Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer wa chotto fukuzatsu sugite, UK no tenki ni tsuite no kotae ga nakute, hanashi ga todomatte imasu. Motto shizen de, chokusetsu UK no tenki ni kotaete, setsumei o tsukeru koto ga taisetsu desu. Mata, bun no nagasa wa 5 bun ni osae, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai.

Exemplo: The weather in the UK where I live is usually rainy and cool. However, in summer, it can be quite warm and sunny. In contrast, Japan often experiences hot and sunny weather, but also typhoons during summer.

Sugestão: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, kurikaeshi ya fukuzatsu na kotoba ga arimasu. Motto shizen na eigo de, jisho teki na kotoba o tsukatte, setsumei o shite kudasai. Mata, rikai o tasukeru tame ni, rensetsu-shi o tsukatte kudasai.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because I can enjoy outdoor activities like swimming in the pool or going to the sea during summer. Therefore, hot weather makes me feel happy and active.

Sugestão: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, bunpou to eigo no shizen-sa o koujou suru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'my face is so dry and my hair is so bad' wa motto shizen ni 'my skin and hair become dry and damaged' nado to iemasu. Mata, rensetsu-shi o tsukatte setsumei o tsukeru to yoi desu.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because in dry weather, my skin and hair become dry and damaged. Therefore, wet weather helps me keep my skin and hair healthy.

Sugestão: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, bunpou no machigai ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'my parents checking' wa 'my parents check' ni shite kudasai. Mata, motto shizen na eigo de kotae, rensetsu-shi o tsukatte setsumei o tsukeru koto ga taisetsu desu.

Exemplo: I usually don't check the weather forecast myself. However, sometimes I watch it with my parents when they check the weather on TV.

Sugestão: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, bunpou to eigo no shizen-sa o koujou suru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'bad effects of climate change' wa 'negative effects of climate change' to iemasu. Mata, rensetsu-shi o tsukatte, motto seikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

Exemplo: I think climate change has negative effects on older people because the weather suddenly becomes very hot or cold, making it difficult for them to manage their health.

Sugestão: Kotae wa fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. 'Other climate country' wa 'countries with different climates' to iimasu. Mata, bun no nagasa o 5 bun ijou ni shinai you ni shite, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit countries with different climates because Japan is very hot in summer and very cold in winter. I prefer mild temperatures like in autumn. For example, California has such a climate.

× I think Japan is always sunny and hot but in summer it comes typhoon so it always.

✓ I think Japan is always sunny and hot but in summer typhoons come often.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it comes typhoon' which is not proper English structure. The verb 'come' should be used with the plural noun 'typhoons' and placed correctly in the sentence. The phrase 'so it always' is incomplete and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses the present tense appropriately.

× I don't check the weather forecast but sometimes my parents checking the weather on TV.

✓ I don't check the weather forecast but sometimes my parents check the weather on TV.

The verb 'checking' is incorrectly used here; it should be the base form 'check' after 'my parents' as the subject. The original sentence lacks proper subject-verb agreement and verb form.

× I think for older people, bad effects of climate change because recently suddenly hot or suddenly cold, so they can't control their body conditions.

✓ I think climate change has bad effects on older people because recently the weather suddenly becomes hot or cold, so they can't control their body conditions.

The original sentence lacks a main verb and proper sentence structure. The correction adds the verb 'has' and clarifies the sentence to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I would like to visit other climate country because Japan is too hot in summer and too cold in winter, so I want to like in autumn temperatures.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other countries with different climates because Japan is too hot in summer and too cold in winter, so I want to live in autumn-like temperatures.

The phrase 'other climate country' is incorrect; it should be 'other countries with different climates.' Also, 'I want to like in autumn temperatures' is incorrect; it should be 'I want to live in autumn-like temperatures.' The correction improves adjective and noun usage and clarifies the meaning.