Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，保持语言自然流畅。可以简洁表达写作频率和感受，避免冗长和不完整的句子。

Exemplo: Yes, I write a lot because I am a part-time novelist. I write every day, from jotting down ideas to working on my novel. Usually, I enjoy writing, but sometimes it can be frustrating when I don't feel inspired.

Sugestão: 回答应更连贯，避免语法错误和口语化表达。应直接回答问题并用具体细节支持观点，避免无意义的重复。

Exemplo: I like to write novels because I am an introvert and prefer expressing myself through stories. Creating fantasy worlds allows me to explore adventures that I enjoy.

Sugestão: 回答应避免口语填充词，语法时态应准确。可以更清晰地描述写作内容的变化并使用连接词。

Exemplo: Yes, my writing has changed a lot over the years. At university, I wrote reports and essays for my courses, such as electronics. But now, I focus on writing novels.

Sugestão: 回答应避免语法错误和不完整句子，表达应更清晰和连贯。应具体说明喜欢打字的原因，避免模糊表达。

Exemplo: I prefer typing because it is faster and allows me to easily edit and copy text. Handwriting can be inconvenient since I have to carry paper and it takes more time.

Sugestão: 回答应更简洁，避免重复和语法错误。可以直接说明写日记的频率和习惯，并用连接词使句子流畅。

Exemplo: I keep diaries occasionally, but the habit usually lasts only a short time. However, I often jot down my thoughts and highlights of the day before going to sleep.

Sugestão: 回答应避免语法错误和不完整句子，表达应更具体和连贯。可以详细说明拍照和截图的用途。

Exemplo: I record my life by taking photos and screenshots. For example, I capture funny comments online and also take pictures of everyday scenes and landscapes that I find interesting.

× Actually I have a plot in my mind but to actually write.

✓ Actually, I have a plot in my mind but haven't actually written it yet.

句子缺少谓语动词，导致结构不完整。需要补充动词短语使句子完整。

× I'm kinda like an introvert person and I don't really into talking to people and communicating with them, even with my friends.

✓ I'm kinda like an introvert person and I don't really like talking to people and communicating with them, even with my friends.

动词短语中缺少介词或动词形式错误，'don't really into'应改为'don't really like'。

× Yes, actually the things I wrote had already changed a lot over the past few years.

✓ Yes, actually the things I have written have already changed a lot over the past few years.

时态使用错误，描述过去到现在的变化应使用现在完成时。

× I will write passage and reports of my, you know, courses, like experimenting courses like electronics or stuff.

✓ I will write passages and reports of my, you know, courses, like experimental courses like electronics or stuff.

名词单复数不一致，'passage'应为复数'passages'，'experimenting'应为形容词'experimental'。

× You can duplicate the messages and text you write, you wrote and yeah, and when it comes to paper writing, you will have to like manually carry those things and sometimes it could be happy so.

✓ You can duplicate the messages and texts you write, and when it comes to paper writing, you have to manually carry those things and sometimes it could be heavy.

时态混乱，'you wrote'不合适，且单复数错误，'text'应为'texts'，'happy'应为'heavy'。

× Once in a while I want to promote a habit of keeping Diaries, but most of the time this habit lasts only three minutes, so I love to jot down my thoughts and my highlights for the entire day before right before I go to sleep.

✓ Once in a while I want to promote a habit of keeping diaries, but most of the time this habit lasts only three minutes, so I love to jot down my thoughts and highlights for the entire day right before I go to sleep.

'Diaries'不需要大写，且句子中多余的'right before'重复，应删除一个。

× I take photos. I love to take screenshots when I'm surfing on the Internet and when I meet people's comments that are very hilarious and funny, I took screenshots of them.

✓ I take photos. I love to take screenshots when I'm surfing the Internet and when I see people's comments that are very hilarious and funny, I take screenshots of them.

介词使用错误，'surfing on the Internet'应为'surfing the Internet'，时态不一致，'took'应为现在时'take'。