Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答内容丰富，但有些句子不够连贯，且有些表达不够自然。建议避免断句不完整（如“Every time.”），并使用更自然的连接词来使回答更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. In fact, I write in my diary every day, and a couple of months ago, I finished my dissertation, which involved a lot of writing. Writing helps me to think deeply and thoroughly about various topics.

Sugestão: 回答结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时注意时态和语法的准确性。建议丰富细节，说明写作的具体好处。

Exemplo: I write in my journal almost every day. I usually record my daily experiences, the difficulties I face, and the people I meet, which helps me to remember important events and reflect on my day.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有待改进。建议使用更正式的表达，避免口语化词汇如“gonna”，并注意主谓一致。

Exemplo: That's an interesting question. I don't think what I write will change in the near future. However, in the long run, I believe it will change because my current writing is quite different from what I wrote during my childhood.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和介词。

Exemplo: It really depends on what I'm writing. If nothing unusual happens during the day, I definitely prefer typing. However, if I need to think deeply, I prefer handwriting because it helps me slow down and reflect.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词，建议去除“uh”等口语词汇，注意时态和表达的准确性，使句子更简洁。

Exemplo: I try to write in my diary almost every day because it helps my future self understand what happened at specific times and gives me perspective on my past experiences.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议避免重复，使用更准确的词汇和句式，使表达更自然。

Exemplo: Nowadays, it's common to record daily life by filming or taking photos with a phone, which is what I do. I find it very convenient and it captures moments in real time. For example, if I want to record something important, I use my phone instead of pen and paper.

× I write my diary every single day and about a couple months ago I just finished my dissertation, which required a lot of writing work.

✓ I write in my diary every single day and about a couple of months ago I just finished my dissertation, which required a lot of writing work.

The phrase 'a couple months' is missing the preposition 'of' which is necessary to correctly express the quantity. Also, 'diary' should be preceded by 'in' to indicate the action of writing inside it.

× I write my diary every single day and about a couple months ago I just finished my dissertation, which required a lot of writing work.

✓ I write in my diary every single day and about a couple of months ago I just finished my dissertation, which required a lot of writing work.

The verb 'write' when referring to diaries or journals is commonly followed by the preposition 'in' to indicate the location of writing. Missing 'in' leads to incorrect prepositional usage.

× I write about the difficulties that I face and also the people that I just met, which helps me to remember what have happened during the day.

✓ I write about the difficulties that I face and also the people that I have just met, which helps me to remember what has happened during the day.

The phrase 'what have happened' is incorrect because 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'what'. It should be 'has happened'. Also, 'just met' should be in present perfect tense 'have just met' to indicate recent past action relevant to the present.

× I don't think it's gonna change soon.

✓ I don't think it's going to change soon.

'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal or semi-formal speech or writing.

× the things that I write right now is far more different than the things that I wrote back in my childhood.

✓ the things that I write right now are far more different than the things that I wrote back in my childhood.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× If there is nothing unusual happen during the day, I definitely preferred typing.

✓ If there is nothing unusual happening during the day, I definitely prefer typing.

The verb 'happen' should be in the '-ing' form 'happening' after 'nothing unusual' to correctly describe an ongoing state. Also, 'preferred' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'prefer'.

× I definitely preferred typing.

✓ I definitely prefer typing.

The sentence refers to a habitual action or preference in the present, so the present tense 'prefer' is appropriate instead of past tense 'preferred'.

× I prefer to handwriting because it can help me to slow down and think deeply.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it can help me to slow down and think deeply.

The verb 'prefer' is followed directly by a noun or gerund, not an infinitive. 'To handwriting' is incorrect; it should be 'handwriting'.

× Well, I try to write my Diaries as much as I could almost every single day because I find that helps the future me to know what has happened in at that specific time of the day and which, uh, gives me the perspective of the past me.

✓ Well, I try to write my diaries as much as I can almost every single day because I find that helps my future self to know what has happened at that specific time of the day and which, uh, gives me the perspective of my past self.

'Diaries' should not be capitalized. 'Could' should be 'can' to match present tense. 'In at' is redundant; only 'at' is needed. 'The future me' and 'the past me' are better expressed as 'my future self' and 'my past self' for correct pronoun usage.

× I find that helps the future me to know what has happened in at that specific time of the day and which, uh, gives me the perspective of the past me.

✓ I find that helps my future self to know what has happened at that specific time of the day and which, uh, gives me the perspective of my past self.

The phrase 'in at' is incorrect; only 'at' should be used to indicate a specific time.

× by taking a Photo by with your phone.

✓ by taking a photo with your phone.

The phrase 'by taking a Photo by with your phone' contains redundant prepositions 'by' and 'with'. Only 'with' is needed to indicate the instrument used.

× And that's what I do in order to record my day. I find I find this really convenient and has that real time effect.

✓ And that's what I do in order to record my day. I find this really convenient and that it has a real-time effect.

The sentence structure is awkward and repetitive ('I find I find'). Also, 'has that real time effect' is unclear; it should be 'that it has a real-time effect' with hyphenation for 'real-time' as a compound adjective.