Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 중복되고 문장이 매끄럽지 않습니다. 불필요한 반복을 줄이고, 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 구성하세요. 예를 들어, 'I get frustrated because it's too hot and humid that I cannot control my body and it's, it's very, I get wet easily because.' 부분을 명확하게 정리하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: The weather in Korea is currently hot and humid, which makes me feel uncomfortable when I go outside because I sweat a lot.

Sugestão: 문장이 다소 어색하고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'prefer hot weather to cold weather'와 같이 올바른 비교 구문을 사용하고, 문장을 완성하세요. 또한, 'But'으로 끝나는 문장은 피하고, 생각을 완전하게 표현하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather to cold weather because I tend to get sick easily in the cold. Also, in hot weather, I can wear light clothes comfortably.

Sugestão: 비교 구문에서 'prefer dry weather to wet weather'가 올바릅니다. 또한, 문장 구조가 어색하므로 주어와 동사의 일치를 확인하고, 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather to wet weather because wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable. In dry weather, I can wear light clothes like T-shirts and shorts, but in wet weather, I have to wear boots.

Sugestão: 답변이 미완성이고, 불필요한 말버릇('umm', 'uh')이 많습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 불필요한 말을 줄여 자연스럽고 명확하게 표현하세요.

Exemplo: I check the weather forecast on my phone every morning. This helps me decide what to wear and whether I need to bring an umbrella.

Sugestão: 문장이 불완전하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 문법과 어휘 사용에 주의하며, 명확하고 구체적으로 의견을 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Climate change has caused temperatures to rise, which is harmful to the environment. Human activities have damaged nature, leading to more extreme weather events.

Sugestão: 'to leave'는 문맥에 맞지 않으며, 문장이 다소 어색합니다. 방문하고 싶은 이유를 명확히 하고, 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities like Toronto or Iceland because they have colder climates. Since summers in Korea are very hot and humid, I want to experience cooler weather.

× Currently I'm living in Korea and the weather is hot and humid.

✓ Currently I live in Korea and the weather is hot and humid.

The present continuous tense 'I'm living' is generally used for temporary actions. Since living in a place is usually a permanent or long-term state, the simple present tense 'I live' is more appropriate here.

× Every day I go out, I get, uh, I get frustrated because it's too hot and humid that I cannot control my body and it's, it's very, I get wet easily because.

✓ Every day I go out, I get frustrated because it's so hot and humid that I cannot control my body and I get wet easily.

The sentence has redundant pronouns and incomplete phrases. 'It's too hot and humid that' should be 'it's so hot and humid that' to express cause and effect properly. Also, 'I get, uh, I get' is repetitive and should be simplified.

× I'd prefer hot weather than cold weather.

✓ I'd prefer hot weather to cold weather.

The correct preposition after 'prefer' when comparing two things is 'to', not 'than'. 'Prefer A to B' is the standard structure.

× Hot weather you can just take off your clothes and wear something short.

✓ In hot weather, you can just take off your clothes and wear something short.

The sentence lacks a preposition to indicate the condition. 'In hot weather' is the correct phrase. Also, 'something short' is vague; 'something short' is acceptable but could be improved to 'short clothes' or 'shorts'.

× I prefer dry weather than wet weather because wet weather you makes you me feel very uncomfortable.

✓ I prefer dry weather to wet weather because wet weather makes me feel very uncomfortable.

Again, 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' when comparing two things. Also, 'wet weather you makes you me' is incorrect; the correct subject-verb agreement is 'wet weather makes me'.

× Dry weather you can just wear light clothes like T-shirt or short, but wet weather you need to wear some boots.

✓ In dry weather, you can just wear light clothes like T-shirts or shorts, but in wet weather, you need to wear boots.

The sentence needs prepositions 'in' to indicate conditions. Also, 'T-shirt or short' should be pluralized to 'T-shirts or shorts' to match the general statement. 'Some boots' is unnecessary; 'boots' suffices.

× Every day I wake up I check my phone and weather app.

✓ Every day when I wake up, I check my phone and the weather app.

The sentence lacks a conjunction or comma to separate clauses. Adding 'when' and a comma improves clarity and sentence structure. Also, 'weather app' should have the definite article 'the'.

× By doing so I can umm, check what the weather, uh, what to wear and what to carry.

✓ By doing so, I can check the weather and decide what to wear and what to carry.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Simplifying and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and flow.

× The effects of climate change in recent years is hot is bad because human destroyed environment so far and in as a result, we are having.

✓ The effects of climate change in recent years are bad because humans have destroyed the environment so far, and as a result, we are experiencing problems.

The original sentence has multiple issues: subject-verb agreement ('effects' is plural, so 'are' is correct), missing articles, incorrect verb tense, and incomplete thoughts. Correcting these improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Yes, I like to visit Toronto or Iceland to leave because they have colder weather.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit Toronto or Iceland to live because they have colder weather.

The word 'leave' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'live'. Also, 'would like' is more polite and appropriate for expressing desires.

× Summer in Korea is very hot and humid and sometimes I wanna travel to that country.

✓ Summer in Korea is very hot and humid, and sometimes I want to travel to those countries.

'Wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' in formal speech. Also, 'that country' is incorrect because two countries were mentioned; 'those countries' is appropriate.