Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using simple and correct sentence structures. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, directly describe the weather and temperature without confusing words.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is usually cloudy, but sometimes it is sunny in the morning. The temperature is mostly moderate, not too hot or cold.

Sugestão: Focus on making your sentences grammatically correct and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating the same idea unnecessarily.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather more than hot weather because I enjoy the feeling of coldness. For example, I like drinking hot coffee and wearing warm clothes when it is cold.

Sugestão: Try to use clearer vocabulary and correct grammar. Explain your reasons logically and avoid unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it makes the environment clean and comfortable. On the other hand, wet weather can make things messy and unpleasant.

Sugestão: Try to make your sentences more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to organize your ideas and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day to know if it will be sunny, cloudy, or rainy. This helps me prepare and avoid surprises.

Sugestão: Try to express your ideas clearly and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect your points logically and avoid incomplete thoughts.

Exemplo: Climate change is a serious issue. It causes more diseases and affects plants, animals, and people. Therefore, it has a big impact on the environment and health.

Sugestão: Make your sentences clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I dream of visiting a country with snowfall. I want to touch the snow, feel the cold air, and enjoy the new experience.

× Now this is a insulated the weather is very cloudy and it is a little bit sunny in the morning, but most of the time it's cloudy and a little bit.

✓ Now this is insulated. The weather is very cloudy and it is a little bit sunny in the morning, but most of the time it's cloudy and a little bit.

The phrase 'a insulated' is incorrect because 'insulated' is an adjective and does not need the indefinite article 'a'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× The temperature is high, but most of the time it is normal 2 and this.

✓ The temperature is high, but most of the time it is normal.

The phrase 'normal 2 and this' is unclear and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'normal' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× When I prefer a cold which are most than hot weather because I just enjoy that moment of coldness and drinking cold coffee while the weather is very cold and just wear some warm clothes.

✓ I prefer cold weather more than hot weather because I just enjoy that moment of coldness, drinking cold coffee while the weather is very cold, and wearing some warm clothes.

The phrase 'When I prefer a cold which are most than hot weather' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It should be rephrased to 'I prefer cold weather more than hot weather' to correctly express preference and comparison.

× So for me my favorite weather is had a cold.

✓ So for me, my favorite weather is cold.

The phrase 'is had a cold' is incorrect. The verb 'had' is unnecessary here. The correct form is 'is cold' to describe the weather.

× For the dryness and witness I just prefer the dry weather becauses everything will be around you is clean and just smooth but while if it is what it is, everything is sleepy and just out of miss.

✓ For dryness and wetness, I just prefer dry weather because everything around you is clean and smooth, but if it is wet, everything is sleepy and just out of mist.

The phrase 'dryness and witness' is incorrect; it should be 'dryness and wetness'. Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× So for me dry weather is the best.

✓ So for me, dry weather is the best.

A comma after 'for me' improves readability and clarity.

× Yes, I am from people who like to check and see the updates of weather daily, how it will be sunny, cloudy, if there is a rain or something because I like to know and just to keep myself update about the weather changing so we will not have a shock if there is something happened suddenly.

✓ Yes, I am one of the people who like to check and see the weather updates daily, whether it will be sunny, cloudy, or if there is rain, because I like to know and keep myself updated about the weather changes so we will not be shocked if something happens suddenly.

The phrase 'I am from people' is incorrect; it should be 'I am one of the people'. 'Keep myself update' should be 'keep myself updated'. 'If there is a rain' should be 'if there is rain'. 'If there is something happened' should be 'if something happens'.

× Well, climate changing is a very big topic to discuss, but what I can say is the worst the climate change it will be, the more diseases and illness will appear and it will effect on each and everything on this earth, especially the plants and the animals and the people also.

✓ Well, climate change is a very big topic to discuss, but what I can say is the worse the climate change is, the more diseases and illnesses will appear and it will affect everything on this earth, especially the plants, animals, and people.

'Climate changing' should be 'climate change'. 'The worst the climate change it will be' should be 'the worse the climate change is'. 'Effect on' should be 'affect'. 'Diseases and illness' should be 'diseases and illnesses'.

× So yes, it's a very big topic and its affect so much that much that we cannot.

✓ So yes, it's a very big topic and it affects so much that we cannot ignore it.

'Its affect' should be 'it affects'. The sentence is incomplete and needs completion for clarity.

× Yes, my dream is to visit a country which have snowfall and I want to just touch this new and feel it and see how the feeling is and just take a breath of cold and frizzy here and just enjoy the movement.

✓ Yes, my dream is to visit a country which has snowfall and I want to just touch this snow and feel it, see how it feels, take a breath of cold and fresh air, and just enjoy the moment.

'Which have' should be 'which has' to agree with singular 'country'. 'Touch this new' should be 'touch this snow'. 'Frizzy here' is incorrect; 'fresh air' is appropriate. 'Enjoy the movement' should be 'enjoy the moment'.

× So yes, I want to try visiting something or a new weather.

✓ So yes, I want to try visiting somewhere with new weather.

'Visiting something or a new weather' is incorrect. 'Visiting somewhere with new weather' correctly expresses the idea of visiting a place with different weather.