Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi số nhiều không đúng (seasons -> season). Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I live in Ho Chi Minh City, which has only two seasons: the dry season and the rainy season. Currently, we are in the rainy season, and the rain is very heavy, especially in the evening. Because of this, I often have difficulty driving home after work.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'refer the hot weather'. Hãy trình bày rõ ràng sở thích và lý do kèm theo ví dụ cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to enjoy outdoor activities under the sun. In contrast, cold weather makes me feel freezing and inactive, which I find quite boring.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ như 'moistured' không đúng. Hãy dùng từ phù hợp và câu rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because places with water tend to have a more balanced temperature—not too hot or too cold. I find the atmosphere more comfortable and refreshing in such conditions.

Sugestão: Bạn nên tránh dùng các cụm từ không chính thức như 'you know' trong bài thi. Ngoài ra, hãy sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và câu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I rarely check the weather forecast because I don't have much free time after a long working day. I prefer to relax rather than spend time on it. However, if I have plans to go out, I sometimes check the forecast quickly on my phone.

Sugestão: Bạn cần hoàn thiện câu trả lời, tránh để câu bị dang dở. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trúc ngữ pháp đúng, đồng thời cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và liên kết ý rõ ràng.

Exemplo: In recent years, climate change has made the weather hotter and more unpredictable. For example, we often experience extreme heat waves and heavy rains, which negatively affect daily life. Additionally, pollution in the air and water has worsened these problems.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp như 'dialect' dùng sai nghĩa. Hãy trình bày ý tưởng rõ ràng, dùng từ chính xác và câu mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because they have unique features. For example, I often choose to visit mountainous areas with cold weather, which is very different from the hot climate of big cities. This change makes me feel refreshed and enjoy the experience.

× I am currently living in Ho Chi Minh City which only have two season, the dry season and the rain seasons.

✓ I am currently living in Ho Chi Minh City which only has two seasons, the dry season and the rainy season.

The subject 'Ho Chi Minh City' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'season' should be plural 'seasons' because there are two. 'Rain seasons' should be 'rainy season' to correctly describe the season.

× This rain so hard especially in the evening.

✓ The rain is so hard especially in the evening.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to link the subject and adjective. 'This rain' should be 'The rain' for natural expression. 'So hard' is an adjective phrase describing the rain, so it needs a linking verb.

× So basically I always have to suffer while driving after work under the rain.

✓ So basically, I always have to suffer while driving in the rain after work.

The phrase 'under the rain' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the rain'. Also, adding a comma after 'So basically' improves sentence clarity.

× From my preference I refer the hot weather because I can do outdoor activities under the sun and field one.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I can do outdoor activities under the sun and in the field.

'From my preference I refer' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I prefer'. 'Field one' is unclear and should be 'in the field' to indicate location.

× When I was in the cold my body is just freezing so I cannot do anything which kind of very boring.

✓ When I am in the cold, my body just freezes so I cannot do anything, which is kind of very boring.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the statement is general, present tense 'am' and 'freezes' should be used. Also, 'which kind of very boring' needs 'is' to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer wet weather. I enjoy some places with water it make the temperature is more balanced, not too hot but not too cold.

✓ I prefer wet weather. I enjoy some places with water because they make the temperature more balanced, not too hot but not too cold.

'It make' is incorrect; 'places' is plural, so the verb should be 'make'. Also, 'the temperature is more balanced' should be 'the temperature more balanced' to fit the sentence structure.

× I believe the atmosphere is more moistured so it is feel more comfortable to me as I prefer that.

✓ I believe the atmosphere is more moist, so it feels more comfortable to me as I prefer that.

'Moistured' is not a correct adjective; 'moist' is appropriate. 'It is feel' is incorrect; it should be 'it feels'. The sentence also needs a comma before 'so'.

× I rarely check the weather forecast just because I am not, you know, have.

✓ I rarely check the weather forecast just because I don't, you know, have time.

The phrase 'I am not, you know, have' is ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'I don't have' to indicate lack of something, presumably time.

× I don't have any much free time after a long working day.

✓ I don't have much free time after a long working day.

'Any much' is incorrect; 'much' alone is sufficient with negative sentences to indicate quantity.

× Additionally, pollution in the air or in the water has.

✓ Additionally, pollution in the air and in the water has increased.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Adding 'has increased' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes, of course, I believe it is like the unique feature of that places which very interesting because you for example, I usually choose to go to dialect.

✓ Yes, of course, I believe it is like the unique feature of those places which is very interesting. For example, I usually choose to go to the highlands.

'That places' should be 'those places' to match plural noun. 'Which very interesting' needs 'is' to be correct. 'You for example' is unclear and should be separated. 'Dialect' is incorrect in this context; likely meant 'highlands' or 'mountainous area'.

× It is the mountainous area with the cold weather.

✓ It is a mountainous area with cold weather.

'The mountainous area' implies a specific known area; 'a mountainous area' is more appropriate here. 'The cold weather' should be 'cold weather' as a general description.

× Usually I don't have the cold weather in a big city.

✓ Usually, I don't experience cold weather in a big city.

'I don't have the cold weather' is unnatural; 'experience cold weather' is a better collocation. Also, 'cold weather' is uncountable, so no article is needed.

× So yeah, it just make you feel more enjoyable and refreshing.

✓ So yeah, it just makes you feel more enjoyable and refreshed.

'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Feel more enjoyable' is incorrect; 'feel more enjoyable' describes the person, but 'feel more refreshed' is correct. 'Refreshing' is an adjective describing things, not feelings.