Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like mentioning "Four Seasons" and then listing them again. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say "The weather in Kathmandu is moderate and pleasant throughout the year. It is humid and hot in summer, but pleasant during spring and autumn. Winters are mild and not too cold."

Exemplo: The weather in Kathmandu is moderate and pleasant throughout the year. It is humid and hot in summer, but pleasant during spring and autumn. Winters are mild and not too cold.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words like "because" and "so" properly. Also, avoid redundancy and improve vocabulary, for example, use "inactive" instead of "unactive". Try to make your answer more natural and fluent.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I can wear layers to keep warm. On the other hand, hot weather makes me feel lazy and unproductive, so I tend to stay inactive at home.

Sugestão: Your answer has some errors and unclear expressions. For example, "Muslim season" seems to be a mistake for "monsoon season." Also, avoid short, incomplete sentences like "so I hate." Use linking words and provide more specific reasons to improve coherence and clarity.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because I dislike getting wet, especially during the monsoon season. It is inconvenient to get wet when I go outside, so I find wet weather uncomfortable.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by combining sentences and using correct grammar. For example, use "I don't have a habit of checking the weather forecast regularly, but I check it sometimes to choose my clothes and stay alert for rain." Also, avoid sentence fragments.

Exemplo: I don't have a habit of checking the weather forecast regularly, but I check it sometimes to choose my clothes and stay alert for rain.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be more detailed and coherent. Use linking words like "for example" and "also" properly. Try to add more specific effects and explain them briefly to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: There are many effects of climate change recently. For example, rising temperatures have reduced snowfall on mountains, and this has also caused water levels to rise.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be more natural by combining sentences and avoiding repetition. For example, say "Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates, especially places with extremely cold weather to experience snow and freezing temperatures."

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates, especially places with extremely cold weather to experience snow and freezing temperatures.

× Well, the weather in Kathmandu is moderate and pleasant throughout the year, including Four Seasons, spring, summer, autumn and winter.

✓ Well, the weather in Kathmandu is moderate and pleasant throughout the year, including the four seasons: spring, summer, autumn, and winter.

The phrase 'Four Seasons' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun. Also, 'four seasons' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' and a colon is appropriate before listing them. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I get really unactive during home.

✓ I get really inactive at home.

The word 'unactive' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'inactive'. Also, the preposition 'during' is not used with 'home'; the correct preposition is 'at' to indicate location.

× I dislike Muslim season.

✓ I dislike the monsoon season.

The phrase 'Muslim season' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or misspelling of 'monsoon season', which refers to the rainy season. Correcting this improves meaning and clarity.

× It's really inconvenient to get wet when I go out, so I hate.

✓ It's really inconvenient to get wet when I go out, so I hate it.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'so I hate.' which is incomplete. Adding 'it' completes the sentence and clarifies what is hated.

× I don't have a constant habit of checking the weather forecast, but I do check them sometimes, not very often.

✓ I don't have a constant habit of checking the weather forecast, but I do check it sometimes, not very often.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect because 'weather forecast' is singular. The correct pronoun is 'it'.

× To choose my clothes accordingly and stay alerted when there's possibility of raining.

✓ To choose my clothes accordingly and stay alert when there's a possibility of rain.

The phrase 'stay alerted' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'stay alert'. Also, 'possibility of raining' should be 'possibility of rain' and needs the article 'a' before 'possibility'.

× Firstly, it has decreased the snows on mountains due to rise in temperature and also increased the water level.

✓ Firstly, it has decreased the snow on the mountains due to the rise in temperature and has also increased the water level.

The word 'snows' is generally uncountable and should be 'snow'. Also, 'mountains' should be preceded by 'the' to specify. Adding 'has' before 'also increased' maintains parallel verb structure.