Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary for clarity and naturalness. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word usage. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: I live in a tropical climate, so the weather is quite unpredictable. Sometimes it's hot and sunny for a long time, but it can suddenly start raining.

Sugestão: Make the answer more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of sports you enjoy.

Exemplo: I prefer hot and sunny weather because it allows me to play outdoor sports like football, basketball, and volleyball comfortably.

Sugestão: Avoid negative expressions like 'I hate both' which can be confusing. Use clearer sentence structures and linking words to explain your preference.

Exemplo: Although I don't like extreme weather, I prefer dry weather because it feels more comfortable to live in dry areas than in wet ones.

Sugestão: Clarify your answer by directly stating your habit and frequency. Use linking words and correct vocabulary to explain why you check the forecast.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning because it helps me avoid bad weather and prepare properly before going outside.

Sugestão: Focus on clear and coherent sentences. Avoid repetition and incorrect word usage. Provide specific effects of climate change with linking words.

Exemplo: Climate change has had a significant effect on our environment. For example, rising temperatures and extreme weather events have made people's lives more difficult.

Sugestão: Improve sentence clarity and vocabulary. Use linking words to explain your reasons and provide specific examples of what you want to explore.

Exemplo: Of course, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy exploring new places. Experiencing a different climate would be unforgettable and interesting.

× No, I live in the topic climate area so that the weather here is very unstable.

✓ No, I live in a tropical climate area, so the weather here is very unstable.

The phrase 'topic climate area' is incorrect; it should be 'tropical climate area'. Also, 'so that' is incorrectly used; 'so' is appropriate here to indicate cause and effect.

× Sometimes it will sun hot and hot a long time, but they can train to rain immediately.

✓ Sometimes it will be hot and sunny for a long time, but it can rain immediately.

The pronoun 'it' should be used consistently to refer to the weather. 'They' is incorrect here. Also, 'sun hot and hot a long time' is ungrammatical; it should be 'be hot and sunny for a long time'. 'Train' is a misspelling of 'rain'.

× I prefer the hot and sunny weather because I love to play sport outside or the hot weather is more perfect for me to play sport so that football, basketball and volleyball.

✓ I prefer hot and sunny weather because I love to play sports outside, and hot weather is better for me to play sports like football, basketball, and volleyball.

'Play sport' should be 'play sports' as it refers to multiple sports. 'More perfect' is incorrect; 'better' is appropriate. 'So that' is incorrectly used; 'and' or 'because' fits better here.

× I hate both of them but if I had to choose, I will choose the dry weather because I think it is more comfortable when we live in the dry area rather than wet ones.

✓ I hate both of them, but if I had to choose, I would choose dry weather because I think it is more comfortable to live in a dry area rather than a wet one.

The conditional sentence requires 'would' instead of 'will' after 'if I had to choose'. Also, 'the dry weather' and 'the wet ones' should be 'dry weather' and 'a wet one' for generalization and singular/plural agreement.

× Just because taking the focus is very good source in my daily life 'cause it's helped me avoid the bad weather before I plan to go outside.

✓ I check the weather forecast because it is a very good source in my daily life; it helps me avoid bad weather before I plan to go outside.

'Taking the focus' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'check the weather forecast'. Also, 'cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because' or omitted. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Climate changes have determined of a effect on our environment due to the climate change, the the increase in the political environment is the people's human life is much more difficult.

✓ Climate change has had an effect on our environment. Due to climate change, the increase in environmental problems has made people's lives much more difficult.

'Climate changes' should be 'climate change' as an uncountable noun. 'Determined of a effect' is incorrect; 'has had an effect' is correct. 'The the' is a typo. 'Political environment' is likely incorrect; 'environmental problems' fits better. 'People's human life' should be 'people's lives'.

× Of course, because I love to explore the new things, so that traveling to the anatomy and why the climate there is a very unforgettable and interesting experience.

✓ Of course, because I love to explore new things, so traveling to different places with different climates is a very unforgettable and interesting experience.

'The new things' should be 'new things' without 'the'. 'So that' is incorrectly used; 'so' or 'therefore' fits better. 'Traveling to the anatomy and why the climate there' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be 'traveling to different places with different climates'.