Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'writing module' → 'writing module', 'I remember on my mind' → remove).

Exemplo: Yes, I write a lot because I am preparing for the IELTS writing module. For example, I often practice essays and formal letters every week, which helps me improve my structure and vocabulary.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence naming the types you like, then give a reason with specific details and a linking word. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I writing' → 'I write'). Avoid filler sounds.

Exemplo: I mainly like writing diary entries and practice essays because I am preparing for the IELTS. For instance, diary entries help me reflect on daily events, while essays and letters let me practice different structures and formal language.

Sugestão: Make a clear, single-sentence opinion followed by a specific example and a linking phrase. Use correct tense and coherent organization. Avoid long disfluent phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I think my writing has changed a lot over time because regular practice improved my structure. For example, a few months ago my essays lacked clear paragraphs, but now I plan each paragraph before I write, so my work is much clearer.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly and give two concise, specific reasons connected by linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'I feel' without explaining how. Use correct comparative expressions.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better and I find it more personal. For example, when I handwrite notes, I retain vocabulary longer, whereas typing feels less memorable.

Sugestão: Give a clear frequency (daily/weekly) and one or two specific reasons using linking words. Remove fillers and unclear phrases. Make sentences complete and grammatical.

Exemplo: I keep a diary nearly every day because I want to record important thoughts and interesting events. For instance, I write brief notes about my day and any ideas I might want to remember later.

Sugestão: Answer with a clear topic sentence listing methods, then give brief specific examples and a linking word to show usefulness. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'contacts' instead of 'numbers').

Exemplo: I also use my phone and a calendar app to record birthdays and anniversaries, and I save contacts for neighbors and relatives. This is useful because I can quickly call someone in an emergency and set reminders for important dates.

× Yes, I write a lot because I am preparing for IELTS and there are writing writing module.

✓ Yes, I write a lot because I am preparing for the IELTS and there is a writing module.

The sentence has article and 'there be' errors. Use 'the IELTS' (definite article) and 'there is a writing module' (singular subject with correct 'there be' form). Also remove repeated word 'writing'.

× So so many letters and many essays I write and remember on my mind.

✓ So I write many letters and essays and try to remember them.

The original has incorrect word order and unclear phrasing. Reorder to subject-verb-object: 'I write many letters and essays' and use 'remember them' with correct pronoun reference.

× Well, I always write something, uh, uh, important, uh, in my diary, but uh, I am preparing for my IELTS, so, uh, I writing some essays and letters.

✓ Well, I always write important things in my diary, and because I am preparing for my IELTS, I am writing some essays and letters.

Use correct progressive form 'I am writing' instead of 'I writing'. Also simplify redundant fillers and place adjectives correctly before nouns ('important things'). Maintain present continuous for ongoing action.

× Uh, it's very important for me because there are many types of uh, uh, structure.

✓ It's very important to me because there are many types of structure.

Use 'to me' rather than 'for me' for subjective importance. 'There are' is acceptable plural, but avoid extraneous filler. 'Types of structure' is clearer; 'structures' could also be used.

× Really change yes I think uh it's uh helping for my writing uh it's very changing for me because uh sometimes uh ago I my writing is very bad for uh bait structure after that uh we are I I am more and more practice it's it's really better for.

✓ Yes, I think it really changes and helps my writing. It has improved a lot because my writing used to be very bad in terms of structure, but after more practice I am much better now.

Original contains tense errors and poor structure. Use simple present 'it really changes' for general truth, present perfect 'has improved' for change over time, 'used to be' for past habitual state, and 'after more practice I am much better now' to show result. Remove fillers and correct word choices ('bait' -> 'basic' or 'poor' structure).

× I think, uh, handwriting is, uh, uh, very interesting for me because, uh, whenever I write, I feel and uh, after that I write.

✓ I think handwriting is very interesting to me because when I write by hand I remember better afterwards.

Use 'interesting to me' rather than 'for me'. Clarify the intended meaning: 'remember better afterwards' fits common expression. Remove unnecessary fillers and ensure gerund/verb forms are correct.

× So, uh, in my opinion, writing is the best for, uh, even student, uh.

✓ So, in my opinion, writing is best even for students.

Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'best' and use plural 'students' with correct preposition 'for'. Keep concise phrasing.

× I uh, quite often keep, uh, keeps Diaries because, umm, there are some uh, not out and, uh, something interesting, uh, uh, something, uh, uh, to beside, beside this, uh, so many, uh, important thoughts. I always not out.

✓ I quite often keep a diary because there are many important thoughts and things I don't want to forget.

Use singular 'a diary' or plural 'diaries' consistently; here 'keep a diary' is natural. Correct negation 'don't want to forget' instead of 'not out'. Simplify and reorder sentence for clarity.

× Well, I always record for birthdays and anniversaries, uh, after date, uh, some neighbors and relatives numbers because it's very helpful for any emergency.

✓ I always record birthdays and anniversaries, dates, and some neighbors' and relatives' phone numbers because it's very helpful in an emergency.

Remove unnecessary 'for' after 'record'. Use plural possessive 'neighbors' and 'relatives'' and the noun 'phone numbers'. Use preposition 'in an emergency' for correct idiom.

× Uh, I record some, uh, very, uh, thoughts in my diary.

✓ I also record my personal thoughts in my diary.

Clarify noun 'thoughts' with adjective 'personal' and use 'also' to connect with previous sentence. Simplify filler words and ensure natural word order.