weather, especially in summer, I sweat too much to concentrate on my job and have difficulty calming down when the temperature is higher than my body temperature.

这里“will sweat”和“will have difficulty”使用了将来时态，但描述的是习惯性或一般事实，应使用一般现在时态“sweat”和“have difficulty”。另外，“in summers”应改为“in summer”，表示季节。

× I prefer cold weather because in hot weather, especially in summers, I will sweat too much to concentrate on my job and I will have difficulty in calming down when the temperature is higher than my body.

✓ I prefer cold weather because in hot weather, especially in summer, I sweat too much to concentrate on my job and have difficulty calming down when the temperature is higher than my body temperature.

“higher than my body”缺少名词，应为“higher than my body temperature”，表示温度高于体温。

× I have the habit of checking weather forecast almost every day, especially when I moved to Shanghai, because the summer weather here is so changeable and unpredictable, so you have to check the instant forecast to decide whether to carry a umbrella.

✓ I have the habit of checking the weather forecast almost every day, especially since I moved to Shanghai, because the summer weather here is so changeable and unpredictable, so you have to check the instant forecast to decide whether to carry an umbrella.

“checking weather forecast”缺少定冠词，应为“checking the weather forecast”。“when I moved to Shanghai”应改为“since I moved to Shanghai”，表示从过去某时开始持续到现在。“a umbrella”前的冠词错误，应为“an umbrella”，因为umbrella以元音音素开头。

× I think climate change effect has increased the frequency of extreme temperature in summer days in recent years.

✓ I think the effect of climate change has increased the frequency of extreme temperatures in summer days in recent years.

“climate change effect”缺少冠词且词序不当，应为“the effect of climate change”。“extreme temperature”应为复数“extreme temperatures”，因为频率增加的是多次极端温度事件。

× 40 Celsius degrees are more often observed in the southern part of China, which causes economical damages in a large scale.

✓ 40 degrees Celsius are more often observed in the southern part of China, which causes economic damage on a large scale.

“40 Celsius degrees”表达不自然，应为“40 degrees Celsius”。“economical damages”应为“economic damage”，因为“economic”是形容词，“economical”意为节约的；“damage”通常不可数。短语“in a large scale”应为“on a large scale”。

× Yes, I would like to experience, especially to the cities that are on the islands such as Xiamen or Hainan, where the climate there are always unpredictable and are combined with sunny days and rainy days.

✓ Yes, I would like to experience, especially the cities that are on islands such as Xiamen or Hainan, where the climate is always unpredictable and combines sunny days and rainy days.

“the cities that are on the islands”中“the islands”不需要定冠词，应为“on islands”。“climate there are”主谓不一致，应为“climate is”。“are combined with”主语是climate，应使用单数动词“combines”。