Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和重复表达。可以简洁明了地描述上海的天气特点，并用连词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: The weather in Shanghai is quite extreme; we hardly experience spring or autumn. It usually feels like it's either spring, summer, or winter throughout the year.

Sugestão: 回答应更清晰，避免语法错误，使用连词连接观点，并具体说明喜欢冷天气的原因。

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because in winter I tend to have a better appetite and can exercise indoors comfortably. Also, it's easier to stay warm by dressing appropriately, unlike hot weather which can be uncomfortable.

Sugestão: 回答中应注意语法准确，使用连词使句子更流畅，并具体说明干燥天气的好处。

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because living in Shanghai means dealing with constant humidity, which makes me feel sticky and sweaty. Moreover, wet weather can cause skin problems and spoil food more easily.

Sugestão: 回答应更简洁，语法正确，使用连词连接句子，并明确说明习惯和原因。

Exemplo: I usually check the weather forecast every morning after I wake up. This helps me decide what to wear and whether I need to bring an umbrella, especially since the weather here changes frequently.

Sugestão: 回答应更准确表达观点，避免重复和语法错误，使用连词使句子连贯，并具体说明气候变化的影响。

Exemplo: Although I'm not an expert, I have noticed more extreme weather events recently, such as hurricanes and unusually high temperatures reaching 40 degrees Celsius, which often cause significant damage.

Sugestão: 回答应更自然流畅，避免语法错误，使用连词连接句子，并具体说明喜欢不同气候的原因。

Exemplo: Yes, I am very passionate about traveling, especially long trips abroad. I enjoy experiencing different cultures and climates, which feels refreshing even though the climate where I live suits me well.

× In Shanghai there is always an extreme weather like we don't have spring or autumn.

✓ In Shanghai there is always extreme weather like we don't have spring or autumn.

这里的weather是不可数名词，不需要加冠词an。

× We just seems like the temperature is like we are in spring, we are in summer or we are in winter.

✓ We just seem like the temperature is like we are in spring, we are in summer or we are in winter.

主语we是复数，谓语动词seem应使用原形，去掉s。

× while we can't be cool in hot weather.

✓ while we can't feel cool in hot weather.

这里表达感觉凉爽，应该用feel而不是be。

× it is always a wet weather which makes me feel sticky, sweaty all the time

✓ it is always wet weather which makes me feel sticky, sweaty all the time

weather是不可数名词，不需要加冠词a。

× I have the habit of checking the weather forecast all most of the time is when I getting up and I check the weather to ensure that what I pick what I wear and whether I need to bring umbrella outside.

✓ I have the habit of checking the weather forecast almost all the time when I get up and I check the weather to ensure what I pick, what I wear and whether I need to bring an umbrella outside.

1. all most应为almost；2. getting up应为get up，表示习惯动作用一般现在时；3. bring umbrella应加冠词an。

× and whether I need to bring umbrella outside.

✓ and whether I need to bring an umbrella outside.

umbrella前应加不定冠词an。

× And the weather is always changeable so I need to check.

✓ And the weather is always changeable, so I need to check.

句子缺少逗号，连接两个独立分句。

× Although we are not professional in climate change but it is easy for us to find the extreme weather like a hurricane or or high temperature even in even at 40 centigrade like this and these always damage out.

✓ Although we are not professionals in climate change, it is easy for us to find extreme weather like hurricanes or high temperatures even at 40 centigrade, and these always cause damage.

1. professional应为复数professionals；2. 删除重复的or；3. high temperature应复数high temperatures；4. 删除多余的in；5. damage用作动词时应为cause damage；6. 句子结构混乱，需调整。

× like a hurricane or or high temperature even in even at 40 centigrade like this and these always damage out.

✓ like hurricanes or high temperatures even at 40 centigrade, and these always cause damage.

hurricane和high temperature应使用复数形式，且damage用作动词时不加out。

× Yes, I have great passionate about travel, especially long day trips, going abroad, seeing different cultures and different climates.

✓ Yes, I have great passion for travel, especially long day trips, going abroad, seeing different cultures and different climates.

passionate是形容词，名词应为passion；介词应为for。

× Although maybe where I live the climate is suitable for me, but it's fresh to experience.

✓ Although maybe the climate where I live is suitable for me, it's still refreshing to experience different climates.

1. although和but不能同时使用；2. 句子结构不完整，需调整；3. fresh用作形容词不合适，改为refreshing。