Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且信息组织不够清晰。建议注意时态一致性，使用更准确的词汇，并且避免句子结构重复。

Exemplo: The weather in my city has changed a lot recently. Summers have become hotter, while winters are colder. It often rains during the summer, which makes the weather feel quite comfortable.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，词汇使用不当。建议简化句子，明确表达喜好原因，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because I can enjoy eating ice cream, swinging, and wearing light clothes that I can't wear in winter. Also, I often catch a cold during the cold season, so I feel better in hot weather.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议使用更准确的表达方式，逻辑更清晰，避免重复和错误。

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes it hard for clothes to dry. Also, the floors get slippery, which can cause people to fall easily.

Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达检查天气预报的习惯和原因。

Exemplo: Yes, I often check the weather forecast before going out because it helps me decide what clothes to wear and whether I need to bring an umbrella.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误和词汇使用不当，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词，丰富细节，表达更自然。

Exemplo: In recent years, I think the climate has changed a lot. Summers have become hotter, winters colder, and air pollution has worsened.

Sugestão: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，明确表达想去不同气候城市的原因，并注意语法正确。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates because I rarely see snow in my city, and I want to experience it.

× In the city that I live, the weather change a lot near this year.

✓ In the city that I live, the weather changes a lot near this year.

主语是单数的"weather"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"changes"，这里属于单复数问题。

× The summers become hotter and the winter becomes colder.

✓ The summers become hotter and the winters become colder.

"summers"是复数，动词用复数形式"become"；"winter"应与"summers"保持一致，改为复数"winters"，以匹配句意。

× Sometimes it's raining in the summer.

✓ Sometimes it rains in the summer.

这里描述习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，不能用进行时。

× I prefer hot weather because I can eat ice cream, swing and wear the lines close that I can't wear it in the winter compared with the cold weather.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I can eat ice cream, swing and wear the light clothes that I can't wear in the winter compared with the cold weather.

"lines close"应为"light clothes"，且"clothes"是复数，不能用"it"指代，应省略。

× I often catch a cold during that season so I feel much.

✓ I often catch a cold during that season so I feel bad.

"feel much"表达不正确，应使用形容词"bad"来描述感觉。

× I like dry weather better because in the wet weather the clothes are not easiest be dry and the floor will have a lot of water and it's made a lot of people have a cart easily.

✓ I like dry weather better because in wet weather the clothes are not easy to dry and the floor will have a lot of water which makes many people slip easily.

"easiest"用错，应为"easy"；"be dry"应改为不定式"to dry"；"it's made a lot of people have a cart easily"表达不通，改为"which makes many people slip easily"。

× Yeah, I often check the weather forecast before I go out because it depends the clothes, what I wear and depend I if should catch the umbrella go out.

✓ Yeah, I often check the weather forecast before I go out because it depends on the clothes I wear and whether I should take an umbrella when I go out.

"depends"后应加介词"on"；"depend I if"结构错误，应改为"whether I should"；"catch the umbrella"应为"take an umbrella"。

× In recent year, I think the climate has a big change in the summers becomes hotter and the winter becomes colder and the air pollution is more heavy.

✓ In recent years, I think the climate has changed a lot; the summers have become hotter and the winters have become colder, and the air pollution is heavier.

"year"应为复数"years"；"has a big change"表达不自然，改为"has changed a lot"；"summers"和"winters"应为复数，动词用复数形式；"more heavy"应为比较级"heavier"。

× Yes, because I really want to see the snow, but in my city I seldom see the snow in every season so I very want to visit other city to fill different climate it will.

✓ Yes, because I really want to see snow, but in my city I seldom see snow in any season, so I really want to visit other cities to experience different climates.

"the snow"前不需要冠词，且"snow"不可数；"every season"改为"any season"更合适；"other city"应为复数"other cities"；"fill different climate it will"表达不通，改为"experience different climates"。