Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but it has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct tenses and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, keep your answer concise and clear. For example, instead of saying 'I wrote a lot before my days', say 'I used to write a lot before'.

Exemplo: I used to write a lot before, but now I don't have enough time because of my job. However, I still enjoy writing, especially on my birthdays when I write about various things.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using better linking words and clearer structure. Also, avoid repeating 'favorite' multiple times. Try to explain your reasons more specifically.

Exemplo: I like to write about my work, hobbies, and memorable experiences because I want to remember them clearly. Writing helps me keep these memories alive.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer explanations. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Exemplo: Yes, the things I write can change over time, especially daily notes. However, I prefer to keep my diary entries unchanged because they capture my true feelings at that moment.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains mistakes. The word 'pastries' seems incorrect here. Try to express your ideas clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, explain your reasons more logically.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and nostalgic. Writing by hand helps me connect better with my thoughts.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammar errors and unclear phrases like 'stress my reduce'. Try to use correct sentence structures and explain your ideas clearly. Also, avoid unnecessary words like 'Yes sure'.

Exemplo: I often carry my diary in my handbag when I go out. Since childhood, writing in my diary has helped me reduce stress.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrases. Use present tense for current habits and choose better words than 'keypads'.

Exemplo: Besides keeping a diary, I also use note-taking apps on my phone to record my daily life and important events.

× Actually I wrote a lot before my days.

✓ Actually I wrote a lot in my younger days.

The phrase 'before my days' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'in my younger days' to indicate a past time period. The verb 'wrote' is correctly in past tense.

× Now I can not get enough time to write.

✓ Now I cannot get enough time to write.

The modal verb 'cannot' is usually written as one word. 'Can not' is less common and can cause confusion. Using 'cannot' is the standard form.

× But I wrote a lot in my birthdays.

✓ But I wrote a lot on my birthdays.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'birthdays'. The correct preposition is 'on' to indicate specific days.

× I wrote many kinds of things.

✓ I wrote many kinds of things.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Actually, I like to write many kinds of things.

✓ Actually, I like to write many kinds of things.

This sentence is correct in present tense and structure.

× Mostly I write about my works and my favorite things and my favorite memories, which I did not want to forget.

✓ Mostly I write about my work, my favorite things, and my favorite memories, which I do not want to forget.

'Works' should be singular 'work' when referring to tasks or job-related activities. Also, 'did not want' should be present tense 'do not want' to match the ongoing desire to remember.

× That's why I wrote it down.

✓ That's why I write it down.

If the action is habitual or ongoing, present tense 'write' is appropriate instead of past tense 'wrote'.

× Yes, sure, it can be.

✓ Yes, sure, it can be.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Actually, it can be changed for uh, day-to-day life, but I don't want to change my things which I was written in my Diaries or something like that.

✓ Actually, it can change with day-to-day life, but I don't want to change the things which I have written in my diaries or something like that.

'Can be changed' is passive; 'can change' is more natural here. 'Was written' is incorrect; present perfect 'have written' is needed to indicate past action with present relevance. 'Diaries' should be lowercase unless part of a title.

× That's why I like to write.

✓ That's why I like to write.

This sentence is correct.

× Actually, I mostly prefer handwriting when I am writing because it makes me more comfortable and it makes me feeling nostalgia and I can reflect it on my pastries.

✓ Actually, I mostly prefer handwriting when I am writing because it makes me more comfortable, it makes me feel nostalgic, and I can reflect it on my pastimes.

'Makes me feeling' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me feel'. 'Nostalgia' is a noun; the adjective 'nostalgic' is needed. 'Pastries' (baked goods) is incorrect; likely intended 'pastimes' (hobbies).

× Yes sure, I often keep Diaries on my handbag whenever I go somewhere and from my childhood I used to write a diary and it helps me to stress my reduce.

✓ Yes sure, I often keep diaries in my handbag whenever I go somewhere, and since my childhood I have used to write a diary, and it helps me reduce stress.

'Diaries' should be lowercase. 'On my handbag' should be 'in my handbag'. 'From my childhood' is better as 'since my childhood'. 'Used to write' is correct but better with present perfect 'have used to'. 'Helps me to stress my reduce' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'helps me reduce stress'.

× First of all, I used to maintain a diary and secondly, I used keynotes or keypads on my phone.

✓ First of all, I used to maintain a diary and secondly, I use keynotes or keypads on my phone.

'Used' in second clause suggests past, but context implies present habit; 'use' is correct present tense.

× In this way I can memorize or I can record my daily life and some important things.

✓ In this way I can memorize or record my daily life and some important things.

The sentence is correct; removing redundant 'I can' improves flow but is optional.