Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer provides relevant information but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and correct articles (e.g., "there are no four seasons" instead of "there is no four season"). Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: I live in Houston, Texas, where the weather is tropical, hot, and humid most of the year. We don't experience four distinct seasons; instead, it's summer about 80% of the time and a mild spring for the rest. The spring season is not very pronounced here.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas more smoothly and by correcting minor errors (e.g., "Houston RCM" is unclear). Also, try to be more specific about your preferences and reasons.

Exemplo: It depends on where I live. When I lived in New York, I preferred sunny and bright tropical weather, so I often vacationed on islands. However, now that I live in Houston, I enjoy visiting the Colorado mountains to experience cold winters with snow.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and explain your preferences clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid incomplete thoughts.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it allows me to go outside, enjoy the sun, and get my vitamin D while walking along the trail. On the other hand, wet weather keeps me indoors, especially if it lasts for several days.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but is somewhat disorganized and contains incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use linking words, and avoid repetition for a more natural response.

Exemplo: I usually work indoors, so I don't check the weather often. However, before I go for a two-mile walk on the trail, I always check the forecast because there is no shortcut back, and I need to be prepared.

Sugestão: Your answer shows thoughtful opinion but is fragmented and has some awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and linking words to express your ideas more clearly and coherently.

Exemplo: Honestly, I find it difficult to decide because scientists have different opinions about climate change. However, since this topic is complex, I believe it's better to be cautious and choose to live in an environmentally friendly way.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by correcting minor errors and combining short sentences for better flow. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because I live in Houston, Texas, where summer lasts most of the year. Experiencing all four seasons, especially autumn in Stowe, Vermont, would be an unforgettable experience.

× The weather is tropical here, very hot and humid an there is no four season.

✓ The weather is tropical here, very hot and humid and there are no four seasons.

The conjunction 'an' is incorrect and should be 'and'. Also, 'there is' should be 'there are' because 'four seasons' is plural. 'Season' should be plural as well.

× It is summer for 80% of the year and then the other 20% it is spring.

✓ It is summer for 80% of the year and then the other 20% it is spring.

No correction needed here as 'summer' and 'spring' are uncountable or singular seasons used correctly.

× When I used to live in New York, I found myself vacationing in the tropical islands and preferring sunny, bright weather.

✓ When I used to live in New York, I found myself vacationing on the tropical islands and preferring sunny, bright weather.

The correct preposition for islands is 'on' rather than 'in' because islands are surfaces one can be on.

× But now that I live in Houston RCM, I find myself going to the mountains, Colorado mountains where I prefer cold winter with snow.

✓ But now that I live in Houston RCM, I find myself going to the mountains, the Colorado mountains, where I prefer cold winters with snow.

'Winter' should be plural 'winters' to match the general preference over multiple seasons. Also, 'the' is needed before 'Colorado mountains' for specificity.

× I prefer dry weather and because it'll cause with dry weather I'm able to go outside and enjoy the sun, get my vitamin D and the walk along the trail.

✓ I prefer dry weather because with dry weather I'm able to go outside and enjoy the sun, get my vitamin D, and walk along the trail.

The phrase 'and because it'll cause with dry weather' is incorrect and redundant. 'The walk' should be 'walk' without 'the' here. Also, 'and' before 'because' is unnecessary.

× What weather keeps me indoors? And if it's wet weather for too long, then it lead.

✓ Wet weather keeps me indoors, and if it lasts too long, then it leads to problems.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'What weather keeps me indoors?' is a question but used incorrectly. 'It lead' should be 'it leads' to agree with singular subject and present tense.

× Most of the time I'm working out of home so I'm indoor.

✓ Most of the time I'm working out of home, so I'm indoors.

The phrase 'working out of home' is awkward; 'working from home' is more common but if 'out of home' is intended, a comma is needed. 'Indoor' is an adjective; the adverb 'indoors' is correct here.

× I usually don't check the weather however when I go for a walk and.

✓ I usually don't check the weather; however, when I go for a walk,

The sentence is incomplete and lacks proper punctuation. 'However' should be preceded by a semicolon or period and followed by a comma. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.

× On the trail I'm always I always take a time to check the weather before I go because it is a two mile walk.

✓ On the trail, I always take time to check the weather before I go because it is a two-mile walk.

The phrase 'I'm always I always' is redundant and incorrect. 'Take a time' should be 'take time'. Also, 'two mile' should be hyphenated as 'two-mile'.

× And there's no shortcut to come back, I would have to complete the path.

✓ And there's no shortcut to come back; I would have to complete the path.

The sentence is a run-on and needs a semicolon or period instead of a comma to separate independent clauses.

× To be honest, I don't know what to think because there are scientists on both side of the aisle when it comes to climate change.

✓ To be honest, I don't know what to think because there are scientists on both sides of the aisle when it comes to climate change.

The phrase 'both side' should be plural 'both sides' to correctly refer to two groups.

× However. I do think when we're navigating the grey, such as this topic, it is better to steer on the cautious side.

✓ However, I do think when we're navigating the grey, such as this topic, it is better to steer on the cautious side.

A period after 'However' is incorrect; it should be a comma to connect the sentence properly.

× So I. Prefer to be environmentally friendly rather.

✓ So I prefer to be environmentally friendly rather.

The period after 'I' is incorrect and breaks the sentence unnaturally.

× Yes, I would love to visit other city with different climates because I live in Houston.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit other cities with different climates because I live in Houston.

'Other city' should be plural 'other cities' to match the plural 'climates' and general meaning.

× Taxes. We experience summer 80% of the year followed by light spring.

✓ Texas. We experience summer 80% of the year followed by light spring.

'Taxes' is a typo; it should be 'Texas'.

× Going to a city where I can experience all four season, specially autumn in Vermont.

✓ Going to a city where I can experience all four seasons, especially autumn in Vermont.

'Four season' should be plural 'four seasons'. 'Specially' should be 'especially'.

× Stowe Story, Vermont. Would be an experience of a lifetime.

✓ Stowe Story, Vermont, would be an experience of a lifetime.

The period after 'Vermont' should be a comma to connect the sentence properly.