Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer has some good points but needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to avoid unclear phrases like 'I can't re fluctuates fishing' and use correct vocabulary such as 'freezy' should be 'freezing'. Also, organize your answer with linking words to make it coherent.

Exemplo: The weather where I live changes throughout the year. In summer, it is very hot with high temperatures. During winter, it becomes freezing cold. Moreover, the rainy season brings heavy rainfall.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has some grammar mistakes and repetition. Avoid repeating words like 'because because' and use correct verb forms such as 'I am' instead of 'I were'. Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather rather than hot weather because hot weather is very humid and dehydrates me. On the other hand, cold weather feels peaceful, and I enjoy riding my bike when it's cold.

Sugestão: Your answer has many unclear phrases and grammar errors. For example, 'tribe later' should be 'dry weather', and 'clothes, the sues' is confusing. Try to use simple and correct vocabulary and structure your answer clearly with linking words.

Exemplo: Between dry and wet weather, I prefer dry weather because the environment feels charming and vibrant. Also, my clothes stay clean. However, wet weather makes it difficult to go outside and complete planned activities due to frequent rain.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by correcting grammar and using more natural expressions. For example, say 'I check the weather forecast' instead of 'watch the weather updates'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast whenever I plan an outdoor trip or travel to distant places. It helps me understand the weather and road conditions before my journey.

Sugestão: Your answer covers important points but needs clearer structure and vocabulary. Avoid repeating 'global warming' and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, use correct phrases like 'due to overpopulation' instead of 'goes to'.

Exemplo: Climate change is caused by factors like overpopulation and global warming. These have changed climate patterns, causing extreme temperatures and continuous rainfall in recent years.

Sugestão: Your answer has some unclear and incomplete sentences. For example, 'Nepal is.' is incomplete, and 'list minimal amount' should be 'a minimal amount'. Also, avoid repeating 'to' in 'visit to Canada'. Use linking words to improve flow.

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit other cities with different climates. I live in Nepal, where the climate is mild with very little snowfall. I want to visit Canada to experience heavy snowfall because I enjoy snow.

× Actually the weather and I can't re fluctuates fishing all the weather conditions, specifically on the summer season it's very hot and the climatic temperature is very high.

✓ Actually, the weather fluctuates in all conditions. Specifically, in the summer season, it's very hot and the temperature is very high.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper structure. 'I can't re fluctuates fishing all the weather conditions' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction simplifies and clarifies the meaning by separating ideas into clear sentences and using correct verb forms.

× Winter is very freezy.

✓ Winter is very freezing.

The word 'freezy' is incorrect. The correct adjective to describe very cold weather is 'freezing'.

× And in rainy season, there is a high intensities of rainfall.

✓ And in the rainy season, there is a high intensity of rainfall.

'There is' should be followed by a singular noun. 'Intensities' is plural, so it should be 'intensity' to agree with 'there is'. Also, 'rainy season' needs the definite article 'the'.

× because because hot weather is extremely humid and it's dehydrates me.

✓ because hot weather is extremely humid and it dehydrates me.

The phrase 'it's dehydrates me' is incorrect. 'It' is the subject and 'dehydrates' is the verb; 'it's' (it is) should not be used here. Also, the repeated 'because' is redundant.

× Every time I were in cold weather.

✓ Every time I am in cold weather.

The verb 'were' is past tense and incorrect here. The sentence refers to habitual action, so present tense 'am' is appropriate.

× The weather seems very peaceful and I love to ride a bike in my cold weather.

✓ The weather seems very peaceful and I love to ride a bike in cold weather.

The phrase 'in my cold weather' is incorrect; 'my' is unnecessary and unnatural here. 'In cold weather' is the correct expression.

× In this two different category of whether I prefer the tribe later, because the environment is very charming and vibrant and the clothes, the sues would also not get dirty during the driver.

✓ In these two different categories of weather, I prefer the dry weather because the environment is very charming and vibrant and the clothes also do not get dirty during the dry weather.

Several errors: 'this' should be 'these' for plural; 'category' should be plural 'categories'; 'whether' should be 'weather'; 'tribe later' is incorrect, should be 'dry weather'; 'sues' is unclear, likely 'shoes' or 'clothes'—assumed 'clothes'; 'driver' should be 'dry weather'. Also, verb agreement corrected.

× However, during the wet weather, we cannot go due to the inconsistent rainfall, we cannot achieved plan task and activities.

✓ However, during the wet weather, we cannot go due to inconsistent rainfall, and we cannot achieve planned tasks and activities.

The sentence is a run-on and uses incorrect verb forms: 'achieved' should be 'achieve'; 'plan task' should be 'planned tasks'. Also, conjunction 'and' is added to connect clauses properly.

× Yes, whenever I'm planning an outdoor tour on to reach a longer destinations, I prefer to watch the weather updates on the weather a lot.

✓ Yes, whenever I'm planning an outdoor tour to reach longer destinations, I prefer to watch the weather updates a lot.

'on to reach' is incorrect; 'to reach' is correct. 'a longer destinations' is incorrect; 'longer destinations' without 'a' is correct. 'watch the weather updates on the weather a lot' is redundant; simplified to 'watch the weather updates a lot'.

× It helps me to guide through the different weather condition and the road condition before my long route.

✓ It helps me to navigate through the different weather conditions and road conditions before my long route.

'Guide through' is incorrect; 'navigate through' is better. 'condition' should be plural 'conditions' to match 'different'. Also, 'the road condition' should be plural 'road conditions'.

× It definitely goes to the overpopulation, overcrowding and the global warming which has resulted in a climate change.

✓ It is definitely due to overpopulation, overcrowding, and global warming, which have resulted in climate change.

'It definitely goes to' is incorrect; 'It is definitely due to' is correct. 'the global warming' should be 'global warming' without 'the'. 'has' should be 'have' to agree with plural subject 'overpopulation, overcrowding, and global warming'.

× The global warming and the temperature effect has changed the pattern of the climate.

✓ Global warming and temperature effects have changed the pattern of the climate.

'The global warming' should be 'global warming' without 'the'. 'temperature effect' should be plural 'temperature effects' to match context. 'has' should be 'have' to agree with plural subject.

× With the climate getting extremely hot sometimes, extremely cold sometimes, and very continuous rainfall.

✓ The climate is sometimes extremely hot, sometimes extremely cold, and there is very continuous rainfall.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb. The correction provides a complete sentence with proper conjunctions and verb.

× Yes, I specifically love to visit other cities. Nepal is. I currently live in Nepal and the current climate in Nepal is very neutral where there is a list minimal amount of snowfall.

✓ Yes, I specifically love to visit other cities. I currently live in Nepal, and the current climate in Nepal is very mild, with a minimal amount of snowfall.

'Nepal is.' is a fragment and unclear. 'very neutral' is incorrect; 'very mild' is appropriate. 'a list minimal amount' is incorrect; 'a minimal amount' is correct.

× And I would love to visit to Canada to experience more amount of snowfall because I love snowball.

✓ And I would love to visit Canada to experience a greater amount of snowfall because I love snowballs.

'visit to Canada' should be 'visit Canada'. 'more amount of snowfall' should be 'a greater amount of snowfall'. 'snowball' should be plural 'snowballs'.