Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific details. Avoid unclear phrases and grammatical errors. For example, start with 'The weather is mostly sunny throughout the year.' Then explain why you like summer with clear reasons.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is mostly sunny throughout the year. I especially like summer because it brings excitement with many cultural programs and festivals to celebrate.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more natural by directly stating your preference and giving specific reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because it suits my lifestyle better. For example, I can spend more time outdoors and don't need to wear many layers of clothing.

Sugestão: Clarify your preference between dry and wet weather and explain with specific reasons. Avoid confusing or unrelated statements. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable for me. Also, dry conditions help plants and animals in my area to thrive better throughout the year.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast almost every morning because it helps me plan my day effectively.

Sugestão: Provide a clearer explanation with specific examples of climate change effects. Use linking words to organize your answer logically.

Exemplo: Climate change has caused unpredictable weather recently. For instance, it can be sunny in the morning but suddenly rain in the evening, which affects daily life.

Sugestão: Expand your answer with specific reasons and use linking words to make it more natural and effective.

Exemplo: Absolutely, I would like to visit other cities with different climates because it allows me to experience new environments and learn about different cultures and nature.

× Almost I like every day, but even though I like summer because it makes feel excitement to celebrate the cultural programs and.

✓ I like almost every day, but I especially like summer because it makes me feel excited to celebrate the cultural programs.

The sentence has incorrect word order and missing pronouns. 'Almost I like every day' should be 'I like almost every day' to follow correct English word order. 'It makes feel excitement' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes me feel excited' to include the object pronoun and correct verb form.

× I like to surround by hot climate because it's more convenient for lifestyle modifications and it's need to. Special things to do.

✓ I like to be surrounded by a hot climate because it's more convenient for lifestyle modifications and there is no need to do special things.

The phrase 'I like to surround by hot climate' is incorrect; it should be 'I like to be surrounded by a hot climate' to use the passive form correctly. Also, 'it's need to' is incorrect; it should be 'there is no need to' to express the intended meaning.

× I prefer the hot weather because it's provide more humidity in this lifetime and feel very professional in every year from the plant to the animals and human life also, yeah.

✓ I prefer hot weather because it provides more humidity throughout the year and feels very beneficial for plants, animals, and human life.

The verb 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Feel very professional' is incorrect; likely intended meaning is 'feels very beneficial'. Also, 'in this lifetime' and 'in every year' are awkward; 'throughout the year' is more appropriate.

× Actually, almost every day in in the morning I have the habit to check the weather forecast because while I plan my schedule, it's important to take out my plans, so I check it every day.

✓ Actually, almost every morning I have the habit of checking the weather forecast because when I plan my schedule, it's important to consider the weather, so I check it every day.

The phrase 'have the habit to check' should be 'have the habit of checking' to use the correct preposition and gerund form. 'While I plan my schedule' is better as 'when I plan my schedule' for clarity. 'It's important to take out my plans' is unclear; 'consider the weather' is more appropriate.

× Of course, the climate change is very effective more than the last years, because it suddenly changed in every time in the morning there was a sunny, after that evening there was sudden rain come out. So the climate change.

✓ Of course, climate change has become more noticeable in recent years because the weather suddenly changes; in the morning it is sunny, and in the evening sudden rain comes. So, climate change is evident.

'The climate change is very effective' is incorrect; 'climate change has become more noticeable' is better. 'Changed in every time' should be 'changes suddenly'. 'There was a sunny' is incorrect; it should be 'it is sunny'. 'Sudden rain come out' should be 'sudden rain comes'.

× Absolutely. I like to visit other cities because it's get some experience and I love to get bonding with their cultures and nature, that's all.

✓ Absolutely. I like to visit other cities because I can gain some experience and I love to connect with their cultures and nature, that's all.

'It's get some experience' is incorrect; it should be 'I can gain some experience'. 'Get bonding with' is incorrect; 'connect with' or 'bond with' is appropriate. Pronouns and verb forms need correction for clarity and grammar.