Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, organise your answer to be clearer and more concise, for example, mention the weather changes in a logical order and avoid repeating similar ideas.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is quite changeable. It can suddenly start raining, then quickly become sunny again. Overall, it's often wet and quite hot.

Sugestão: Avoid informal expressions like 'gross' in formal speaking tests. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and be more concise.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I tend to sweat easily in hot weather, especially during summer. This makes me feel uncomfortable, so cooler temperatures suit me better.

Sugestão: Work on grammar, especially sentence structure and verb usage. Also, provide more specific details and use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because dry weather causes my skin to react badly. For instance, I often get allergic reactions and pimples when the air is too dry.

Sugestão: Avoid informal language like 'Yo' and repeated words. Also, structure your answer clearly with linking words and correct grammar.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning as part of my routine. I do this to see if it will rain so that I can decide whether to bring an umbrella.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide more specific examples.

Exemplo: I believe the climate has become much hotter recently due to increased greenhouse gases. This has caused glaciers to melt, which negatively affects animals like polar bears.

Sugestão: Avoid informal language such as 'Yeah' and 'I love'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more precise in your explanation.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I think different climates influence people's lifestyles, and visiting such places would allow me to explore new cultures and ways of living, which I find very interesting.

× It suddenly started to raining in an instant, and then it goes to sunny and it's quite wet and really, really hot.

✓ It suddenly started raining in an instant, and then it goes sunny and it's quite wet and really, really hot.

The verb 'start' should be followed by the gerund form 'raining' not the infinitive 'to raining'. Also, 'goes to sunny' is incorrect; it should be 'goes sunny' or 'becomes sunny'. Here, 'goes sunny' is used to keep the original style.

× and then it goes to sunny and it's quite wet and really, really hot.

✓ and then it goes sunny and it's quite wet and really, really hot.

The phrase 'goes to sunny' is incorrect; the verb 'go' when describing weather changes is followed directly by an adjective without 'to'. So, 'goes sunny' is correct.

× I prefer wet weather 'cause my skin is can't suffer from the dry weather.

✓ I prefer wet weather 'cause my skin can't suffer from dry weather.

The modal verb 'can't' should not be combined with 'is'. The correct form is 'my skin can't suffer'. Also, 'the dry weather' can be simplified to 'dry weather' for general statements.

× It will have some allergic reaction and will break out of pimples.

✓ It will have some allergic reactions and will break out in pimples.

The phrase 'break out of pimples' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'break out in pimples'. Also, 'allergic reaction' should be plural 'allergic reactions' to match 'some'.

× Yo, I'd like to check check.

✓ Yo, I'd like to check the weather.

The phrase 'check check' is unclear and incorrect. It should specify what is being checked, e.g., 'check the weather'.

× I usually check it before I hang out and I will check whether it's raining.

✓ I usually check it before I hang out, and I check whether it's raining.

Using 'will' here is unnecessary because the action is habitual. Present simple 'check' is appropriate for habitual actions.

× Should I bring some umbrella?

✓ Should I bring an umbrella?

The modal verb 'should' is correctly used for asking advice, but the article before 'umbrella' should be 'an' because 'umbrella' starts with a vowel sound.

× I think the climate become much more hotter than before because there are too many greenhouse gases and it will cause it will lead to some melting glaciers which will affect the living of the polar bear.

✓ I think the climate has become much hotter than before because there are too many greenhouse gases, and this will lead to melting glaciers which will affect the lives of polar bears.

The verb 'become' should be in present perfect 'has become' to indicate change over time. 'Much more hotter' is incorrect; 'much hotter' suffices. 'It will cause it will lead' is redundant; 'this will lead' is better. 'Living of the polar bear' should be 'lives of polar bears' for plural and natural expression.

× Yeah, definitely. I love 'cause I think different climates in different countries, they will affect people's living style.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I love it because I think different climates in different countries affect people's lifestyles.

The pronoun 'they' is unnecessary and breaks sentence flow. 'Living style' should be plural 'lifestyles'. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness.

× And I can explore the new cultures and living style like in different countries, which is really interesting.

✓ And I can explore new cultures and lifestyles in different countries, which is really interesting.

The phrase 'the new cultures and living style like in different countries' is awkward. Removing 'the' and 'like' and pluralising 'lifestyle' improves clarity and correctness.