Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，语法和词汇错误较多。建议简化句子结构，直接描述天气特点，并避免无关内容。

Exemplo: I live in Beijing, the capital of China. The weather here is usually dry and sunny, which sometimes makes my skin feel dry, so I often use moisturizer.

Sugestão: 表达不清楚，句子结构混乱。建议用简单明了的句子表达喜好，并给出理由。

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because it is easier to wear layers and stay warm. Hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable and sweaty.

Sugestão: 回答中有词汇错误（white应为wet），表达不够准确。建议注意词汇使用，清晰表达观点并用具体细节支持。

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because my skin feels better in humid conditions. In the south of China, where it is wetter, I don't need to use moisturizer as often.

Sugestão: 回答较长且有语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议直接回答问题，并用简单句说明原因。

Exemplo: I usually don't check the weather forecast because I always carry an umbrella. Also, Beijing's weather is generally stable without extreme changes.

Sugestão: 表达有语法和词汇错误，句子不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清晰描述气候变化的影响。

Exemplo: I think climate change has affected our daily life. Summers are hotter than before, and there are more extreme rainstorms causing floods in the city, which was rare in the past.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简洁表达愿望并说明原因。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because my daily life is quite routine, and experiencing new weather would be interesting.

× Will I live in Beijing in the capital of China and I think Beijing is fired rice so my skin off and not for awhile and have to use some.

✓ I live in Beijing, the capital of China, and I think Beijing is very dry, so my skin gets dry and I have to use some moisturizer.

原句中使用了错误的动词形式“Will I live”，应使用一般现在时描述事实。此外，“fired rice”应为“very dry”，表达干燥的意思。句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× To have to add some water to my skin, you know?

✓ I have to add some water to my skin, you know?

“To have to”用法不正确，应直接使用“I have to”表示必须做某事。

× if if you code you just layer. Uh, close, But if you hurt you don't.

✓ If you are cold, you just layer clothes, but if you are hot, you don't.

原句中“code”和“hurt”应为“cold”和“hot”，且缺少主语“you are”，需要补充完整。

× You cannot think we're close to outside door.

✓ You cannot think we're close to outside door.

该句语义不清，可能想表达“你不能穿太多衣服在外面”，建议改为："You cannot wear many clothes outside when it's hot."

× So maybe killed I can. Uh, abide it.

✓ So maybe cold I can abide it.

“killed”应为“cold”，且句子结构不完整，建议改为：“So maybe I can abide the cold.”

× I prefer white weather because my skin is very white and I have to use moisturizer.

✓ I prefer wet weather because my skin is very dry and I have to use moisturizer.

“white weather”应为“wet weather”，且“my skin is very white”应为“my skin is very dry”，表达皮肤干燥需要保湿。

× But in the wet weather, you know, the South of China, I don't have used that of kind of scenes and my skin is very perfect.

✓ But in the wet weather, like in the south of China, I don't have to use that kind of thing and my skin is very good.

“I don't have used”时态错误，应为“I don't have to use”。“scenes”用词错误，应为“things”或“products”。

× I don't have the habit to check in the weather forecast because I put the umbrella in my back every day, so I don't worry about rainy and you know in Beijing is not have a extreme weather, so we don't have to worry about it.

✓ I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast because I carry an umbrella in my bag every day, so I don't worry about rain. Also, you know, Beijing doesn't have extreme weather, so we don't have to worry about it.

“have the habit to check in”应为“have the habit of checking”。“put the umbrella in my back”应为“carry an umbrella in my bag”。“not have a extreme weather”应为“doesn't have extreme weather”。

× I've seen that the climate change influence our daily life.

✓ I've seen that climate change influences our daily life.

“climate change”是单数名词，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“influences”。

× You know in summer the hot weather, hot temperature is higher than before and they are have more extreme rainy day and they become flawed in the city that's rare in the past.

✓ You know in summer the hot weather and temperature are higher than before, and there are more extreme rainy days and floods in the city, which were rare in the past.

“they are have”错误，应为“there are”。“flawed”应为“floods”。“rainy day”应为复数“rainy days”。

× Yes, of course I want to try the different on climate that's different from where I live because you know in the daily I live I have a same routine and I want to. Have a different experience and that's a cool idea.

✓ Yes, of course I want to try a different climate that's different from where I live because, you know, in daily life I have the same routine and I want to have a different experience, and that's a cool idea.

“try the different on climate”应为“try a different climate”。“in the daily I live”应为“in daily life”。“a same routine”应为“the same routine”。