Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid sentence fragments and unclear words. For example, "Sony" seems to be a mispronunciation or typo. Also, combine short sentences to make your answer more natural and fluent.

Exemplo: I live in a temperate climate where we experience all four seasons. Summers are usually sunny and warm, which makes it perfect for outdoor activities like hiking, while winters tend to be cold and snowy.

Sugestão: Use present tense consistently and avoid redundancy. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer hot weather because I enjoy spending my vacations on the beach. Moreover, I find winters a bit depressing, so warm summers suit me much better.

Sugestão: Be careful with word choice and sentence structure. "Wizard area" and "his moderate" are unclear. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clearer examples.

Exemplo: I don't like dry weather very much. For example, I once visited a desert area where the air was extremely dry, and I found it difficult to breathe. Therefore, I prefer wet weather because it is more comfortable.

Sugestão: Avoid unnecessary words like "Word waterproof" and improve sentence flow. Use plural forms correctly and link your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning on my phone before leaving my apartment because it helps me dress appropriately. I especially pay attention to rainy days so I can bring an umbrella or wear waterproof clothes.

Sugestão: Avoid sentence fragments and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific in your explanation.

Exemplo: Unfortunately, the effects of climate change disproportionately impact vulnerable communities. Therefore, I believe it is crucial to help these communities build resilience against climate change.

Sugestão: Avoid sentence fragments and unclear words like "UM cities" and "our world word climate." Use complete sentences and linking words to express your ideas clearly.

Exemplo: Sure, I would really enjoy visiting cities with different climates from mine, especially because I currently live in a very foggy city.

× Well, where I live we have a temperate climate. Which means we experience all Four Seasons.

✓ Well, where I live we have a temperate climate, which means we experience all four seasons.

The sentence 'Which means we experience all Four Seasons.' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence with a comma. Also, 'Four Seasons' should not be capitalized unless it's a proper noun, so 'four seasons' is correct.

× summers are usually Sony in warm, making it perfect for outdoor activities like hiking.

✓ Summers are usually sunny and warm, making it perfect for outdoor activities like hiking.

The word 'Sony' is a typo and should be 'sunny'. Also, 'in warm' is incorrect; it should be 'and warm' to correctly describe the summers.

× I've definitely preferred hot weather because I enjoy spending my vacations on the beach.

✓ I definitely prefer hot weather because I enjoy spending my vacations on the beach.

The present perfect 'I've definitely preferred' is incorrect here because the speaker is expressing a general preference, so the simple present 'I definitely prefer' is appropriate.

× I once visited a wizard area where the air was extremely dry and I found it. Difficult to breathe and because of that I prefer wet weather since his moderate.

✓ I once visited a wizard area where the air was extremely dry and I found it difficult to breathe, and because of that I prefer wet weather since it's moderate.

The sentence has punctuation errors and unclear wording. 'Difficult' should not be capitalized and should be connected to the previous clause. 'His moderate' is incorrect; it should be 'it's moderate' to refer to the weather.

× I usually check the weather forecast every morning on my phone before leaving my apartment because it allows me to dress appropriately for today.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast every morning on my phone before leaving my apartment because it allows me to dress appropriately for the day.

The phrase 'for today' is incorrect in this context; 'for the day' is the correct expression when referring to dressing appropriately for the day's weather.

× I especially pay attention to the forecast on rainy day so I can bring an umbrella in. Word waterproof.

✓ I especially pay attention to the forecast on rainy days so I can bring an umbrella and waterproof clothing.

'On rainy day' should be pluralized to 'on rainy days'. 'Bring an umbrella in. Word waterproof.' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'bring an umbrella and waterproof clothing' to make sense.

× Well, unfortunately, I believe that effects of climate change. These proportionately impact vulnerable communities.

✓ Well, unfortunately, I believe that the effects of climate change proportionately impact vulnerable communities.

The original sentences are fragmented. 'That effects of climate change.' is incomplete and should be 'that the effects of climate change'. Also, 'These proportionately impact vulnerable communities.' should be combined into one sentence for clarity.

× because of this, I believe it is crucial to focus on helping this community's build. Resilence against climate change.

✓ Because of this, I believe it is crucial to focus on helping these communities build resilience against climate change.

'This community's build.' is incorrect; it should be 'these communities build' to correctly refer to multiple communities and use the verb 'build' properly. 'Resilence' is misspelled and should be 'resilience'.

× Sure, I would really enjoy. Visiting UM cities with our world word climate. Especially because I currently reside in a very. Foggy City.

✓ Sure, I would really enjoy visiting some cities with different world climates, especially because I currently reside in a very foggy city.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain typos. 'UM cities with our world word climate.' is unclear and should be 'some cities with different world climates.' Also, 'a very. Foggy City.' should be 'a very foggy city.' with proper sentence structure and capitalization.