Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, reduce repetitions, use correct tense and smoother linking. Include one or two specific supporting details (when, what kind of writing) and avoid unnecessary hesitations.

Exemplo: Not really. I don't write often because I'm not a very creative or poetic person, but I do write on occasion. For example, when I was in tenth grade I entered a short-story competition and won second place, which encouraged me to try creative writing again.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence, use linking words to explain reasons, avoid filler words and repetitions, and use more natural vocabulary (e.g. 'imaginary' -> 'fiction' or 'fantasy'). Provide a specific example of what you enjoy creating.

Exemplo: I enjoy writing fantasy short stories because they let me create characters and worlds without limits. For instance, I like inventing unusual settings and imaginative plots where anything can happen, which helps me relax and be creative.

Sugestão: Give a clear, structured response: start with a direct opinion, then provide 1–2 specific possible changes using correct future tense and clearer phrasing. Avoid repetition and unclear clauses.

Exemplo: Yes, I think my writing will change in the future. For example, I might start writing poems or, if I have a child, I would like to write stories about their experiences and memories to keep for the family.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, give two concise reasons using linking words, fix grammar (e.g. 'easier to type', 'not used to writing by hand'), and avoid hesitations.

Exemplo: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient for me. Since I spend much of the day on my laptop, typing is natural, and I find writing by hand uncomfortable because I'm not used to it.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear frequency phrase, use linking words to add purpose, correct grammar (e.g. 'I keep a diary with me all the time' or 'I keep one regularly'), and be specific about what you record.

Exemplo: I keep a diary with me almost every day. I don't write poems or stories in it; instead, I record my daily routines and note important things I need to remember, such as appointments or tasks.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples and reasons using linking words. Improve grammar (e.g. 'photos and videos', 'when I visit places') and finish the sentence coherently.

Exemplo: I also record my life with photos and videos. For example, I take many pictures and short videos whenever I visit new places or go on trips, because they help me remember the experience and the sights later.

× No training because I'm not a poetic person, so I don't write a lot.

✓ I haven't had much training because I'm not a poetic person, so I don't write a lot.

The student refers to a lack of past training; the original mixes present and past incorrectly. Use present perfect 'haven't had' to show an experience up to now. Also keep 'don't write a lot' for habitual present.

× But sometimes in my school when I was in 10, that time there were a competition about story writing.

✓ But sometimes at my school when I was in grade 10, there was a story-writing competition.

Use simple past 'was' and 'there was' for a specific past event. 'In 10' should be 'in grade 10' or 'when I was 10'; 'there were a competition' is incorrect number agreement and word order.

× So that time I write a story and I achieved the second position.

✓ So at that time I wrote a story and I achieved second place.

A specific past action requires simple past 'wrote'. 'Achieved the second position' is unnatural; use 'achieved second place' or 'came in second'.

× I like to write some imaginary stories because there I can write everything what I can imagine, no boundaries, uh, no difficulties I have to face.

✓ I like to write imaginary stories because there I can write everything I can imagine, with no boundaries and no difficulties to face.

Remove unnecessary pronoun 'what' after 'everything' in English. Reorder phrase for natural flow: 'with no boundaries and no difficulties to face.'

× I just, uh, I just, I in my way when I'm writing something.

✓ I just write in my own way when I'm writing.

Original is fragmented and ungrammatical. Simplify to 'I just write in my own way' to express the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× Yes, it could be change in future as like now I am writing the imaginative story writing in future it could be happen that I am writing something poetry or if if I get a child then I I would definitely write something on her that how how is she or how however.

✓ Yes, it could change in the future. Right now I write imaginative stories, but in the future I might write poetry. If I have a child, I would definitely write about her and how she is.

Multiple tense and modal errors. Use 'could change' or 'might' for future possibility. Use simple present for current habit 'I write', 'might write' for future possibility, 'if I have a child' (present simple in the if-clause for a real possibility) and 'I would write about her' for the result. Remove repeated words and fix word order.

× I prefer typing when I'm writing because it is very convenient for me.

✓ I prefer typing when I write because it is very convenient for me.

Use simple present 'I write' for habitual actions; 'when I'm writing' is acceptable but 'when I write' is more natural with 'prefer'.

× Uh, half of the day I have to be with my laptop, so it is easier for me to typing something If if I'm going to write something, my hands will be hurt because I'm a very time that I'm not, uh, used to write with a pen or pencil.

✓ I spend half the day on my laptop, so it's easier for me to type. If I were to write by hand, my hands would hurt because for a long time I am not used to writing with a pen or pencil.

Use 'spend half the day on' not 'be with', 'type' not 'to typing', conditional 'If I were to write by hand' and 'my hands would hurt'. Use 'not used to writing' (noun gerund) to indicate habit. Correct word order and articles.

× Every time I keep a diary with me and in that writing I don't write any story or poem poem.

✓ I always keep a diary with me, and I don't write stories or poems in it.

'Every time' is awkward; use 'always' for habitual action. Use plural 'stories or poems' and place 'in it' to show location. Remove duplicated 'poem'.

× I just maintain the diary for writing my daily routines and and if there are something important that I have to remind, I note there.

✓ I just use the diary to record my daily routines, and if there is something important I need to remember, I note it there.

Use 'use the diary to record' for purpose. 'There are something' should be 'there is something' (singular) or better 'if there is something important'. Use 'note it there' to refer back to the diary.

× The other method I use to record my life is photography and the videos.

✓ Another method I use to record my life is photography and videos.

Use 'another' not 'the other' for one of several methods. 'Videos' does not need 'the' when speaking generally.

× I take lot of pictures and videos whenever I, uh, visit somewhere or I explore some places because that reminds to reminds me later that what I did.

✓ I take a lot of pictures and videos whenever I visit or explore places because that reminds me later of what I did.

Add article 'a' in 'a lot of pictures'. Remove duplicate 'reminds' and correct the structure 'reminds me of' to show what is being remembered.

× So that's why I record the everything in my.

✓ So that's why I record everything in my diary.

Remove extra 'the' before 'everything' and complete the sentence with the object 'diary'. The original is incomplete and ungrammatical.