Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally good but a bit long and slightly lacks clear linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to keep your answer within 4-5 sentences and use linking words like 'also' or 'however' to improve coherence. Also, avoid redundancy such as 'the weather doesn't change much throughout the year' and 'we enjoy variety of fresh fruits all year around' which could be combined more effectively.

Exemplo: I live in a tropical climate, which is usually hot and humid. During the monsoon season, we get a lot of rain, which helps fresh fruits grow all year round. Also, the weather remains quite consistent throughout the year.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question well but contains some language errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'inrogating' and 'feels me more energetic'. Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, and keep sentences clear and concise. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I can wear cozy clothes and enjoy hot drinks like coffee and tea. Also, the air feels refreshing and energising, which makes me feel more active. Moreover, I love the festive atmosphere during the winter season.

Sugestão: Your answer has good points but is somewhat fragmented and contains incomplete sentences like 'Moreover, heat.' Try to form complete sentences and use linking words such as 'because', 'also', and 'moreover' properly to connect your ideas. Avoid redundancy and ensure clarity in your explanations.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because I love the calming sound of rain, which helps me relax. Also, I enjoy the fresh greenery that appears after the rain. Moreover, during wet weather, I like to eat various snacks while staying cozy indoors.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'Just I make it a habit' and 'for ensuring that I am dressed well'. Try to use natural sentence structures and linking words like 'so' or 'which' to improve flow and clarity.

Exemplo: I make it a habit to check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house. I use an app to see the climate conditions so that I can dress appropriately. This also helps me plan my day better and be prepared for any sudden weather changes.

Sugestão: Your answer is informative but has some grammatical mistakes such as 'climate changes has' and 'leading to loss'. Use correct verb forms and linking words like 'which has led to' to improve accuracy and coherence. Also, try to add a concluding sentence to complete your response.

Exemplo: In recent years, climate change has caused frequent heatwaves and unpredictable weather events like storms and hurricanes, which have impacted ecosystems and led to loss of biodiversity. For example, many animal and plant species are struggling to survive due to these environmental imbalances. This shows how serious the effects of climate change are.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by avoiding repetition such as 'different cities that have different climates'. Use synonyms or rephrase to sound more natural. Also, add linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Definitely, I would love to visit cities with climates different from mine because it allows me to experience new weather conditions and learn how they influence local culture. For example, since I enjoy cold weather, exploring a snowy city would be very exciting for me.

× we enjoy variety of fresh fruits all year around.

✓ we enjoy a variety of fresh fruits all year round.

The phrase 'variety of' requires an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct. Also, 'all year around' should be 'all year round' as the correct idiomatic expression.

× the air feels refreshing and inrogating, which feels me more energetic,

✓ the air feels refreshing and invigorating, which makes me feel more energetic,

The word 'inrogating' is a misspelling of 'invigorating'. Also, 'feels me more energetic' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'makes me feel more energetic' because 'feel' here is a verb that requires 'make' to express causation.

× It is really calming and helping me relax.

✓ It is really calming and helps me relax.

The verb 'helping' is incorrectly used here; it should be in the simple present tense 'helps' to agree with 'It is really calming'. The pronoun usage is correct but the verb form is wrong.

× Moreover, heat. I can enjoy various types of snacks during wet weather.

✓ Moreover, I can enjoy various types of snacks during wet weather.

The word 'heat.' is a fragment and does not connect logically to the sentence. It should be removed to maintain sentence coherence and correct structure.

× Just I make it a habit of checking weather forecast every morning before I leave the house.

✓ I just make it a habit of checking the weather forecast every morning before I leave the house.

The adverb 'just' should come after the subject 'I' for correct word order. Also, 'checking weather forecast' needs the definite article 'the' before 'weather forecast'.

× checking weather forecast every morning before I leave the house.

✓ checking the weather forecast every morning before I leave the house.

The phrase 'weather forecast' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific forecast being checked regularly.

× climate changes has caused frequent heatwaves and unpredictable weather like storms and hurricanes, which impacted the ecosystem and leading to loss of biodiversity.

✓ climate change has caused frequent heatwaves and unpredictable weather like storms and hurricanes, which have impacted the ecosystem and led to loss of biodiversity.

'Climate change' is singular, so 'has' is correct. 'Changes' is plural and incorrect here. Also, 'which impacted' should be 'which have impacted' to agree with plural 'storms and hurricanes'. 'Leading' should be 'led' to maintain past tense consistency.