Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'them summer month' nên là 'the summer months' và 'Sometime' nên là 'Sometimes'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và từ vựng chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: I live in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam, which has a tropical climate. During the summer months, the weather is extremely hot and humid, with temperatures often exceeding 38°C. Sometimes, it can be quite uncomfortable due to heavy rain.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý cách dùng từ và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, 'wet winter' không phù hợp với ý bạn muốn nói, nên dùng 'cold winter'. Ngoài ra, câu 'I think cold weather it is exciting' nên sửa thành 'I think cold weather is exciting'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

Exemplo: Actually, I have never seen snow before, so I'm quite interested in experiencing a cold winter. I would love to see snow for the first time and enjoy activities like making a snowman or having a snowball fight. I think cold weather is exciting.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh. Ví dụ, 'Before then output prefer dry weather' nên là 'Before, I preferred dry weather'. Hãy cố gắng viết câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic.

Exemplo: Before, I preferred dry weather because I dislike feeling sweaty when I wear heavy clothes. However, now that I have a car, I find it quite convenient since it protects me from the rain outside.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, 'I'm not a person who usually watch' nên là 'I don't usually watch'. Ngoài ra, câu chuyện về ông nội nên được trình bày rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Exemplo: Honestly, I don't usually watch the weather forecast. However, about two months ago, when my grandfather came to visit, he watched the weather forecast almost every day. So, I think it can be quite convenient.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Ví dụ, 'due to it' nên là 'because of this' và 'that is used to be' nên là 'than before'. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và chính xác hơn.

Exemplo: I think climate change has had a profound impact on our daily lives in recent years. For example, the average temperature has increased significantly, making the weather much hotter than before. Moreover, because of this, extreme weather events have become more frequent than before.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'snow be doing' nên là 'snow falls', và câu cuối chưa hoàn chỉnh. Hãy luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

Exemplo: Yes, of course. I have always wanted to visit Japan in the near future because the climate there is very different from where I live in Vietnam. It is cold and snowy during winter, and my personal dream is to make a snowman.

× During them summer month the weather is extremely hot and humid with temperatures often over 38°C.

✓ During the summer months the weather is extremely hot and humid with temperatures often over 38°C.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used instead of the definite article 'the'. Also, 'month' should be plural 'months' to match the context. Use 'the' for specific references and plural form for multiple months.

× Sometime it can be quite uncomfortable because of the heavy rain.

✓ Sometimes it can be quite uncomfortable because of the heavy rain.

The word 'Sometime' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'Sometimes' to indicate occasional occurrences.

× Actually I have never seen snow before, so I'm quite interested in wet winter.

✓ Actually I have never seen snow before, so I'm quite interested in a wet winter.

The phrase 'interested in wet winter' lacks an article before 'wet winter'. Use 'a' to refer to one instance of wet winter.

× I would love to experience snow for a first time and immerse myself in activities like making a snowman or having a snowball fight.

✓ I would love to experience snow for the first time and immerse myself in activities like making a snowman or having a snowball fight.

The phrase 'for a first time' should be 'for the first time' as it refers to a specific occasion.

× I think cold weather it is exciting.

✓ I think cold weather is exciting.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here; the subject 'cold weather' already serves as the subject of the sentence.

× Before then output prefer dry weather because yeah I'm I hate the sense of sweat if I'm going home in a habit brand.

✓ Before then, I preferred dry weather because I hate the feeling of sweat if I'm going home in a humid brand.

The sentence contains multiple errors: 'output' is incorrect and should be 'I'; 'prefer' should be past tense 'preferred' to match 'before then'; 'sense of sweat' should be 'feeling of sweat'; 'habit brand' is unclear, likely intended 'humid brand' or 'humid environment'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× However now I have an automobile so I think is quite convenient an I'm an IT provide me from the rain outside.

✓ However, now I have an automobile so I think it is quite convenient and it protects me from the rain outside.

The sentence lacks the subject 'it' before 'is quite convenient'; 'I'm an IT provide me' is incorrect and should be 'it protects me'; 'an' should be 'and'.

× Honestly, I'm not a person who usually watch a weather forecast.

✓ Honestly, I'm not a person who usually watches the weather forecast.

The verb 'watch' should be in third person singular 'watches' to agree with 'who'; 'a weather forecast' should be 'the weather forecast' as it refers to a specific concept.

× However, back then about two months ago where my Gran father come to visit my home and visited my home man, yeah, he always watched the weather forecast almost every day.

✓ However, about two months ago when my grandfather came to visit my home, he always watched the weather forecast almost every day.

'Where' is incorrect; 'when' is appropriate for time reference. 'Gran father' should be 'grandfather'; 'come' should be past tense 'came'; 'visited my home man' is unclear and unnecessary.

× So I think it's quite convene.

✓ So I think it's quite convenient.

The word 'convene' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'convenient'.

× I think climate change has a profound impact on our daily life in recent years.

✓ I think climate change has had a profound impact on our daily life in recent years.

The present perfect tense 'has had' is appropriate to indicate an action continuing up to the present; 'has' alone is insufficient.

× Moreover, due to it, there has been more frequent extreme weather that is used to be.

✓ Moreover, due to it, there has been more frequent extreme weather than there used to be.

The phrase 'that is used to be' is incorrect; the correct comparative phrase is 'than there used to be'.

× Uhm it is cold and snow be doing during winter and I my peranio dream is to make a snowman and.

✓ Uhm it is cold and snowy during winter and my personal dream is to make a snowman.

'Snow be doing' is incorrect; 'snowy' is the correct adjective. 'I my peranio dream' is unclear; likely intended 'my personal dream'. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.