Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误且表达重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Exemplo: No, I don't write much because I prefer typing on my computer or phone. Writing by hand makes me tired, so I usually avoid it. I find it more convenient to record notes on my phone since I can access them anywhere.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误，且内容重复。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的语法，并提供具体原因。

Exemplo: I don't really like writing because it makes me feel tired and I find it hard to concentrate. Therefore, I usually avoid it.

Sugestão: 回答不够清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议明确表达观点，使用恰当词汇，并举具体例子。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe my writing will change over time because communication styles evolve. For example, many people now prefer using emojis or short messages instead of long texts.

Sugestão: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多。建议使用完整句子，表达清晰，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

Exemplo: I prefer typing on my computer or phone because it is easier and faster. Handwriting is the last thing I want to do since it is less efficient.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且语法错误严重。建议直接回答频率，说明原因，并使用正确语法。

Exemplo: I keep a diary about twice a week because it helps me record my mood and daily events clearly.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误，表达不自然。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达功能和原因。

Exemplo: I usually use the Moments feature on WeChat to share photos and experiences with my friends easily.

× Writing made me tired and exhausted so I usually avoid it.

✓ Writing makes me tired and exhausted, so I usually avoid it.

这里应该使用一般现在时，因为学生描述的是一种习惯或常态。'made'是过去式，应该改为'makes'。

× And I record on mobile phone, I can check it everywhere.

✓ And I record on my mobile phone, so I can check it everywhere.

句子缺少连接词，应该用'and'或'so'连接两个分句，且'mobile phone'前应加冠词'my'。

× Actually I don't really into writing because it make me feel tired and sometimes I find it difficult to concentrate clearly so I don't really enjoy it.

✓ Actually, I am not really into writing because it makes me feel tired, and sometimes I find it difficult to concentrate clearly, so I don't really enjoy it.

'don't really into'用法错误，正确表达是'am not really into'。此外，'make'应为第三人称单数'makes'。

× Actually I don't really into writing because it make me feel tired and sometimes I find it difficult to concentrate clearly so I don't really enjoy it.

✓ Actually, I am not really into writing because it makes me feel tired, and sometimes I find it difficult to concentrate clearly, so I don't really enjoy it.

主语'it'是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'makes'。

× Yes, I think the things I write will change over time because people interested in communication style involved.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write will change over time because people are interested in the communication styles involved.

缺少动词'are'，'communication style'应为复数形式'styles'，且前面应加定冠词'the'。

× For example, nowadays many people favor using shorter tattoo or emoji instead of wrong message.

✓ For example, nowadays many people favor using shorter texts or emojis instead of wrong messages.

'tattoo'用词错误，应为'texts'，'emoji'应为复数'emojis'，'wrong message'应为复数形式。

× No use handwriting when I am writing is the last thing I want to do.

✓ Not using handwriting when I am writing is the last thing I want to do.

句子结构错误，缺少'Not'，使句子完整且符合语法。

× I favor use my computer or mobile phone to edit.

✓ I prefer to use my computer or mobile phone to edit.

'favor use'用法错误，正确表达是'prefer to use'。

× It's more easily.

✓ It's easier.

'easily'是副词，句中应使用形容词'easier'来修饰主语。

× I often. Gave Diaries twice a week because which can record my mood and things very well so I usually do it.

✓ I often write diaries twice a week because they can record my mood and things very well, so I usually do it.

句子缺少谓语动词，'Gave Diaries'用法错误，应为'write diaries'，'which'指代不明，应改为'they'。

× I usually use the Moment feature on WeChat to record my life. Is it can share photo and experience with my friend easily?

✓ I usually use the Moment feature on WeChat to record my life. It can share photos and experiences with my friends easily.

第二句语法错误，'Is it can'应改为'It can'，'photo'和'experience'应为复数形式，'friend'应为复数'friends'。