Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer provides relevant information but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and coherent by using linking words and correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and ensure your vocabulary is appropriate and natural.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is similar to Toronto since it's only two hours away. Winters are quite harsh, which is typical across Canada, but summers are beautiful and sunny, allowing people to relax outdoors. Although there is occasional rain, overall, the summer weather is pleasant.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and personal, which is good. However, try to avoid incomplete sentences and unclear references (e.g., 'with a beautiful camisole'). Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and expand slightly with reasons or examples.

Exemplo: A few years ago in India, I preferred winter without a doubt. However, since moving to Canada, my preference has changed, and I now definitely choose summer. I enjoy spending time outdoors in the sunny weather because it lifts my mood and allows me to be active.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and includes personal reasons, which is good. However, watch for grammar mistakes (e.g., 'a admirer' should be 'an admirer') and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and try to vary your vocabulary.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because I am not a fan of rain. Rain often brings many insects, which I dislike since I accidentally crush them during my daily walks. Therefore, I always choose drier weather to avoid this problem.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat fragmented and incomplete. Try to form complete sentences and clearly explain your habits. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'changes my opinion on that.'

Exemplo: I check the weather forecast quite often, especially since moving to Canada. I do this every morning to decide what outfit to wear for the day. This habit helps me prepare for the weather and stay comfortable.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the topic but lacks clarity and contains incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and provide specific examples with clear explanations. Also, avoid grammatical errors and incomplete thoughts.

Exemplo: Climate change has caused several effects in recent years, such as more frequent forest fires. For example, there were several fires in Los Angeles last year, and this year, many have occurred in Saskatchewan and Manitoba. These fires are worsened by dry conditions and high temperatures.

Sugestão: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas in complete sentences, use linking words to connect your points, and avoid vague or confusing phrases. Also, clarify your examples and finish your thoughts.

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates. For instance, I want to visit a tropical place during this time of year to enjoy the warm weather and beaches. Additionally, seeing the Northern Lights in a place like Iceland is on my bucket list because it would be an unforgettable experience.

× The weather itself quite harsh and winters, as is typical in all over Canada.

✓ The weather itself is quite harsh in winters, as is typical all over Canada.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'weather itself', which is necessary to form a correct 'there be' structure indicating existence or state. Also, 'in winters' is the correct prepositional phrase to describe the season, and 'all over Canada' does not need 'in'.

× But the summer is there, beautiful people relax so much, they enjoy the sunny weather.

✓ But in summer, people relax a lot and enjoy the sunny weather.

The phrase 'the summer is there' is awkward; 'in summer' is the correct preposition to indicate the season. Also, 'beautiful people' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'people' suffices. 'Relax so much' is better expressed as 'relax a lot' for naturalness.

× But overall it's a beautiful weather in summer and quite harsh winters.

✓ But overall, it's beautiful weather in summer and quite harsh winters.

The word 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not require the definite article 'a'. Also, a comma after 'overall' improves sentence clarity.

× If you would have asked me this question a couple of years ago when I was in India, I would have chosen winter without a doubt.

✓ If you had asked me this question a couple of years ago when I was in India, I would have chosen winter without a doubt.

In conditional sentences referring to past unreal situations, the correct form is 'If you had asked' rather than 'If you would have asked'. The latter is incorrect in standard English.

× I definitely choose summer in a heartbeat.

✓ I definitely choose summer in a heartbeat.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present tense as it expresses a current preference; no correction needed.

× Brings me so much joy to spend time outdoors in the sunny weather with a beautiful camisole.

✓ It brings me so much joy to spend time outdoors in the sunny weather wearing a beautiful camisole.

The original sentence lacks a subject; 'It' is needed to complete the sentence. Also, 'with a beautiful camisole' is better expressed as 'wearing a beautiful camisole' to clarify the meaning.

× I am a admirer of drier weather.

✓ I am an admirer of drier weather.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound, as in 'admirer'. This is a common article usage rule in English.

× So I would always prefer more drier weather just due to the fact that I feel like I'm killing a lot of insects.

✓ So I would always prefer drier weather just because I feel like I'm killing a lot of insects.

The phrase 'more drier' is incorrect because 'drier' is already a comparative form; 'more' is redundant. Also, 'just due to the fact that' is wordy; 'just because' is more natural.

× This is a habit I recently built out when I moved to Canada.

✓ This is a habit I recently developed when I moved to Canada.

The phrase 'built out' is incorrect in this context; 'developed' or 'built' alone is appropriate. 'Built out' usually refers to physical construction or expansion.

× I checked the weather forecast every single day just because it really depends on what outfit I will wear that day.

✓ I check the weather forecast every single day because it really depends on what outfit I will wear that day.

The sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'check' is appropriate instead of past tense 'checked'.

× So it really changes my opinion on that and I check it in the morning time just to make sure my.

✓ So it really influences my choice, and I check it in the morning just to be sure.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Changes my opinion on that' is vague; 'influences my choice' is clearer. 'Morning time' is better as 'morning'. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.

× There's been numerous things that have changed due to the climate change.

✓ There have been numerous things that have changed due to climate change.

'Things' is plural, so the verb should be 'have been' not 'has been'. Also, 'climate change' does not need 'the' before it.

× So there were a few in LA last year and this year they are, there are many in Saskatchewan and Manitoba area that's really impacting due to the forest Catching Fire and humidity and.

✓ So there were a few in LA last year, and this year there are many in the Saskatchewan and Manitoba areas that are really impacted due to forest fires and humidity.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'area' should be plural 'areas'; 'that's' should be 'that are' to agree with plural 'areas'; 'forest Catching Fire' is awkward and should be 'forest fires'. The sentence also needs clearer structure.

× Yes, definitely. I would love to visit somewhere tropical at this time of the year as I feel it's going to be a lot more beautiful as well.

✓ Yes, definitely. I would love to visit somewhere tropical at this time of year as I feel it will be a lot more beautiful as well.

The phrase 'at this time of the year' is acceptable but 'at this time of year' is more natural. Also, 'it's going to be' can be simplified to 'it will be' for clarity.

× You can considering people are going to be in beautiful dresses just hanging by the beach.

✓ You can imagine people wearing beautiful dresses just hanging out by the beach.

'You can considering' is incorrect; 'You can imagine' or 'You can consider' is correct. Also, 'in beautiful dresses' is better as 'wearing beautiful dresses'. 'Hanging' should be 'hanging out' for natural expression.

× So that would be amazing or one thing that's all also been on my bucket list is going to isolate where I've seen the beautiful Aurora lights, but it's quite.

✓ So that would be amazing. One thing that has also been on my bucket list is going to Isolate, where I've seen the beautiful Aurora lights, but it's quite far.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be split into two sentences. 'That's all also been' is incorrect; 'that has also been' is correct. 'Isolate' may be a mishearing of 'Iceland' or another place; assuming 'Isolate' is a place name, it should be capitalized. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.