Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“South of China”应为“the south of China”，并且句子结构应更自然流畅。可以适当增加连接词，使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: I live in the south of China, where the summers are hot and humid, but the winters are mild and comfortable.

Sugestão: 时态使用不当，“preferred”应为“prefer”。句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词。

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because I can't stand the cold; it makes me feel freezing, which is very uncomfortable.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“dry weathers”应为“dry weather”。表达不够清晰，建议简化句子并使用恰当的词汇。

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because in wet weather, my skin feels sticky and uncomfortable, which I don't like.

Sugestão: 语法和表达错误较多，如“have habits of”应为“have a habit of”，“checked”应为“check”。句子结构混乱，建议简化并使用正确时态。

Exemplo: Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast every night. It helps me decide what to wear the next day.

Sugestão: 句子不完整且语法错误严重，如“climate change and love”应为“climate change lately”，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子并明确观点。

Exemplo: In recent years, climate change has caused summers to become hotter, which is harmful to outdoor workers.

Sugestão: 表达不流畅且有语法错误，如“it's I like to go”应为“I would like to go”，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子并使用正确的语法。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit northern China because it has a different climate, which is cooler and less humid than where I live.

× I live in South of China and this area is very hot and damp in summer but not very cold in winter, so it's actually comfortable.

✓ I live in the south of China and this area is very hot and damp in summer but not very cold in winter, so it's actually comfortable.

“South of China”前面需要加定冠词“the”，表示特指中国的南部地区。

× Actually I preferred hot weather because I can't stand of the cold weather which made me freezing and this feeling is terrible.

✓ Actually I prefer hot weather because I can't stand the cold weather which makes me freezing and this feeling is terrible.

“preferred”应改为一般现在时“prefer”，因为表达的是现在的喜好；“can't stand of”中“of”多余，应去掉；“made”应改为一般现在时“makes”，与现在时态保持一致。

× Uh, I prefer dry, dry weathers and uh, I need to drink more water and in dry weather, but in wet weather there's just something like something disgusting stink in your skins and that feeling is so bad.

✓ Uh, I prefer dry, dry weather and uh, I need to drink more water in dry weather, but in wet weather there's just something like a disgusting stink on your skin and that feeling is so bad.

“weathers”应为不可数名词“weather”；“something disgusting stink”前应加冠词“a”；“in your skins”应改为“on your skin”，因为“skin”不可数且用介词“on”。

× Yes, I have habits of checking the weather's forecast. I checked the weather forecasting everyday night and it's it's helped me to depend what I need to dress tomorrow mornings and what's weathers in the next day and I shouldn't.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast. I check the weather forecast every night and it helps me decide what I need to wear tomorrow morning and what the weather will be like the next day.

“have habits of”应为“have the habit of”；“weather's forecast”应为“weather forecast”；“checked”应为一般现在时“check”；“everyday night”应为“every night”；“helped me to depend”应改为“helps me decide”；“dress”应改为“wear”；“tomorrow mornings”应为“tomorrow morning”；“what's weathers”应为“what the weather will be like”；“and I shouldn't”句子不完整，应删除。

× The climate change and love in recent years, especially in summer, it's become hotter and it's not benefits for the workers who working on the outdoor and.

✓ Climate change has occurred in recent years, especially in summer; it has become hotter and it's not beneficial for workers who work outdoors.

“The climate change and love”应为“Climate change has occurred”；“it's become”应为“it has become”；“it's not benefits”应为“it's not beneficial”；“workers who working”应为“workers who work”；“on the outdoor”应为“outdoors”；句子末尾不完整，应删除“and”。

× Yes, actually it's I like to go to the north of China or something, have different climate and I want to try someplace that have different weathers, which means no, so damp and hot.

✓ Yes, actually I like to go to the north of China or somewhere that has a different climate, and I want to try someplace that has different weather, which means not so damp and hot.

“it's I like”应为“I like”；“have different climate”应为“has a different climate”；“someplace that have different weathers”应为“someplace that has different weather”；“weathers”应为不可数名词“weather”；“no, so damp and hot”应为“not so damp and hot”。