Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and avoid redundancy. Try to combine ideas smoothly and use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: The weather in my area is mostly hot and humid, but from November to February, it becomes cold and dry, so we experience both extremes throughout the year.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and has some repetition. Make sure to finish your thoughts and avoid repeating words. Also, provide more specific reasons to support your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I can wear fashionable clothes and enjoy outdoor activities comfortably, unlike in summer when the heat can be overwhelming.

Sugestão: Your answer has some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and correct in your sentence structure, and use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather since it allows me to go outside without worrying about getting wet, making outdoor activities more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition and incomplete phrases. Be sure to express your ideas clearly and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Exemplo: I don't check the weather forecast daily, but during the monsoon season, I usually check it regularly to know when it will rain.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some redundancy and awkward phrasing. Use precise vocabulary and linking words to make your points clearer.

Exemplo: Climate change has affected the Earth in many ways; for instance, summers have become longer, while winters are getting colder each year.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar phrases and use linking words to improve flow.

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because it offers insight into how people live differently and experience diverse cultures.

× I generally prefer the cold weather because in in winter season I can wear the fashionable clothes, whatever I like to wear and also it is very easy to go out.

✓ I generally prefer the cold weather because in the winter season I can wear fashionable clothes, whatever I like to wear, and also it is very easy to go out.

The phrase 'in in winter season' contains a repeated preposition 'in' and lacks the definite article 'the' before 'winter season'. The correct form is 'in the winter season'. Also, 'the fashionable clothes' should be 'fashionable clothes' without 'the' because it refers to clothes in general, not specific ones.

× I generally prefer dry weather because it can because you can go outside without getting worried about of getting wet.

✓ I generally prefer dry weather because you can go outside without worrying about getting wet.

The phrase 'worried about of getting wet' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'about' followed directly by the gerund 'getting'. Also, 'getting worried about of' is redundant; it should be 'worrying about'.

× No, I don't have a habit of checking the weather forecast every day, but during the month of monsoon, I usually check the weather forecast for RE for checking the rainy days.

✓ No, I don't have a habit of checking the weather forecast every day, but during the monsoon season, I usually check the weather forecast to know the rainy days.

The phrase 'for RE for checking the rainy days' is unclear and redundant. It should be simplified to 'to know the rainy days' to clarify the purpose of checking the forecast. Also, 'month of monsoon' is better expressed as 'monsoon season'.

× Climate change has impacted the earth in very in many various ways.

✓ Climate change has impacted the earth in many various ways.

The phrase 'in very in many various ways' contains redundant and misplaced words. The correct phrase is 'in many various ways' or better yet 'in many different ways'. The extra 'very in' is incorrect and should be removed.

× Yes, I would love to visit their cities that have different weather from my hometown because it gives me a perspective of how other cultures and other people live their day-to-day life and how their life is different from ours.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit other cities that have different weather from my hometown because it gives me a perspective of how other cultures and people live their day-to-day lives and how their lives are different from ours.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used to refer to cities; it should be 'other cities' instead of 'their cities'. Also, 'day-to-day life' should be pluralized to 'day-to-day lives' to match 'other people'. Similarly, 'their life' should be 'their lives' to agree in number with 'other people'.