Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about the weather and activities.

Exemplo: I like living in warm weather because it allows me to enjoy outdoor activities comfortably. For instance, I often wear light-coloured clothes which keep me cool and relaxed.

Sugestão: Improve clarity and grammar by using complete sentences and linking words. Provide specific examples of activities you enjoy in hot weather.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because it gives us more opportunities for outdoor activities. For example, we often have picnics and go to the beach during the summer.

Sugestão: Focus on clear and coherent sentences. Avoid filler words and clarify your preference with reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is more enjoyable for outdoor activities. In contrast, wet weather can limit what we can do outside.

Sugestão: Avoid hesitation and repetition. Structure your answer clearly by stating when and why you check the weather forecast, using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning when I wake up so I can decide what clothes to wear for the day.

Sugestão: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Provide specific effects of climate change with examples, and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Climate change has affected farmers' lives by causing unpredictable weather patterns. Additionally, it has led to health problems for many people due to increased heat and pollution.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and coherence. Use linking words to explain your reasons and provide clear examples of different climates you want to experience.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates because I enjoy experiencing new weather. For example, some cities have snowy winters while others are dry and warm.

× I I like to live warm weather because we are doing more activities in outdoor and and I wear light color clothes which I feel very comfortable.

✓ I like to live in warm weather because we do more activities outdoors and I wear light-coloured clothes which make me feel very comfortable.

The phrase 'doing more activities in outdoor' is incorrect; 'doing' should be replaced with 'do' to match the present tense habitual action, and 'in outdoor' should be 'outdoors' (adverb). Also, 'light color clothes' should be 'light-coloured clothes' to correctly use the adjective form. The verb 'feel' should be 'make me feel' to correctly express the cause-effect relationship.

× I like to live warm weather because we are doing more activities in outdoor and and I wear light color clothes which I feel very comfortable.

✓ I like to live in warm weather because we do more activities outdoors and I wear light-coloured clothes which make me feel very comfortable.

The preposition 'in' is needed before 'warm weather' to indicate location or condition. Also, 'in outdoor' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'outdoors'.

× I like 2 hot weather because we can plan outdoor activities more. For example we plan outdoor picnic and we can go beach and more activities can.

✓ I like hot weather because we can plan more outdoor activities. For example, we plan outdoor picnics and we can go to the beach and do more activities.

'Outdoor picnic' should be plural 'outdoor picnics' to match the plural 'activities'. 'Go beach' requires the preposition 'to' as in 'go to the beach'. The phrase 'more activities can' is incomplete and should be rephrased to 'do more activities'.

× I like 2 hot weather because we can plan outdoor activities more. For example we plan outdoor picnic and we can go beach and more activities can.

✓ I like hot weather because we can plan more outdoor activities. For example, we plan outdoor picnics and we can go to the beach and do more activities.

The preposition 'to' is missing before 'the beach'. Also, 'plan outdoor picnic' should be 'plan outdoor picnics' to be grammatically correct.

× I like to, uh, drive weather mostly because, uh, there are a more fun according to the wet weather, we can do doing more outdoor activities and there is more.

✓ I like dry weather mostly because it is more fun. Compared to wet weather, we can do more outdoor activities and there is more to enjoy.

'Drive weather' is a mispronunciation of 'dry weather'. 'There are a more fun' is incorrect; 'it is more fun' is correct to refer to 'dry weather'. The phrase 'we can do doing more outdoor activities' is incorrect; 'do more outdoor activities' is correct. The sentence structure is fragmented and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Yes, I like to uh, check weather every day because, umm, I check whether, uh, in the morning when I was wake up and I like to wear clothes, clothes.

✓ Yes, I like to check the weather every day because I check it in the morning when I wake up and then decide what clothes to wear.

'Check weather' needs the definite article 'the' as in 'check the weather'. 'When I was wake up' is incorrect; it should be 'when I wake up' to use the present tense. The phrase 'I like to wear clothes, clothes' is redundant and unclear; it should specify deciding what clothes to wear.

× Yes, it's climates to change the farmers life and there is some health disease the people facing because of teen.

✓ Yes, the climate has changed farmers' lives and there are some health diseases that people are facing because of it.

'It's climates to change' is incorrect; the present perfect 'has changed' is appropriate. 'Farmers life' should be plural possessive 'farmers' lives'. 'There is some health disease' should be plural 'there are some health diseases'. 'Because of teen' is unclear; likely meant 'because of it' referring to climate change.

× Yes, I like to visit the other cities because I enjoy the new weather to the other cities. For example, some cities more snowing and some cities. Weather is dry.

✓ Yes, I like to visit other cities because I enjoy the new weather there. For example, some cities have more snow and some cities have dry weather.

'The other cities' should be 'other cities' without 'the' for general reference. 'Enjoy the new weather to the other cities' is incorrect; 'enjoy the new weather there' is correct. 'Some cities more snowing' is incorrect; 'some cities have more snow' is correct. 'Some cities. Weather is dry.' is fragmented and should be combined into a complete sentence.