Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较为简短且表达不够自然，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复。可以直接回答问题并简要说明原因。

Exemplo: No, I don't write a lot. Mostly, I just send emails online for work or personal matters.

Sugestão: 回答结构不清晰，表达不流畅，建议先明确回答喜欢写什么，再说明原因，使用连接词使句子连贯。

Exemplo: I like to write daily task lists because it helps me organize my work efficiently and stay focused throughout the day.

Sugestão: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议使用正确时态和更准确的词汇，表达观点时要条理清楚。

Exemplo: Yes, I think my writing has changed. Ten years ago, I had a better vocabulary, but now I sometimes forget words when I try to write.

Sugestão: 表达重复且语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达偏好，并说明原因，避免重复。

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because I can write faster and it feels more personal to me.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且含糊，语法错误明显，建议直接回答问题并说明原因，注意拼写和语法。

Exemplo: I haven't kept a diary for a long time because I find it hard to keep up with daily writing.

Sugestão: 句子结构混乱，表达不自然，建议使用正确的语法和连接词，清晰表达观点。

Exemplo: I often record my life by making videos and taking photos. It's interesting to look back at these memories because they remind me of special moments.

× Actually I just write some emails online, so I think I don't write a lot.

✓ Actually I just write some emails online, so I think I don't write a lot.

此句中没有明显的单复数错误，保持原句。

× For me now I just write some today's tasks, divide my tasks into three parts and I RA write some emails.

✓ For me now I just write today's tasks, divide my tasks into three parts and I also write some emails.

原句中“RA”应为“also”，且“some today's tasks”中“some”不合适，应去掉。

× Yes, before 10 years ago I write well, I know the most of words, but now what I want to write something, I often forget the words.

✓ Yes, 10 years ago I wrote well, I knew most of the words, but now when I want to write something, I often forget the words.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时态，故“write”改为“wrote”，“know”改为“knew”。“before 10 years ago”表达重复，改为“10 years ago”。

× I prefer handwriting then typing because the handwriting is always quickly for me, so I prefer the handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because handwriting is always quicker for me, so I prefer handwriting.

“prefer...to...”是固定搭配，不能用“then”。“quickly”应为形容词“quicker”修饰“handwriting”。

× It was a long, long time. I didn't write the dares.

✓ It was a long, long time ago. I didn't write the diaries.

“dares”应为“diaries”，且“a long, long time”后应加“ago”表示过去时间。

× I always make some videos and take some photos for record my life that's very interesting and sometimes when I back to re receive these memories as amazing.

✓ I always make some videos and take some photos to record my life. That's very interesting, and sometimes when I look back, receiving these memories is amazing.

“for record”应为“to record”，表示目的。句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整动词形式。