Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Hãy mô tả cụ thể hơn về hai mùa và cảm nhận của bạn về thời tiết.

Exemplo: I live in a city in the South of Vietnam, where the weather is divided into two main seasons: the dry season and the rainy season. Both seasons have their own unique characteristics, but overall, the weather is quite comfortable.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy giải thích lý do bạn không thích thời tiết lạnh hoặc nóng với ví dụ cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I don't particularly like either cold or hot weather. Since I was born in North Vietnam, I have experienced cold winters, which often bring heavy rain and make me feel uncomfortable.

Sugestão: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu mạch lạc hơn. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lý do bạn thích thời tiết khô và đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu trôi chảy.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it allows me to enjoy many outdoor activities. Both in the north and south of Vietnam, the dry season offers excellent weather and beautiful, romantic scenery.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ tần suất kiểm tra dự báo thời tiết và lý do, đồng thời dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh.

Exemplo: I usually check the weather forecast during the rainy season because heavy rains can happen suddenly. This helps me prepare things like a raincoat and an umbrella before going out.

Sugestão: Bạn cần hoàn thiện câu trả lời và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trình bày rõ ràng về ảnh hưởng của biến đổi khí hậu với ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

Exemplo: I think the most important effect of climate change is that the weather has become very unpredictable. For example, in North Vietnam, winters have become much colder than before.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lý do bạn muốn đến những thành phố có khí hậu khác biệt và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

Exemplo: Of course, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as Vancouver or Tokyo. I want to experience their excellent weather and see snow during the winter.

× The classmate is so special.

✓ The climate is so special.

The word 'classmate' is incorrect in this context; the student likely meant 'climate'. Also, 'climate' is singular and fits the context of weather discussion.

× It divide 2 seasons, dry season and rainy season all.

✓ It divides into 2 seasons, the dry season and the rainy season.

The subject 'It' (referring to climate) is singular, so the verb should be 'divides' (third person singular). Also, 'divide' needs to be followed by 'into' to indicate separation into parts.

× Most of them is so comfortable.

✓ Most of them are so comfortable.

'Most of them' refers to plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I was born in North Vietnam and I have experience about the cold weather in the north of Vietnam.

✓ I was born in North Vietnam and I have experience with the cold weather in the north of Vietnam.

The phrase 'have experience about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with'. The past tense 'was born' is correct here.

× It makes me not too comfortable.

✓ It makes me feel uncomfortable.

The phrase 'not too comfortable' is awkward; 'feel uncomfortable' is a more natural expression.

× For example, in the winter it's heavy rain all day.

✓ For example, in the winter, it rains heavily all day.

'Heavy rain' is a noun phrase; to describe the action, use the verb 'rains' with the adverb 'heavily'.

× And in the north of it, in the north of Vietnam and in the South Vietnam, dry weather is so excellent.

✓ And in the north, in the north of Vietnam and in the south of Vietnam, dry weather is excellent.

The phrase 'in the north of it' is incorrect; 'in the north' or 'in the north of Vietnam' is correct. Also, 'South Vietnam' should be 'the south of Vietnam' for consistency.

× The scenery is so romantic in this.

✓ The scenery is so romantic there.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect here; 'there' refers to the place being discussed.

× I usually check the weather forecast in the rain season because in the rain season there are so many heavy rains immediately and I have to prepare so much before I go out.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast in the rainy season because during the rainy season there is heavy rain frequently and I have to prepare a lot before I go out.

The correct term is 'rainy season' not 'rain season'. 'Immediately' is incorrect here; 'frequently' or 'often' fits better. Also, 'heavy rains' is usually uncountable as 'heavy rain'.

× Suggest a record and umbrella.

✓ I bring a raincoat and an umbrella.

The phrase 'Suggest a record' is incorrect and unclear; likely the student meant 'raincoat'. Also, articles 'a' and 'an' are needed before singular countable nouns.

× I think the most important effect of that is the weather change too much.

✓ I think the most important effect is that the weather changes too much.

The sentence structure is awkward; 'the weather change too much' should be 'the weather changes too much' with subject-verb agreement and proper clause structure.

× For example, in the North Vietnam, the weather is divided for reason.

✓ For example, in North Vietnam, the weather is divided for a reason.

'North Vietnam' does not need 'the'. Also, 'for reason' is incorrect; it should be 'for a reason'.

× But now in the winter it's very, very cold and.

✓ But now, in the winter, it's very, very cold.

The sentence is incomplete and ends with 'and' unnecessarily; it should end properly.

× Of course, I hear that there are so many cities in the world have excellent climate, like Vancouver or Tokyo, so I quite want to go there to enjoy the climate and I want to see the snow in the winter.

✓ Of course, I have heard that there are many cities in the world with excellent climates, like Vancouver or Tokyo, so I really want to go there to enjoy the climate and see the snow in winter.

'I hear' should be 'I have heard' for past experience. 'Cities... have excellent climate' needs 'with excellent climates'. 'Quite want' is awkward; 'really want' is better. 'In the winter' can be simplified to 'in winter'.