Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn nên trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi và tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "But to be honest, well". Bạn nên mô tả cụ thể hơn về thời tiết để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: The weather in my village is quite harsh, with very cold winters and hot summers.

Sugestão: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói rõ hơn về lý do bạn thích thời tiết lạnh. Hãy sử dụng câu có cấu trúc rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I can stay indoors comfortably, sleep longer, and watch TV with my friends.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "getting, get or sleeping on wet surface" và "white weather". Hãy chú ý sử dụng từ đúng và câu rõ ràng hơn.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities. For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet. Also, dry weather makes it easier to plan outdoor activities and travel.

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ như "dress opportunities" không đúng ngữ cảnh. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trôi chảy hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house. It helps me dress appropriately and plan my day better. For example, if it's going to rain, I always remember to bring an umbrella.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp các ví dụ cụ thể về tác động của biến đổi khí hậu.

Exemplo: I think climate change has caused many problems in my country, such as floods, storms, and even earthquakes.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và diễn đạt ý muốn khám phá văn hóa và du lịch các thành phố khác nhau.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates because I want to explore their culture and meet local people. I also enjoy traveling to new places both in my country and abroad.

× I think I prefer cold weather because in winter I I can do everything at home like I can over sleep overtime and watching TV with my friends and at home.

✓ I think I prefer cold weather because in winter I can do everything at home like oversleeping, working overtime, and watching TV with my friends at home.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and redundancy. 'I I' is repeated, 'over sleep overtime' is incorrect; it should be 'oversleeping' and 'working overtime' to maintain parallel structure with 'watching TV'. Using gerunds after 'like' is appropriate here.

× I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities. For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting, get or sleeping on wet surface.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities. For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or slipping on wet surfaces.

The phrase 'getting, get or sleeping on wet surface' is incorrect. It should be 'getting wet' and 'slipping on wet surfaces' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'wet surface' should be plural 'wet surfaces' to generalize the condition.

× Additionally, the white weather makes it easier to plan outdoor, even in travel.

✓ Additionally, the white weather makes it easier to plan outdoor activities, even when traveling.

The phrase 'white weather' is likely a mistake for 'dry weather'. Also, 'plan outdoor' is incomplete; it should be 'plan outdoor activities'. 'Even in travel' should be 'even when traveling' for correct adverbial phrase.

× The forecast Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I leave the house and I find it very helpful because it allows me to dress opportunities and plan my day better.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I leave the house, and I find it very helpful because it allows me to dress appropriately and plan my day better.

The original sentence has misplaced 'The forecast Yes' which is confusing. Also, 'dress opportunities' is incorrect; it should be 'dress appropriately' to convey the intended meaning.

× I think it's he attacked my country and like it has a lot of attention like flood, storm and earthquake.

✓ I think it has affected my country and has caused a lot of problems like floods, storms, and earthquakes.

The phrase 'it's he attacked my country' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'it has affected my country'. Also, 'like flood, storm and earthquake' should be pluralized and clarified as 'like floods, storms, and earthquakes'.

× Jazz I really like. I love visiting other cities because I want to explore the culture in their people or local people here and I love to to travel around with my country to no country other country.

✓ I really like jazz. I love visiting other cities because I want to explore the culture and meet local people. I also love to travel around my country and to other countries.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Jazz I really like' should be 'I really like jazz.' The phrase 'explore the culture in their people or local people here' is confusing; it should be 'explore the culture and meet local people.' The last part is corrected for clarity and grammar.