Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and slightly unclear. Try to give a complete sentence and avoid trailing off. Also, add a bit more detail to make your answer more natural and effective.

Exemplo: Yes, I write a lot at the moment because I am preparing for the IELTS exam, which requires a lot of writing practice to improve my skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to avoid redundancy and finish your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons.

Exemplo: I like to write a daily diary because it allows me to share my thoughts and feelings, and it helps me track my personal growth over time.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but contains a small grammar mistake and could be more concise. Also, use linking words to improve coherence and choose the correct form of words.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time because as I gain more experience and knowledge, my writing style and ideas evolve. For example, when I was younger, my writing was simple, but now I try to express my thoughts more clearly and creatively.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and contains unclear phrases. Avoid repeating phrases and ensure your sentences are complete and logical. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about your reasons.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient, especially for long texts. For example, when I write essays or reports, typing allows me to edit and organise my thoughts more efficiently, and it also reduces strain on my hands during long writing sessions.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific examples.

Exemplo: I rarely keep diaries, perhaps only a few times a year, because I find it hard to maintain the habit. However, when I do write, it helps me reflect on my thoughts and experiences. For example, after an important event, I jot down my feelings to remember them more vividly.

Sugestão: Your answer is fragmented and contains incomplete sentences. Try to use complete sentences with proper linking words. Be specific and clear about the methods you use.

Exemplo: I often use digital tools like my smartphone and laptop to record my life. For instance, I take photos and videos to capture memorable moments, which I later organise into albums or journals. Additionally, I sometimes write in a personal diary or use apps designed for daily reflections to track my thoughts and experiences.

× Yes, at the moment I write a lot as I'm studying for IELTS language and that has to do with lots of writing to practice and.

✓ Yes, at the moment I write a lot as I'm studying for the IELTS language test, and that involves a lot of writing practice.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured, ending with 'and' without completing the thought. The correction completes the sentence properly and clarifies the meaning by adding 'the IELTS language test' and rephrasing 'that has to do with lots of writing to practice' to 'that involves a lot of writing practice'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× What do you like to write? Why?

✓ What do you like to write? Why?

No correction needed for this question as it is grammatically correct.

× If I have to choose what I like to write, it will be like a diary for myself each day, sharing my thoughts, how was my day, my feelings.

✓ If I have to choose what I like to write, it would be a diary for myself each day, sharing my thoughts, how my day was, and my feelings.

The original sentence uses 'will be' which is less appropriate in this hypothetical context; 'would be' fits better. Also, 'how was my day' is incorrect word order for a statement; it should be 'how my day was'. Adding 'and' before 'my feelings' improves sentence flow.

× That would be what I would like because it will track things in time and then.

✓ That would be what I would like because it tracks things over time.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'and then' without completing the thought. The correction removes the incomplete phrase and rephrases to a complete, clear sentence. 'It tracks things over time' is a clearer expression.

× Yes, I believe things I write will change over time.

✓ Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time.

The original sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'things', which is necessary to specify the particular things being referred to. Adding 'the' corrects the sentence.

× For example, when I was younger my writing was simple, but now I try to express my thoughts more clearly and creativity.

✓ For example, when I was younger, my writing was simple, but now I try to express my thoughts more clearly and creatively.

The word 'creativity' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adverb to modify 'express'. Changing 'creativity' to 'creatively' corrects the grammatical error. Also, a comma after 'younger' improves readability.

× I prefer typing over handwriting when I am writing when I am writing because it's much faster and more convenient, especially for lengthy text.

✓ I prefer typing over handwriting when I am writing because it's much faster and more convenient, especially for lengthy texts.

The phrase 'when I am writing' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the repetition improves sentence clarity. Also, 'lengthy text' should be pluralized to 'lengthy texts' to refer generally to longer pieces of writing.

× For example, when I write essays or reports, trying to allow me to edit and organize my thoughts more efficiently additionally try to reduce the strain on my head, which can happen often prolonged.

✓ For example, when I write essays or reports, typing allows me to edit and organize my thoughts more efficiently and also helps reduce the strain on my head, which can often happen during prolonged writing.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a clear subject for 'trying'. The correction introduces 'typing allows me' to clarify the subject and verb. 'Additionally try to reduce' is changed to 'and also helps reduce' for grammatical correctness and flow. The phrase 'which can happen often prolonged' is corrected to 'which can often happen during prolonged writing' for clarity and correctness.

× I rarely keep Diaries, maybe just a few times a year.

✓ I rarely keep diaries, maybe just a few times a year.

The word 'Diaries' is incorrectly capitalized. It should be lowercase 'diaries' as it is a common noun. This correction addresses capitalization rather than pluralization, but it is important for grammatical correctness.

× I find hard to maintain the habit because I usually be there, but when I do writing it helps me to reflect on my thoughts, experience, for example after important event jotting down my feelings long to remember them more vividly.

✓ I find it hard to maintain the habit because I am usually not there, but when I do write, it helps me to reflect on my thoughts and experiences. For example, after an important event, jotting down my feelings helps me to remember them more vividly.

The original sentence has multiple issues: missing 'it' after 'find', incorrect verb form 'be' instead of 'am', missing 'not' to express negation, incorrect gerund 'writing' instead of 'write', missing conjunction 'and' between 'thoughts' and 'experience', missing articles 'an' before 'important event', and awkward phrasing 'long to remember' which is corrected to 'helps me to remember'. The correction addresses all these issues for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I often use digital tools like smartphones, laptop records, my life.

✓ I often use digital tools like smartphones and laptops to record my life.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured. 'Laptop records, my life' is unclear. The correction adds 'and laptops' and changes 'records' to 'to record' to form a complete and clear sentence.

× For instance, I take photo video, capture memorable moments which I later organized an album or journals.

✓ For instance, I take photos and videos, capturing memorable moments which I later organize into albums or journals.

'Photo' and 'video' should be pluralized to 'photos' and 'videos' to indicate multiple items. 'Organized' is changed to 'organize' to match present tense. 'An album or journals' is corrected to 'albums or journals' for consistency and plural agreement.

× Additionally, sometimes I write in a personal diary or use apps designed for daily reflections as this helps me to track my thoughts and experience over.

✓ Additionally, sometimes I write in a personal diary or use apps designed for daily reflections, as this helps me to track my thoughts and experiences over time.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'over' without completing the phrase. Adding 'time' completes the thought. Also, 'experience' is changed to plural 'experiences' to match 'thoughts' and to be grammatically consistent.