Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer has some good points but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'a city very that is close to the sea' and 'Just like a person change boots'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and keep sentences concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: The weather in my city is quite humid during summer because Hong Kong is close to the sea. In contrast, winters are very cold and sometimes feel freezing. Therefore, the weather can be quite unpredictable throughout the year.

Sugestão: Your answer shows your preference clearly but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases such as 'Scars' and 'Terry's'. Try to use correct vocabulary and link your ideas smoothly. Keep your sentences natural and avoid unnecessary pauses.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather, especially in winter, because I enjoy wearing warm clothes like scarves, which I find comfortable and stylish. Hot weather often makes me feel sweaty and less energetic, so I feel more relaxed and refreshed in the cold.

Sugestão: Your answer is short and has some unclear parts like 'a more comfort. Wait for me'. Try to give more specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid fragmented sentences and check your pronunciation of words like 'comfort'.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather to wet weather because I dislike feeling sweaty. Since I enjoy winter, dry weather feels more comfortable and pleasant for me.

Sugestão: Your answer has some good ideas but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions like 'in a predictable' and '2/3 directly'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer phrases. Also, organize your answer logically with linking words.

Exemplo: I don't always check the weather forecast because the weather in Hong Kong is usually humid and somewhat predictable. I always bring an umbrella when I go out. However, if I have important plans, I check the forecast two or three times to be sure.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and fully. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid fragmented sentences. Also, use appropriate vocabulary related to climate change.

Exemplo: I think climate change has become very serious in recent years because many countries are experiencing hotter temperatures. If people do not change their habits, it could lead to severe damage to the Earth.

Sugestão: Your answer shows your interest but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'Animals in. Ecosystem. He has.' Try to use complete sentences and link your ideas smoothly. Also, provide more specific reasons or examples to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: I would love to visit cities with very cold weather. For example, I want to visit Iceland because I have heard the weather there is freezing, and I would like to see the unique animals and ecosystems.

× The weather in my city is quite humid in the summer time because Hong Kong is a city very that is close to the sea.

✓ The weather in my city is quite humid in the summertime because Hong Kong is a city that is very close to the sea.

The phrase 'very that is close to the sea' has incorrect word order. The correct order is 'a city that is very close to the sea'. Also, 'summertime' is one word. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Therefore the weather could be set to be unpredictable.

✓ Therefore, the weather can be unpredictable.

The phrase 'could be set to be unpredictable' is awkward and incorrect. Using 'can be unpredictable' is clearer and grammatically correct to express possibility.

× Just like a person change boots.

✓ It's just like a person changing boots.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper verb form. Adding 'It's' and changing 'change' to 'changing' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× I prefer cold weather, specially in winter because I enjoy wearing.

✓ I prefer cold weather, especially in winter because I enjoy wearing warm clothes.

The word 'specially' is incorrect here; 'especially' is the correct adverb to indicate preference. Also, the sentence is incomplete without specifying what is enjoyed wearing.

× Warm clothes like. Scars which I find comfortable and stylish and contrast how weather can be uncomfortable and Terry's It makes me feel sweaty and less energetic.

✓ Warm clothes like scarves, which I find comfortable and stylish, contrast with how hot weather can be uncomfortable and tiring. It makes me feel sweaty and less energetic.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains spelling errors ('Scars' should be 'scarves', 'Terry's' should be 'tiring'). Correcting these and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× I prefer dry weather over wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather to wet weather.

The correct preposition to express preference is 'to' rather than 'over' in this context.

× As mentioned, I like winter an I hate the feeling of being sweaty.

✓ As mentioned, I like winter and I hate the feeling of being sweaty.

The word 'an' is a typo and should be 'and' to connect the two clauses properly.

× And therefore dry weather could be a more comfort. Wait for me.

✓ Therefore, dry weather could be more comfortable for me.

'Comfort' is a noun; the adjective 'comfortable' is needed here. Also, 'Wait for me' is unrelated and should be removed.

× I'm not a person who always check the weather forecast because in Hong Kong it is.

✓ I'm not a person who always checks the weather forecast because in Hong Kong it is humid.

The verb 'check' should be 'checks' to agree with the singular subject 'who'. Also, the sentence was incomplete; adding 'humid' completes the thought.

× The weather is always humid in a predictable and therefore I will always bring an umbrella when I go outdoors.

✓ The weather is always humid and unpredictable, so I always bring an umbrella when I go outdoors.

The phrase 'in a predictable' is incorrect; it should be 'unpredictable'. Also, restructuring the sentence improves clarity.

× However, if I have important plans, I will also check the weather for this twice, 2/3 directly.

✓ However, if I have important plans, I will also check the weather forecast two or three times directly.

The phrase 'for this twice, 2/3 directly' is unclear and ungrammatical. Clarifying it as 'two or three times directly' makes the meaning clear.

× I think Clement change. Has become very serious in the recent years because.

✓ I think climate change has become very serious in recent years because

'Clement change' is a misspelling of 'climate change'. Also, the sentence was fragmented; combining the parts corrects the structure.

× Nowadays, every country is becoming hotter.

✓ Nowadays, every country is becoming hotter.

This sentence is correct in present continuous tense to describe an ongoing trend; no correction needed.

× And if people still don't change their habit to Earth food? Destroy.

✓ And if people still don't change their habits, the Earth will be destroyed.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting 'habit' to 'habits' and completing the sentence clarifies the meaning.

× I would love to visit other cities that has a very cold weather.

✓ I would love to visit other cities that have very cold weather.

The relative pronoun 'that' refers to 'cities' (plural), so the verb should be 'have' not 'has'. Also, 'weather' is uncountable and does not need 'a'.

× Aside from Hong Kong, for example, I would like to visit Iceland because I heard the weather there was freezing and I would like to see.

✓ Aside from Hong Kong, for example, I would like to visit Iceland because I heard the weather there is freezing and I would like to see

The sentence ends abruptly and mixes past and present tense. Changing 'was' to 'is' maintains present relevance, but the sentence is incomplete and needs continuation.

× Animals in. Ecosystem. He has.

✓ the animals in its ecosystem.

The original is fragmented and unclear. Combining into 'the animals in its ecosystem' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.