Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Use present tense since you currently live there, and avoid filler phrases like 'You know'. Also, add a linking phrase to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I live in Nanning, the capital of Guangxi Province, where the weather is extremely hot and humid throughout the year.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but contains repetition and minor grammar errors. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, clarify your reasons with specific examples.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy outdoor activities like surfing and skateboarding; cold weather limits my ability to do these things.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Focus on answering directly, avoid filler words, and use correct vocabulary. Explain why you prefer dry weather with specific reasons and examples.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it helps clothes and blankets dry faster, making it easier to keep things clean.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and informal expressions. Use more formal language and avoid repeating words. Also, organize your answer with linking words for clarity.

Exemplo: I don't often check the weather forecast because the weather in my city changes quickly; it can be sunny one moment and rainy the next, so I always carry an umbrella just in case.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the topic but has grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct verb tenses and vocabulary, and provide specific examples to support your points.

Exemplo: Climate change leads to global warming, which causes ice to melt in the Northeast. This threatens many animals and puts some species at risk of extinction.

Sugestão: Your answer is enthusiastic but contains unclear and incorrect phrases. Use clear and grammatically correct sentences, and explain your feelings with specific reasons.

Exemplo: Definitely. Last summer, I visited Singapore, which has a different climate from my city. The experience was exciting because it was my first time visiting a tropical city, and I enjoyed the warm weather and vibrant culture.

× I lived in Nanning, the capital of Guangxi Province.

✓ I live in Nanning, the capital of Guangxi Province.

The question asks about the current weather where the student lives, so the present tense 'live' should be used instead of the past tense 'lived' to indicate current residence.

× It has it has limits for me to do outdoor activities.

✓ It limits me from doing outdoor activities.

The original sentence is repetitive and awkward. The corrected sentence uses a clearer structure to express that cold weather restricts outdoor activities.

× I prefer drive at the you know, dry weather always motivates us to watch our clothes and watch our quiz or blankets.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it always motivates us to dry our clothes and quilts or blankets.

The phrase 'prefer drive at the' is incorrect and unclear. Also, 'watch our clothes' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'dry our clothes'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects preposition and verb usage.

× So I always take, take take umbrella handy.

✓ So I always keep an umbrella handy.

The original sentence misuses 'take' and lacks an article before 'umbrella'. The correction uses 'keep' and adds the article 'an' to make the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× Climate change causes global warming and global warming caused caused the ice melt in the Northeast area, so it can be a threatened for many, many animals and become an endanger.

✓ Climate change causes global warming, and global warming causes the ice to melt in the Northeast area, so it can be a threat to many animals and cause them to become endangered.

The sentence incorrectly repeats 'caused' and mixes tenses. Also, 'a threatened' and 'become an endanger' are incorrect noun and adjective forms. The correction uses present tense for ongoing facts and correct noun forms 'threat' and 'endangered'.

× Definitely. Last summer I went to Singapore and the experience really excites me because Singapore is the 1st place I came to resolving her.

✓ Definitely. Last summer I went to Singapore and the experience really excited me because Singapore is the first place I visited abroad.

The verb tense should be past 'excited' to match 'went'. '1st' should be spelled out as 'first'. The phrase 'came to resolving her' is incorrect and unclear; it is corrected to 'visited abroad' to convey the intended meaning.