Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答要更直接并保持句子简洁，同时注意时态一致和不必要的重复。可以先给出总体观点，再用一到两句具体细节支持。注意把“makes me relax”改为更自然的表达如“helps me relax”，并把“creating stories or inventing characters is interesting”合并为更流畅的句子。

Exemplo: Yes, I wrote a lot when I was in primary school because creating characters and stories helped me relax. I especially enjoyed inventing plots and sharing them with friends, which encouraged me to keep writing.

Sugestão: 回答需要语法正确并更具体。先直接回答喜欢写的类型（用正确拼写），然后给出具体理由，避免含糊的时间表达。使用连接词（for example, because）使逻辑清楚。

Exemplo: I liked writing romantic novels and short fantasy stories because they were popular among my classmates. For example, I would create dramatic scenes and romantic plots that my friends enjoyed reading.

Sugestão: 注意时态一致和动词形式，避免重复。先给出直接观点，然后用具体原因支持，如兴趣、经验或写作目的的改变。把模糊的词改为更明确的表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I think my writing will change as I grow older because my interests and knowledge develop. For instance, I might move from light romantic stories to more realistic or reflective pieces based on my experiences.

Sugestão: 句子结构混乱，需要明确偏好并给出清晰理由。注意动词搭配（prefer handwriting / prefer typing），避免自相矛盾。把过去习惯和现在偏好分开表述，并使用连接词说明原因。

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because I’ve been writing by hand since childhood and it feels more natural. Handwriting helps me think more slowly and creatively compared with typing.

Sugestão: 回答应直接说明频率并解释原因，注意大小写和词形（diaries 小写），并改正“lives”用法。可用对比连接词（but, however）使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: I used to keep a diary every day when I was a child, but now I rarely do because I’m busy with my studies and other commitments.

Sugestão: 回答可以更具体，说明用手机拍照、录音或社交媒体等具体方法，并用更自然的形容词替换“lively”。使用连接词解释原因和举例。

Exemplo: I often use my smartphone to take photos and short videos to record everyday moments because it’s convenient and captures details better than writing.

× writing stories makes me relax and creating stories or inventing characters is interesting.

✓ writing stories makes me relaxed, and creating stories or inventing characters is interesting.

句中 “makes me relax” 使用了动词原形 relax，但应使用形容词或过去分词来表示“使我感到……”。常见结构是 make sb + adjective（例如 relaxed）或使役动词后接动词原形表示使某人去做某事；这里的意思是“让我放松”，用 makes me relaxed 更自然。建议使用 make sb + adjective 结构，或改为 “helps me relax”。

× I like the writing SFR or romantic novel because it was popular at that time.

✓ I like writing SFR or romantic novels because they were popular at that time.

原句中有多处问题：1) “the writing” 中的定冠词 and 名词形式不当，应为动名词短语 writing，或直接名词复数 novels；2) 单复数不一致（novel 应为 novels）；3) 指代不一致，用复数 they 指代 novels 更合适。建议把名词改为复数并保持时态一致。

× My classmate liked reading them and enjoying them.

✓ My classmates liked reading them and enjoying them.

1) “My classmate” 单数与后文行为泛指不符，应为复数 classmates；2) “liked reading them and enjoying them” 在并列时态应保持一致，改为 “liked reading them and enjoyed them” 或用持续结构 “enjoyed them”。建议主谓数一致并保持动词时态一致。

× Yes, as I grew older the trend is changing and my mind is changing too.

✓ Yes, as I grew older the trend changed and my mind changed too.

句中时间点是“as I grew older”（过去时），随后主句却用了现在进行时 is changing，时态混用导致前后不一致。应保持时态一致，若描述过去变化应全部用过去时；若描述现在仍在变化，应改前半句为现在时。建议根据实际意思统一时态。

× I become knowledgeable and literate so the things I write will changing.

✓ I became knowledgeable and literate, so the things I wrote changed.

1) “I become” 与上下文过去时不一致，应为 became；2) “will changing” 是助动词 + 动词 -ing 的错误结构，正确应为 will change 或 are changing，若在过去情境用 changed。建议根据上下文统一为过去时或现在时并使用正确动词形式。

× I prefer to handwriting because I was an accustomed to type because I have been handwriting since childhood.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I am accustomed to it; I have been handwriting since childhood.

原句多处错误：1) prefer 后接动名词或不定式均可，但 prefer to handwriting 不正确，应为 prefer handwriting 或 prefer to handwrite；2) “I was an accustomed to” 结构错误，应为 “I am accustomed to” 或 “I was accustomed to” 加上对象 it；3) “I have been handwriting since childhood” 用法不自然，改为 “I have been writing by hand since childhood”。建议使用固定搭配 be accustomed to + 名词/动名词，并用 natural collocation 如 writing by hand。

× When I was a child I kept Diaries every day, but now I never keep Diaries because I'm busy with my studies and lives.

✓ When I was a child I kept diaries every day, but now I never keep a diary because I'm busy with my studies and life.

1) “Diaries” 不需要大写；2) 表习惯性记录用复数 diaries 可以，但句中要对比现在通常说 “keep a diary” 或 “keep diaries”; 更自然为过去常常 daily diaries、现在不再 keep a diary；3) “lives” 用法错误，应为 life（不可数，表示生活）。建议注意大小写、单复数和不可数名词。

× I often use smartphone or camera to record my memory daily life because it's convenient and lively.

✓ I often use a smartphone or a camera to record my memories and daily life because they're convenient and lively.

1) 可数名词前需不定冠词 a/an：a smartphone, a camera；2) “record my memory daily life” 词序和词形错误，改为 “record my memories and daily life”；3) 主语复数（they）对应前面两个工具，形容词 lively 描述“记录”是否合适取决语境，但可保留。建议注意冠词、名词复数及并列结构的一致性。