Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response about the weather, use complete sentences, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

Exemplo: I live in Canada, where the weather changes a lot. It can be quite cold in winter and warm in summer, which I find suitable because I enjoy experiencing different seasons.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and pronunciation, and by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be specific about activities you enjoy in each weather.

Exemplo: I have mixed feelings about the weather; I enjoy both cold and hot days. For example, in cold weather, I like to stay indoors and read books while drinking hot coffee. On the other hand, warm weather allows me to go outside and visit places like nearby hill stations.

Sugestão: Your answer shows good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect your points and complete your sentences. Also, specify activities you do in each weather type.

Exemplo: I prefer both dry and wet weather for different reasons. In dry weather, I enjoy playing outdoor games like cricket with my friends. However, during wet weather, I like to stay indoors and spend quality time with my family or read books.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons for checking the forecast.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning and evening. This helps me prepare for the day, such as deciding whether to take an umbrella or apply sunscreen if it's going to be hot.

Sugestão: Your answer touches on important points but lacks clarity and coherence. Focus on explaining the effects of climate change clearly, use linking words, and avoid vague phrases.

Exemplo: Climate change has caused more extreme weather events recently. For example, global warming leads to higher temperatures, and deforestation reduces the number of trees that absorb carbon dioxide, which worsens the problem.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using clearer sentence structure and more precise vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates from mine. Exploring new weather conditions is exciting, and I also enjoy discovering unique shops and cultures in those places.

× I live in Canada currently so I like the.

✓ I live in Canada currently, so I like it.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used here. The pronoun 'it' should be used to refer to the weather or situation previously mentioned. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.

× For better.

✓ It is better.

'For better' is a fragment and not a complete sentence. It needs a subject and verb to form a complete sentence, such as 'It is better.'

× Suitable for me because at that time there's not too.

✓ It is suitable for me because at that time there's not too much.

The phrase 'not too' is incomplete and needs a quantifier like 'much' to complete the meaning.

× Call not too much thought so that weather is like for survival and we can meet the heat and the cold.

✓ There is not too much cold, so the weather is suitable for survival and we can handle the heat and the cold.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect word usage. 'Call' should be 'cold', and the sentence structure needs to be corrected for clarity and proper adjective use.

× At home.

✓ At home.

This fragment lacks context and connection to the previous sentence. It should be combined with the previous sentence or expanded to form a complete thought.

× Well I have a mixture opinion, I prefer both cold and hot brother.

✓ Well, I have a mixed opinion; I prefer both cold and hot weather.

'Mixture opinion' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'mixed opinion'. Also, 'brother' is likely a mispronunciation or error and should be 'weather'.

× However in the hot weather we can get a chance to go outside such as an BJ's Hill stations.

✓ However, in hot weather, we can get a chance to go outside to places such as hill stations.

The phrase 'such as an BJ's Hill stations' is incorrect. 'BJ's' is unclear and likely a mishearing. 'Hill stations' is plural and should not have 'an' before it. Prepositions and articles are corrected for clarity.

× I have a mixed feeling so I prefer both dry and the wet weather.

✓ I have mixed feelings, so I prefer both dry and wet weather.

'A mixed feeling' should be plural 'mixed feelings' to express a general sentiment. Also, 'the wet weather' should be 'wet weather' without 'the'.

× Horsley in the dry weather.

✓ Honestly, in dry weather,

'Horsley' is a mispronunciation of 'Honestly'. Also, 'in the dry weather' should be 'in dry weather' for general statements.

× I can go outside with my friends for. Playing games such As for cricket cetera

✓ I can go outside with my friends to play games such as cricket, etc.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'For. Playing games' should be 'to play games'. 'Such As for cricket cetera' should be 'such as cricket, etc.' for proper listing.

× Well in bad weather I can spend my time with my family members by or by reading books at my.

✓ Well, in bad weather, I can spend my time with my family members or by reading books at home.

The phrase 'by or by reading books at my' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'or by reading books at home' to complete the thought and correct preposition use.

× Definitely, I'm a big fan of checking the weather forecast every day in the morning and also during the night time because like it is good for me to make myself available before going to work like how the weather it is.

✓ Definitely, I'm a big fan of checking the weather forecast every morning and at night because it helps me prepare before going to work by knowing how the weather is.

The sentence is wordy and contains unnecessary words like 'like'. Modal verb usage is implied in 'helps me prepare'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper tense.

× Do I need to take umbrella with me or sometime it will be hott so I'm aware like to put some sunscreen lotions or?

✓ I check if I need to take an umbrella with me or if it will be hot, so I'm aware to put on some sunscreen lotion.

The original sentence is a question but used incorrectly. It should be a statement about checking the need for an umbrella or sunscreen. 'Hott' is corrected to 'hot', and 'sunscreen lotions' to 'sunscreen lotion'.

× To be honest, there are several reasons which effects the climate change in recent years.

✓ To be honest, there are several reasons which affect climate change in recent years.

The verb 'effects' is incorrect here; it should be 'affect' to agree with the plural subject 'reasons'. 'Climate change' is uncountable and does not need 'the'.

× Due to that like people would like to do the things which is advanced and technology curve.

✓ Due to that, people would like to do things that are advanced and related to the technology curve.

'The things' should be 'things' without 'the' for general reference. 'Which is' should be 'that are' to agree with plural 'things'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× Also, the deforestation cutting down more and more trees would also affect the climate changes.

✓ Also, deforestation, cutting down more and more trees, would affect climate change.

'The deforestation' is incorrect; 'deforestation' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. 'Climate changes' should be 'climate change' as a singular uncountable noun.

× Of course, I would like to visit other places that have the different kind of climates from as compared to my city where I am leaving right now, because it is very good to explore the other cities weather also the things because sometimes it's a different separate different kinds of stores there.

✓ Of course, I would like to visit other places that have different kinds of climates compared to my city where I am living right now, because it is very good to explore other cities' weather and things, as sometimes there are different kinds of stores there.

'The different kind of climates' should be 'different kinds of climates' without 'the'. 'Leaving' is corrected to 'living'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pluralization.