Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ vựng mô tả thời tiết một cách chính xác và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn.

Exemplo: It's summer in my city right now, and the weather is very hot and humid. This makes me feel tired and less energetic.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng thì, đồng thời tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I'm over the winter'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung liên kết mạch lạc.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because I can wear light clothes and enjoy outdoor activities. In contrast, winter makes me feel lazy because it's very cold.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích thời tiết ẩm ướt.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because dry weather in my city causes problems like dust and dryness. Wet weather makes the environment fresher and more comfortable.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là cách dùng thì và động từ. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung liên kết mạch lạc để giải thích thói quen của bạn.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going outside so that I can prepare properly and have a good time outdoors.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích cụ thể về ảnh hưởng của biến đổi khí hậu.

Exemplo: I believe climate change has caused more extreme weather in my city. For example, winters have become longer and colder than before.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lỗi như 'stay it'. Câu trả lời nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng và câu bổ sung liên kết mạch lạc để giải thích mong muốn của bạn.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit a city with snow because my city doesn't have any. I want to try making a snowman and enjoy the snowy weather.

× In my city now recently it uh. Summer so that is really hard in sticky it make me feel more no energy to do anything.

✓ In my city recently, it is summer, so it is really hot and sticky. It makes me feel like I have no energy to do anything.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and tense usage. 'It make' should be 'it makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (third person singular). Also, 'hard in sticky' is incorrect; 'hot and sticky' is the correct expression. The sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be combined properly.

× I prefer hot weather because I could go outside without many clothes like winter.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I can go outside without wearing many clothes like in winter.

The modal verb 'could' is used incorrectly here; 'can' is appropriate to express ability in the present. Also, 'without many clothes' is awkward; 'without wearing many clothes' is clearer.

× I'm over the winter make me feel so lazy because it is so cold.

✓ I don't like winter because it makes me feel so lazy since it is so cold.

'I'm over the winter' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'I don't like winter'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× In the wet weather is low floor is also many water an wet so that I don't like dry weather.

✓ In wet weather, the floor is low and there is a lot of water and wetness, so I don't like dry weather.

The original sentence has incorrect preposition usage and unclear phrasing. 'Low floor' likely means 'low-lying floor' or 'low ground'. 'Many water an wet' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of water and wetness'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Yes, I usually checking weather forecast before go outside because I want to prepare everything to have a nice. Feel to do outside.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going outside because I want to prepare everything to have a nice time outside.

'Usually checking' should be 'usually check' (simple present tense). 'Before go outside' should be 'before going outside' (gerund after preposition). 'Have a nice. Feel to do outside' is unclear; corrected to 'have a nice time outside'.

× Yes, I believe that claim it rains had had noticeable effect in recent years for assemble in my city window used to be sort an mind but the reason is more longer and colder than it before.

✓ Yes, I believe that climate change has had a noticeable effect in recent years. For example, in my city, winters used to be short and mild, but now they are longer and colder than before.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'claim it rains' should be 'climate change'; 'had had' is awkward but acceptable in perfect tense; 'assemble' should be 'example'; 'window' should be 'winter'; 'sort an mind' should be 'short and mild'; 'more longer' is incorrect, 'longer' suffices. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I really want to go somewhere that have snow because in my city they don't have snow.

✓ Yes, I really want to go somewhere that has snow because in my city we don't have snow.

'That have snow' should be 'that has snow' to agree with singular 'somewhere'. 'They don't have snow' is unclear; 'we don't have snow' is more appropriate referring to the city where the speaker lives.

× Therefore I want to try to make a snowman and stay it.

✓ Therefore, I want to try to make a snowman and stay with it.

'Stay it' is incorrect; the verb 'stay' requires a preposition or object. 'Stay with it' is appropriate when referring to spending time with the snowman.