Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more fluent and avoid unnecessary pauses or repetitions. Use complete sentences and connect your ideas smoothly to sound more natural and effective.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is quite diverse, as we experience all four seasons throughout the year. I personally enjoy cold weather because I get to experience both snow and rain, which I find refreshing.

Sugestão: Make sure your sentences are complete and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons for your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because it allows me to relax indoors, enjoy hot drinks by the fireplace, and take some time off from busy activities.

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' appropriately to make your answer coherent and specific.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because I can go out and hang out with my friends comfortably. However, when it's wet, I usually stay inside since I don't like getting my shoes wet.

Sugestão: Try to complete your sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and provide specific details about when and how often you check the forecast.

Exemplo: I am a punctual person, so I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving home. This helps me dress appropriately and arrive on time.

Sugestão: Focus on clarity and accuracy. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases. Provide specific effects of climate change and explain your opinion clearly.

Exemplo: I believe that increased technological development has contributed to climate change in recent years, leading to negative effects such as extreme weather and environmental damage.

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clear reasons for your preferences.

Exemplo: I would love to visit different places to experience various climates, but I prefer to stay in my country because I enjoy all four seasons here. However, I might travel briefly to other cities to enjoy their unique weather.

× Well, the weather where I live. Is quite diverse throughout the year.

✓ Well, the weather where I live is quite diverse throughout the year.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. Combining the two parts into one complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× We we tend to experience. All Four Seasons throughout the year.

✓ We tend to experience all four seasons throughout the year.

The repetition of 'we' is an error, and 'All Four Seasons' should not be capitalized. Also, the sentence should be continuous without unnecessary pauses.

× And I personally like. Cold weather because.

✓ I personally like cold weather because

Starting a sentence with 'And' and ending with a period before completing the thought creates sentence fragments. The sentence should be continuous to express the idea properly.

× In this weather, I can feel the snow and rain altogether.

✓ In this weather, I can experience snow and rain together.

The phrase 'feel the snow and rain altogether' is awkward. Using 'experience' and 'together' makes the sentence clearer and more natural.

× during this weather we can eat, we can do all our works by setting inside are.

✓ During this weather, we can eat and do all our work by sitting inside.

'By setting inside are' is incorrect; it should be 'by sitting inside'. Also, 'works' should be 'work' as an uncountable noun here.

× And can have hot drinks. By sitting in front of fireplace at and we also get some time off and we can.

✓ We can have hot drinks by sitting in front of the fireplace, and we also get some time off.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. Combining the ideas into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I personally enjoy drive other because in this weather I can go out and hang out with my friends

✓ I personally enjoy dry weather because in this weather I can go out and hang out with my friends

'Drive other' is incorrect; it should be 'dry weather'. This corrects the singular/plural and word choice error.

× but when it's wet I rather prefer to stay inside and the because I am always afraid to get wet and my shoes get wet and so that's why.

✓ but when it's wet, I prefer to stay inside because I am always afraid of getting wet and my shoes getting wet, so that's why.

The original sentence has unnecessary conjunctions and awkward phrasing. Removing 'and the' and restructuring improves clarity and correctness.

× I am quite punctual person.

✓ I am a quite punctual person.

The article 'a' is missing before 'quite punctual person', which is necessary for correct sentence structure.

× That's why I have the habit to check weather before hand so that I can prepare myself and my clothes,

✓ That's why I have the habit of checking the weather beforehand so that I can prepare myself and my clothes,

The phrase 'have the habit to check' is incorrect; it should be 'have the habit of checking'. Also, 'before hand' should be 'beforehand'.

× so that I can reach everywhere on time, so that I don't feel guilty by getting late and I.

✓ so that I can arrive everywhere on time and not feel guilty for being late.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Rephrasing it into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I believe the invention of more and more technologies are causing changes in climate in recent years,

✓ I believe the invention of more and more technologies is causing changes in the climate in recent years,

'Invention' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'the climate' requires the definite article.

× which is very bad for our climb out, for the bad, bad for the weather and it helps us. Environment.

✓ which is very bad for our climate, bad for the weather, and harmful to our environment.

'Climb out' is a typo for 'climate'. The sentence also misuses articles and has awkward phrasing. Correcting these improves clarity and correctness.

× I would love to visit to different places to experience the different climate change climate,

✓ I would love to visit different places to experience different climates,

'Visit to different places' is incorrect; it should be 'visit different places'. Also, 'different climate change climate' is redundant and incorrect.

× but I would rather prefer to stay in my country because here I can feel all all seasons and I'm satisfied with it.

✓ but I would prefer to stay in my country because here I can experience all seasons and I'm satisfied with it.

'Would rather prefer' is redundant; use either 'would rather' or 'prefer'. Also, 'feel all all seasons' should be 'experience all seasons'.

× But I would go for a short time period to different places with to enjoy their weather and there.

✓ But I would go for a short time to different places to enjoy their weather.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains unnecessary words like 'with' and 'there'. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity and correctness.