Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response about the weather, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, say "The weather in Hyderabad is usually hot and humid. Due to heavy traffic, pollution worsens the conditions. It rains occasionally but not very often."

Exemplo: The weather in Hyderabad is usually hot and humid. Moreover, heavy traffic increases pollution, making it feel even worse. It rains occasionally, but not very often.

Sugestão: Your answer should be more complete and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences. For example, "I prefer cold weather because I am fascinated by snow and mountains. I enjoy staying in the mountains and having a cup of hot tea. On the other hand, I dislike hot weather because my hometown is usually hot and humid."

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I am fascinated by snow and mountains. For instance, I enjoy staying in the mountains and having a cup of hot tea. In contrast, I dislike hot weather since my hometown is usually hot and humid.

Sugestão: Your answer should be more fluent and avoid repetition. Start with a clear statement, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. For example, "From my perspective, I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes commuting to work difficult. Therefore, I can be more productive in dry conditions."

Exemplo: From my perspective, I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes commuting to work difficult. Therefore, I can be more productive in dry conditions.

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and grammatically correct. Begin with a direct response, then explain with reasons using linking words. For example, "Yes, I regularly check the weather forecast before leaving for work or vacations. This helps me plan my day because rainy weather can make roads difficult to travel."

Exemplo: Yes, I regularly check the weather forecast before leaving for work or vacations. This helps me plan my day because rainy weather can make roads difficult to travel.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion with specific examples and use linking words. For example, "In recent years, climate change has caused irregular weather patterns. For instance, rainfall has become unpredictable, and temperatures are often very hot and humid, which affects daily life."

Exemplo: In recent years, climate change has caused irregular weather patterns. For instance, rainfall has become unpredictable, and temperatures are often very hot and humid, which affects daily life.

Sugestão: Your answer should be more structured and grammatically correct. Start with a clear statement, then add supporting details with linking words. For example, "Yes, it is my dream to visit nearby cities with different climates. I am fascinated by experiencing various climates and cultures, especially cold weather and snow."

Exemplo: Yes, it is my dream to visit nearby cities with different climates. I am fascinated by experiencing various climates and cultures, especially cold weather and snow.

× The place where I live is Hyderabad and it is often hot and very humidity and due to traffic it make more worse that's why it's due to pollution and it's sometimes it rain but not often but almost.

✓ The place where I live is Hyderabad and it is often hot and very humid. Due to traffic, it gets worse; that's why it's because of pollution. Sometimes it rains, but not often, almost rarely.

The adjective 'humidity' is incorrectly used instead of the adjective 'humid'. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'traffic'. The phrase 'more worse' is incorrect; 'worse' alone suffices. 'It's due to pollution' is better expressed as 'it's because of pollution'. 'It rain' should be 'it rains' to agree with the singular subject and present tense.

× due to traffic it make more worse

✓ due to traffic it makes worse

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'traffic' in the present tense.

× it is often hot and very humidity

✓ it is often hot and very humid

The noun 'humidity' is incorrectly used instead of the adjective 'humid' to describe the weather.

× it's sometimes it rain but not often but almost

✓ sometimes it rains, but not often, almost rarely

The verb 'rain' should be 'rains' to agree with the singular subject 'it' in present tense.

× I don't prefer hot weathers as I usually the place where I stay it is usually hot and humidity so I prefer staying at.

✓ I don't prefer hot weather as the place where I stay is usually hot and humid, so I prefer staying indoors.

The plural 'weathers' is incorrect; 'weather' is uncountable and should be singular. The phrase 'I usually the place where I stay it is usually hot and humidity' is ungrammatical and needs restructuring. 'Humidity' should be 'humid'. The sentence is incomplete and needs a proper ending.

× it is usually hot and humidity

✓ it is usually hot and humid

The noun 'humidity' is incorrectly used instead of the adjective 'humid' to describe the weather.

× I from my personal perspective, I can say I prefer dry weather as in wet weather going to work or it will be very difficult.

✓ From my personal perspective, I can say I prefer dry weather because going to work in wet weather is very difficult.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced phrases. 'I from my personal perspective, I can say' is awkward; better to start with 'From my personal perspective'. The phrase 'as in wet weather going to work or it will be very difficult' is ungrammatical and needs rephrasing.

× So in dry weather we can do our work more, more.

✓ So in dry weather, we can do our work more easily.

The repetition 'more, more' is incorrect and unclear. Adding 'easily' clarifies the meaning.

× Honestly speaking I'm very much addicted and checking the weather forecast before leaving for the work or any vacation as it by seeing the forecast.

✓ Honestly speaking, I'm very much addicted to checking the weather forecast before leaving for work or any vacation, as by seeing the forecast,

The phrase 'addicted and checking' is incorrect; it should be 'addicted to checking'. 'Leaving for the work' should be 'leaving for work' as 'work' is uncountable here. The sentence is incomplete and needs continuation.

× I planned my day accordingly as it is very difficult if it is rainy as roads will be.

✓ I plan my day accordingly because it is very difficult if it rains, as the roads become slippery.

The sentence mixes past and present tense inconsistently. 'I planned' should be 'I plan' to match habitual action. 'If it is rainy' should be 'if it rains'. The phrase 'roads will be' is incomplete and needs clarification.

× There are significant changes due to in the weather as usually for the station and there is usually there is no rainfall.

✓ There are significant changes in the weather; usually, during the season, there is little or no rainfall.

The phrase 'due to in the weather' is incorrect; 'in the weather' suffices. 'Usually for the station' is unclear; likely meant 'during the season'. The sentence is repetitive and needs restructuring.

× It is quite often rainfall is very quite often, whereas mostly it is very hot and very humidity and even it is worse in the.

✓ Rainfall is quite rare, whereas mostly it is very hot and very humid, and sometimes it is even worse.

The phrase 'It is quite often rainfall is very quite often' is ungrammatical and repetitive. 'Very humidity' should be 'very humid'. The sentence is incomplete and needs proper ending.

× mostly it is very hot and very humidity

✓ mostly it is very hot and very humid

The noun 'humidity' is incorrectly used instead of the adjective 'humid' to describe the weather.

× Oh, it's a dream for me to visit all these cities which are nearby as I want to.

✓ Oh, it's my dream to visit all these nearby cities as I want to.

The phrase 'which are nearby as I want to' is awkward and incomplete. 'My dream' is more natural than 'a dream for me'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× I'm very fascinated about experiencing different climates and cultures, especially the cold climate and the snow, which I really see.

✓ I'm very fascinated by experiencing different climates and cultures, especially cold climates and snow, which I really want to see.

The phrase 'fascinated about' should be 'fascinated by'. 'The cold climate and the snow' is better as 'cold climates and snow'. 'Which I really see' is incorrect; 'which I really want to see' is appropriate.