Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid minor grammatical errors and improve fluency by using more natural expressions. For example, say "play outdoor activities" as "do outdoor activities" or "play outdoor sports." Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

Exemplo: The weather in my city is quite unpredictable; it can be sunny one moment and then suddenly rain a few minutes later. This changeable weather often makes it difficult to do outdoor activities.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant with good reasons. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly, such as "because" and "however". Also, avoid repeating similar words like "makes me" twice in one sentence by rephrasing.

Exemplo: I don't really prefer either cold or hot weather because cold weather makes me feel sleepy and tired during the day, whereas hot weather makes me uncomfortable as I sweat a lot.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing parts. Try to organise your ideas logically and avoid irrelevant or unclear details. Also, check grammar and sentence structure, for example, "dry day" should be "dry days" and "cause pain" should be "causes pain." Focus on clear, specific reasons for your preference.

Exemplo: To be honest, I don't prefer either dry or wet weather. Dry weather makes my skin feel very dry and uncomfortable, sometimes even painful when I move, while wet weather can be inconvenient for daily activities.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Avoid repeating "check in the weather forecast" twice. Also, improve sentence flow by using linking words and correct prepositions, for example, say "check the weather forecast on my phone."

Exemplo: Yes, I often check the weather forecast on my phone before going out to see if I need to bring an umbrella and to know how hot it will be.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct verb forms. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. For example, explain how climate change causes hotter summers and colder winters, leading to more frequent use of air conditioning or heating.

Exemplo: Due to climate change, summers have become much hotter, so I use the air conditioner more often. In winter, it gets very cold, which also means I need to use heating frequently.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains confusing phrases like "I need to lay" and "I need to leave." Try to express your reasons clearly and use correct vocabulary. Also, provide more specific reasons and avoid vague statements. For example, explain your commitments and why you prefer your city despite the weather.

Exemplo: I don't want to visit other cities because I have to study and stay at home. I like my city even though the weather can be cold or hot sometimes.

× This unsettled weather often makes it difficult to play outdoor activities.

✓ This unsettled weather often makes it difficult to play outdoor activities.

The phrase 'play outdoor activities' is incorrect because 'play' is typically used with games or sports, not 'activities' in general. However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes listed in the problem type list, and this is more a lexical choice than a grammar error, no correction is made here.

× I often check in the weather forecast and when I want to go out I will check in the weather forecast in my phone and to make sure if I need to bring an umbrella and how hot it is.

✓ I often check the weather forecast and when I want to go out I will check the weather forecast on my phone to make sure if I need to bring an umbrella and how hot it is.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'check' and 'weather forecast'. The correct preposition is 'check the weather forecast' (no preposition) and 'on my phone' instead of 'in my phone'. This is a common preposition error.

× In summer the weather is become very hot, so at the time I use the air condition need more frequent and in the in the winter is very cold and also the time I use the air condition is very frequent.

✓ In summer the weather has become very hot, so at that time I need to use the air conditioner more frequently, and in winter it is very cold and also the times I use the air conditioner are very frequent.

The phrase 'is become' is incorrect; the present perfect 'has become' is appropriate to indicate a change over time. 'Air condition' should be 'air conditioner'. 'Need more frequent' is incorrect; it should be 'need to use the air conditioner more frequently'. Also, 'in the in the winter' is redundant and should be 'in winter'. The verb agreement and tense usage are corrected here.

× I don't want to visit other cities because I need to lay, I need to study and I need to leave.

✓ I don't want to visit other cities because I need to lie down, I need to study and I need to leave.

The verb 'lay' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'lie down' when referring to reclining oneself. 'Lay' requires a direct object, but here the student means to recline, so 'lie down' is correct.

× I think my city is good although the weather is become cold and become hot.

✓ I think my city is good although the weather has become cold and hot.

The phrase 'is become' is incorrect; the present perfect 'has become' is appropriate to indicate a change over time. Also, 'become cold and become hot' is redundant; 'has become cold and hot' suffices.