Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating 'a lot' and try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. For example, start by directly answering the question, then explain why you write.

Exemplo: Yes, I write quite frequently because it helps me reflect on my experiences and improve my writing skills. Writing allows me to express myself clearly and develop my thoughts.

Sugestão: Your answer covers the main points but is somewhat repetitive and could be more fluent. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and be more specific about what aspects of daily life you write about.

Exemplo: I enjoy writing about my daily life because it happens every day and offers many moments worth capturing. For instance, I often describe my feelings or interesting events, which helps me relax and express my emotions.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to organise your thoughts clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, be careful with verb tenses and sentence structure to improve clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe my writing will change as I grow older because my thoughts will become more mature and my experiences will influence my style. Moreover, rapid technological developments might lead me to write on different platforms.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer flow better. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary to express your feelings.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me connect more deeply with my emotions. I find that writing by hand feels more sincere and better reflects my true feelings.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrasing and minor grammatical errors. Try to use more natural expressions and correct prepositions. Also, link your ideas smoothly for better coherence.

Exemplo: I usually keep a diary about once a week. I've had this habit since childhood because I enjoy looking back and seeing how much I've grown. It makes me appreciate myself more.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and unnatural phrasing. Try to form complete sentences and use correct articles and plurals. Also, organise your ideas clearly and use linking words.

Exemplo: Besides writing, I like to record my life through photographs. I enjoy capturing moments like the beauty of my friends and lovely scenery, which I often share with my friends online.

× Well, I do write a lot to reflect my experiences and myself and also it can help me to improve my writing skills a lot.

✓ Well, I do write a lot to reflect my experiences and myself, and also it can help me improve my writing skills a lot.

The phrase 'help me to improve' is grammatically correct but the infinitive 'to improve' is more commonly used without 'to' after 'help'. Removing 'to' makes the sentence more natural and fluent.

× Well, I do write a lot to reflect my experiences and myself and also it can help me to improve my writing skills a lot.

✓ Well, I do write a lot to reflect my experiences and myself, and also it can help me improve my writing skills a lot.

The phrase 'reflect my experiences and myself' is awkward because 'myself' is a reflexive pronoun and should be used when the subject and object are the same. Here, 'myself' is unnecessary and can be omitted or replaced with 'myself' used correctly in context.

× I would like to say it's my daily life.

✓ I would like to say it's about my daily life.

The sentence lacks clarity. Adding 'about' clarifies that the writing topic is related to daily life. This improves the sentence's meaning and flow.

× It really can help me to relax, to express my emotion.

✓ It really can help me relax and express my emotions.

After 'help', the verb is usually in the base form without 'to'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context of expressing feelings.

× When I get older, the way I think I write it will be more mature and my experiences well involved.

✓ When I get older, the way I think I write will be more mature and my experiences will be well involved.

The phrase 'my experiences well involved' is missing the auxiliary verb 'will be' to form the future passive voice correctly. Adding 'will be' corrects the tense and structure.

× And also these days the technology develops so fast and may change my way in different platforms.

✓ And also these days technology develops so fast and may change my way on different platforms.

'The technology' is incorrect here; 'technology' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to platforms.

× I always choose writing by my hands because that can connect it to my real feelings more and I always think writing by hands, it can be more sincere and it often reflects your emotions.

✓ I always choose writing by hand because that can connect me to my real feelings more, and I always think writing by hand can be more sincere and often reflects your emotions.

The phrase 'writing by my hands' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'writing by hand'. Also, 'connect it to my real feelings' should be 'connect me to my real feelings' because 'me' is the person connected. The sentence is also improved by removing unnecessary commas and pronouns.

× I would like to say it's once a week, give or take.

✓ I would like to say it's once a week, give or take.

This sentence is correct and does not require correction.

× I really feel appreciate about myself.

✓ I really feel appreciative about myself.

The verb 'feel' should be followed by an adjective, not a verb. 'Appreciate' is a verb; the correct adjective form is 'appreciative'. Therefore, 'feel appreciate' is incorrect; it should be 'feel appreciative'.

× Will exclude the writing.

✓ I will exclude writing.

The original sentence lacks a subject and is incomplete. Adding the subject 'I' and removing 'the' before 'writing' corrects the sentence structure and makes it clear.

× I would like to say it's a photos.

✓ I would like to say it's photos.

'Photos' is plural, so it should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural agreement.