Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, which affects the coherence and effectiveness. Try to use clear and natural expressions, avoid redundancy, and complete your thoughts. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: The weather in Saint Croix is usually hot and tropical, with warm temperatures throughout the year. However, we also experience heavy rainstorms that can last for several days, which sometimes disrupt daily activities.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains incomplete sentences. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler phrases and incomplete thoughts.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I have mostly lived in warm countries. For example, I would like to experience snow and enjoy activities like building a snowman or making snow angels.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'the sweets are always being flooded in.' Use precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because I like to keep my feet dry. In Saint Croix, heavy storms often cause flooding, which disrupts people's activities and makes it difficult to go outside.

Sugestão: Your answer is mostly clear but incomplete and slightly awkward. Try to complete your sentences and use natural expressions. Use linking words to explain your habits and reasons clearly.

Exemplo: I don't usually check the weather forecast regularly, but whenever I hear that a hurricane is approaching the island, I make sure to stay informed and prepared.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with grammatical errors and confusing phrases. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and provide specific examples with linking words.

Exemplo: In recent years, climate change has caused more extreme weather events, such as heat waves, tornadoes, and hurricanes. For example, when I was in elementary school, the weather was more stable and predictable.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and adding linking words to explain your reasons more fully.

Exemplo: Definitely. Since I have mostly lived in warm countries, visiting cities with different climates would give me a refreshing change and new experiences.

× Throughout the year, although it's typically had insane creed, we also experience heavy rain storms which can last forever for a few days.

✓ Throughout the year, although it typically has had insane heat, we also experience heavy rain storms which can last for a few days.

The phrase 'it's typically had' is incorrect because 'it's' (it is) should be 'it has' to form the present perfect tense correctly. Also, 'insane creed' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'insane heat' fits the context better. The word 'forever' is informal and exaggerated; 'for a few days' suffices.

× These storms can affect the.

✓ These storms can affect the area.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'affect the'. Adding 'area' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I have mostly lived in warm countries, so I prefer now to live in cold countries.

✓ I have mostly lived in warm countries, so I now prefer to live in cold countries.

The adverb 'now' should be placed before the verb 'prefer' to maintain correct word order in English.

× I would like to experience no. In, you know, play with it.

✓ I would like to experience snow, you know, play with it.

The word 'no' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'snow'. Also, the sentence is fragmented; combining the parts into a single coherent sentence improves clarity.

× For example, creating a snowman or an Angel. On this no.

✓ For example, creating a snowman or an angel in the snow.

The sentence fragments need to be combined into a complete sentence. 'Angel' should be lowercase unless referring to a proper noun. 'On this no' is unclear and likely meant to be 'in the snow'.

× I prefer dry because I would like to keep my feet stay dry.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I would like to keep my feet dry.

The phrase 'keep my feet stay dry' is incorrect; 'keep my feet dry' is the correct expression. Also, specifying 'dry weather' clarifies the meaning.

× In Saint Croix, we have experienced this with heavy storm and it's not fun because the sweets are always being flooded in.

✓ In Saint Croix, we have experienced this with heavy storms, and it's not fun because the streets are always flooded.

'Heavy storm' should be plural 'heavy storms' to match context. 'Sweets' is a mishearing or typo for 'streets'. 'Being flooded in' is awkward; 'streets are always flooded' is clearer.

× The activities of people there are being apprehended because of the weather.

✓ The activities of people there are being interrupted because of the weather.

'Apprehended' means arrested or caught, which is incorrect here. The intended meaning is likely 'interrupted' or 'disrupted'.

× I don't often check the weather forecast, but whenever I hear that there will be a hurricane coming or there's a hurricane near the island, I'm always.

✓ I don't often check the weather forecast, but whenever I hear that there will be a hurricane coming or there's a hurricane near the island, I'm always alert.

The sentence ends abruptly after 'I'm always'. Adding 'alert' completes the thought and fits the context.

× In recent years, climate change have cost more weather.

✓ In recent years, climate change has caused more extreme weather.

'Climate change' is singular and requires 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'cost more weather' is incorrect; 'caused more extreme weather' is appropriate.

× Events or extreme weather events, for example, heat wave cut 5 tornadoes or hurricanes.

✓ Extreme weather events, for example, heat waves, tornadoes, or hurricanes.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Listing examples properly with commas and plural forms improves clarity.

× I remember when I was in elementary we can play a.

✓ I remember when I was in elementary school, we could play outside.

The sentence is incomplete and mixes tenses. Adding 'school' and completing the sentence with a past tense verb 'could play' makes it correct.

× Definitely because I have been living mostly in warm country so visiting cities that have different weather aside from warm would bring refreshing environment in feeling for me.

✓ Definitely, because I have been living mostly in warm countries, so visiting cities that have different weather aside from warm would bring a refreshing environment and feeling for me.

'Country' should be plural 'countries' to match 'mostly'. Adding articles 'a' before 'refreshing environment' and connecting 'environment and feeling' improves grammar and clarity.