Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu đầy đủ hơn và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Bạn nên thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn để mô tả thời tiết và cảm xúc của bạn.

Exemplo: The weather in Ho Chi Minh City is usually hot and humid. There are two main seasons: the sunny season and the rainy season. I prefer the rainy season because it brings a refreshing atmosphere, and I have fond memories of riding my bicycle with friends in the rain after school.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và chính xác hơn để diễn đạt sở thích của bạn.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable. Hot weather makes me feel tired and irritable, while cold weather helps me stay refreshed and energetic.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và sử dụng từ chính xác (ví dụ: 'wet sweater' nên là 'wet weather'). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và có cấu trúc mạch lạc hơn với các liên từ phù hợp.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because my skin is very dry, and humidity helps keep it moisturized. I like both hot and cold weather when they are accompanied by some moisture in the air.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn về tần suất kiểm tra dự báo thời tiết và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast regularly, especially before work. Since my job involves organizing events and filming, knowing if it will rain or be too hot helps me plan better.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm từ đúng (ví dụ: 'personality' nên là 'personally'). Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn.

Exemplo: Personally, I believe that rapid population growth is one of the main causes of climate change. As more people demand resources, pollution increases and environmental damage becomes more severe.

Sugestão: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'uh' và câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Exemplo: I am not very keen on visiting cities with climates very different from mine because I have sensitive skin and find it hard to adapt to unfamiliar weather conditions.

× The weather usually humid and hot all the time in Ho Chi Minh City.

✓ The weather is usually humid and hot all the time in Ho Chi Minh City.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' which is necessary to form a complete sentence. Adding 'is' corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.

× There are two types of weather in this city, sunny and rainy seasons.

✓ There are two types of weather in this city: sunny and rainy seasons.

A colon is more appropriate than a comma to introduce the list of weather types. This improves clarity and correctness in punctuation.

× Actually, I prefer rainy season in which I vividly remember the memories when I and my friend rode a bicycle in rain after school in the rain on the streets.

✓ Actually, I prefer the rainy season, during which I vividly remember when my friend and I rode a bicycle in the rain after school on the streets.

The phrase 'I and my friend' is incorrect; the correct order is 'my friend and I'. Also, 'in rain' should be 'in the rain'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I love Dallas City, the foggy, as well as the tropical area in Vietnam.

✓ I love Dallas City, the foggy one, as well as the tropical area in Vietnam.

The adjective 'foggy' needs a noun to modify; adding 'one' clarifies the meaning. This corrects the adjective usage.

× The atmosphere is really cool, which means I prefer cold weather.

✓ The atmosphere is really cool, so I prefer cold weather.

Using 'which means' is less appropriate here; 'so' better connects the cause and effect in this context.

× The hotter the weather is, the more the tired and grumpier I am.

✓ The hotter the weather is, the more tired and grumpier I am.

The article 'the' before 'tired' is unnecessary and incorrect. Removing it corrects the adjective usage.

× It is easier to get warmer more than trying to cool down in the hot seasons in my perspective.

✓ In my perspective, it is easier to get warmer than to try to cool down in the hot seasons.

The phrase 'get warmer more than trying' is awkward. Reordering and correcting the comparison structure improves clarity and grammar.

× I think I prefer wet sweater because my skin type is extremely dry and I need the humidity for moisturizing my skin.

✓ I think I prefer wet weather because my skin type is extremely dry and I need the humidity to moisturize my skin.

'Wet sweater' is incorrect; it should be 'wet weather'. Also, 'for moisturizing' is better expressed as 'to moisturize' for purpose.

× I prefer the combinations between hot cold, hot weather with wet weather and cold with wet weather.

✓ I prefer combinations of hot and cold weather, hot weather with wet weather, and cold weather with wet weather.

The original sentence has awkward conjunctions and missing words. Correcting conjunctions and adding missing words improves clarity.

× Yeah, yes I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

Using both 'Yeah' and 'yes' together is redundant. Choosing one modal verb expression is clearer and more appropriate.

× If it's rainy, it will be such a serious problem for some sorts of events, while the challenges for filming day results from the hot weather.

✓ If it's rainy, it will be a serious problem for some types of events, while the challenges on filming days result from the hot weather.

The phrase 'some sorts of events' is awkward; 'some types of events' is better. Also, 'filming day' should be plural and preposition corrected to 'on filming days'.

× Personality I believe that one of the main cause of climate change in these recent years is the rapid growth of the populations.

✓ Personally, I believe that one of the main causes of climate change in recent years is the rapid growth of the population.

'Personality' is incorrect; it should be 'Personally'. 'Cause' should be plural 'causes' to agree with 'one of the'. 'Populations' should be singular 'population'.

× As the number of people increase, there are is more demand for resources which leads to higher pollution level and greater the environmental damage.

✓ As the number of people increases, there is more demand for resources, which leads to higher pollution levels and greater environmental damage.

Subject-verb agreement: 'number' is singular, so 'increases' is correct. 'There are is' is incorrect; 'there is' is correct. 'Pollution level' should be plural 'pollution levels'. 'Greater the environmental damage' is incorrect; 'greater environmental damage' is correct.

× Well, I'm not really keen on visiting cities and with their very different climates from where I live because I find it hard to adapt to unfamiliar weather conditions, uh, due to my sensitive skin types.

✓ Well, I'm not really keen on visiting cities with climates very different from where I live because I find it hard to adapt to unfamiliar weather conditions due to my sensitive skin type.

The conjunction 'and' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Skin types' should be singular 'skin type' to match the subject. Removing filler words improves clarity.