Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific details about the weather. For example, mention the typical temperature or seasons.

Exemplo: I live in Antalya, Turkey, where the weather is generally sunny and hot due to its location near the Mediterranean Sea. Summers are long and warm, while winters are mild and short.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to organize your ideas logically and avoid repeating the same point. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy swimming and spending time at the sea. Summer allows me to relax outdoors and appreciate beautiful views, which makes me feel happy.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' correctly. Provide specific reasons and avoid awkward phrasing.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because I used to live in a rainy area. When the weather is dry, my hair and skin become very dry, which is uncomfortable for me.

Sugestão: Try to speak more fluently and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use correct verb tenses and sentence structure. Be clear and concise in your answer.

Exemplo: I check the weather forecast every day because I go outdoors regularly. Knowing the weather helps me plan my activities better.

Sugestão: Work on grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas clearly. Use linking words to explain your points logically. Provide specific examples of climate change effects.

Exemplo: I believe climate change has caused negative effects worldwide. For example, seasons have become unpredictable, with summers and winters starting later than usual, which affects agriculture and daily life.

Sugestão: Improve sentence flow and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about why you want to visit and what you expect.

Exemplo: I would like to visit Ecuador because it has a warm and hot climate, which I enjoy. I am especially interested in exploring the Amazon forest, although I would need to wear appropriate clothing for the environment.

× I live in in Antalya, Turkey and the weather is generally sunny because my country is geopolitical location is the middle of earth so generally weather is hot.

✓ I live in Antalya, Turkey, and the weather is generally sunny because my country's geopolitical location is in the middle of the earth, so the weather is generally hot.

The phrase 'in in Antalya' contains a repeated preposition 'in'. Also, 'my country is geopolitical location' is incorrect; it should be 'my country's geopolitical location'. The phrase 'middle of earth' needs the definite article 'the' before 'earth'. Additionally, 'generally weather is hot' should be 'the weather is generally hot' to maintain correct word order and article usage.

× I prefer hot weather because I'm a summer person and I love to swimming and I love to go to sea and watching Admirable View.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I'm a summer person and I love swimming, and I love to go to the sea and watch the admirable view.

After 'love', when expressing likes, the verb can be followed by either the gerund or the infinitive, but it must be consistent. 'Love to swimming' is incorrect; it should be 'love swimming' or 'love to swim'. Also, 'go to sea' needs the definite article 'the' before 'sea'. 'Watching Admirable View' should be 'watch the admirable view' to use the base verb form after 'love to' and include the definite article.

× So I I'm a summer person. How to I love hot weather, but I love to.

✓ So, I'm a summer person. I love hot weather, and I love it.

The sentence 'How to I love hot weather, but I love to.' is ungrammatical and unclear. It seems to be a fragmented or misconstructed sentence. It should be corrected to clear, complete sentences expressing the intended meaning.

× I prefer wet weather because I used to live in a wet weather and however when one was dry weather my hair or my skin is so dry and I don't like this so I prefer wet weather.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I used to live in a wet climate, and when the weather was dry, my hair and my skin became very dry, which I don't like, so I prefer wet weather.

The phrase 'live in a wet weather' is incorrect; 'weather' is uncountable and not used with 'a'. 'Wet climate' or 'wet weather conditions' is more appropriate. Also, 'when one was dry weather' is incorrect; it should be 'when the weather was dry'. 'My hair or my skin is so dry' should be 'my hair and my skin became very dry' for correct conjunction and verb agreement.

× I, uh, checking the weather forecast every day because I'm, uh, go outdoor every day. So, uh, I have to, I know what's the weather today, uh, because I, umm, associated with, I, we're associated with weather.

✓ I check the weather forecast every day because I go outdoors every day. So, I have to know what the weather is today because I am associated with the weather.

The sentence 'I, uh, checking' is incorrect; the verb should be in simple present tense 'I check'. 'I'm, uh, go outdoor' is incorrect; it should be 'I go outdoors'. 'I have to, I know what's the weather today' is awkward and ungrammatical; it should be 'I have to know what the weather is today'. The phrase 'I, umm, associated with, I, we're associated with weather' is unclear and ungrammatical; it should be simplified to 'I am associated with the weather'.

× I think bad effects for all world because the weather is not become subsequently and summer late coming or winter late coming and the climate is very change.

✓ I think there are bad effects for the whole world because the weather is not consistent, and summer or winter comes late, and the climate is changing a lot.

'Bad effects for all world' should be 'bad effects for the whole world' with the definite article 'the' and correct quantifier. 'The weather is not become subsequently' is incorrect; it should be 'the weather is not consistent'. 'Summer late coming or winter late coming' should be 'summer or winter comes late'. 'The climate is very change' should be 'the climate is changing a lot'.

× Maybe I will visit Ecuador because the Ecuador weather is generally warm and hot and I love hot weather and the I visit Amazon forest but I must wear suitable for this place.

✓ Maybe I will visit Ecuador because the weather in Ecuador is generally warm and hot, and I love hot weather. I will visit the Amazon forest, but I must wear suitable clothes for this place.

'The Ecuador weather' should be 'the weather in Ecuador'. 'The I visit Amazon forest' is incorrect; it should be 'I will visit the Amazon forest' to express future intention. 'I must wear suitable for this place' is incomplete; it should be 'I must wear suitable clothes for this place'.