Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and unclear phrases such as 'that's not umm. Something happens umm'. Also, organize your answer more clearly by directly describing the weather in summer and winter with specific details, and keep your response concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: My hometown in central Vietnam experiences hot and dry summers with occasional rain. In contrast, winters are severe with heavy rainfall, making the weather quite different between seasons.

Sugestão: Avoid unclear phrases like 'during for hot water' and 'we have ace'. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and provide clear reasons for your preference. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I can wear warm clothes like jackets and thermals. On the other hand, hot weather makes me uncomfortable since it's hard to cool down even with air conditioning.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. For example, explain why wet hands make you feel unprofessional and add a concluding sentence to strengthen your response.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because when it's wet, my hands get soaked, which makes me feel unprofessional during meetings. Therefore, dry weather helps me stay comfortable and confident.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words like 'Yeah' and 'you know'. Also, improve sentence structure and grammar, for example, 'have suitable clothes' instead of 'have a suitable clothes'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: I usually don't check the weather forecast regularly. However, whenever I plan to go out, I check it on my phone so that I can dress appropriately for the weather.

Sugestão: Work on grammar and clarity. For example, say 'Climate change has dramatically impacted our weather patterns'. Avoid filler words like 'you know'. Provide more specific examples of severe conditions to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: Climate change has dramatically affected our weather patterns in recent years. As a result, people find it difficult to predict the weather accurately, and we often experience unexpected severe storms or heatwaves.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and grammar, for example, 'cool and dry weather' instead of 'cool and dry weather'. Also, avoid repetition and clarify your reasons for choosing such cities. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Of course, if I have the chance to visit other cities, I would choose ones with cool and dry weather. Since my hometown is hot and dry, visiting a cooler place would be a refreshing change.

× My hometown is in the center of Vietnam, so it is really hot and dry umm in the summer.

✓ My hometown is in the center of Vietnam, so it is really hot and dry in the summer.

The filler word 'umm' is unnecessary and interrupts the sentence flow. Removing it improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Sometimes it rains, but that's not umm.

✓ Sometimes it rains, but that doesn't happen often.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Replacing 'that's not umm' with 'that doesn't happen often' clarifies the meaning and corrects the prepositional usage.

× Something happens umm, quite often and during the winter it is umm, really severe with heavy rain.

✓ Something happens quite often, and during the winter it is really severe with heavy rain.

Removing filler words 'umm' improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think I prefer cold weather because if it's cold then I can dress up a lot of jackets or thermal clothes to keep me warm.

✓ I think I prefer cold weather because if it's cold then I can dress up in a lot of jackets or thermal clothes to keep warm.

The phrase 'dress up a lot of jackets' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'dress up in' when referring to clothing. Also, 'keep me warm' is better as 'keep warm' for natural expression.

× However during for hot water I don't know how to cool myself even though we have ace.

✓ However, during hot weather I don't know how to cool myself even though we have air conditioning.

The phrase 'during for hot water' is incorrect; it should be 'during hot weather'. Also, 'ace' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'air conditioning'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× I prefer dry weather rather than wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather rather than wet weather.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× If I go out during wet weather, my hands will get wet and I don't want to be like that because it makes me feel unprofessional when meeting to other people.

✓ If I go out during wet weather, my hands will get wet and I don't want that because it makes me feel unprofessional when meeting other people.

The phrase 'meeting to other people' is incorrect; the preposition 'to' should be removed. Also, 'I don't want to be like that' is better as 'I don't want that' for clarity.

× I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast.

✓ I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× Yeah, so I can prepare myself what to wear so I can, you know, have a suitable clothes for.

✓ Yeah, so I can prepare myself for what to wear so I can, you know, have suitable clothes.

The phrase 'have a suitable clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural and does not take 'a'. Also, 'prepare myself what to wear' should be 'prepare myself for what to wear' to use the correct preposition.

× The effects of climate change has been impacted our weather patterns dramatically than ever before, especially in recent years.

✓ The effects of climate change have impacted our weather patterns more dramatically than ever before, especially in recent years.

The subject 'effects' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. Also, 'been impacted' is incorrect; 'have impacted' is correct. Adding 'more' before 'dramatically' improves comparison.

× People cannot predict the weather patterns you know correctly.

✓ People cannot predict the weather patterns correctly, you know.

The phrase 'you know' is better placed at the end of the sentence for natural flow. Also, 'you know' is an interjection and should be separated by commas.

× Sometimes they have unexpected severe conditions.

✓ Sometimes they experience unexpected severe conditions.

The verb 'have' is less appropriate here; 'experience' better fits the context of weather conditions.

× Of course, whenever I have a chance to visit other cities, I would choose a city with a cool and dry weather as I mentioned before, because that is the weather conditions I like in my cities.

✓ Of course, whenever I have a chance to visit other cities, I would choose a city with cool and dry weather as I mentioned before, because those are the weather conditions I like in my city.

'A cool and dry weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also, 'that is the weather conditions' should be 'those are the weather conditions' to agree in number. 'My cities' should be 'my city'.

× It is so hot and dry, so it is great to change.

✓ It is so hot and dry, so it is great to have a change.

The phrase 'great to change' is incomplete; adding 'have a change' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.