Writing— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you write a lot?
Candidato
Yes, I do write a lot. I really enjoy writing especially when I'm experiencing something new during my daily life. I even have my own social accounts which share which share some interest things I found in my life.
Examinador
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidato
I prefer to write something related to my daily life and I think it's just like either 1 or some summer.
Examinador
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidato
Of course, the things I write will definitely change according to I may encounter different people and I may in different test stages of my life, so the things I writing may varied with the changes of my thoughts.
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidato
I prefer typing as it is much more convenient than handwriting. You can type things down as long as you have your phone and it's really easy to upload it to white Cloud drive where you can review it in different platform.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中存在重复表达（"which share which share"），影响流畅性。建议避免重复，简洁表达，同时可以增加具体写作内容的描述，使回答更丰富。
Exemplo: Yes, I write quite often, especially when I encounter new experiences in my daily life. I even manage social media accounts where I share interesting things I discover.
What do you like to write? Why?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答不够清晰，存在语法和表达错误，导致意思难以理解。建议明确表达写作内容和原因，使用完整句子，并避免模糊或错误的词汇。
Exemplo: I like to write about my daily life because it helps me reflect on my experiences and share my thoughts with others.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，影响理解。建议使用清晰的句子结构，正确使用时态和介词，表达思想变化对写作内容的影响。
Exemplo: Yes, the topics I write about change as I meet different people and go through various stages in my life, which influence my thoughts and interests.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答较为自然且内容具体，但存在小的语法错误（"white Cloud drive"应为"the cloud drive"），建议注意词汇准确性和表达的连贯性。
Exemplo: I prefer typing because it's more convenient. As long as I have my phone, I can type my notes and easily upload them to the cloud, so I can access them on different devices.
Gramática
× I even have my own social accounts which share which share some interest things I found in my life.
✓ I even have my own social accounts which share some interesting things I found in my life.
这里“interest things”应改为“interesting things”，因为形容词需要用现在分词形式来修饰名词，表示“有趣的东西”。
× I prefer to write something related to my daily life and I think it's just like either 1 or some summer.
✓ I prefer to write something related to my daily life and I think it's just like either one or some summer experiences.
原句中“either 1 or some summer”表达不清，数字“1”应写为“one”，且“some summer”缺少名词，需补充名词使表达完整。
× so the things I writing may varied with the changes of my thoughts.
✓ so the things I write may vary with the changes of my thoughts.
“I writing”应改为“I write”，因为此处需要动词原形或一般现在时形式；“may varied”应为“may vary”，情态动词后接动词原形。
× You can type things down as long as you have your phone and it's really easy to upload it to white Cloud drive where you can review it in different platform.
✓ You can type things down as long as you have your phone and it's really easy to upload it to the White Cloud Drive where you can review it on different platforms.
“upload it to white Cloud drive”中“white Cloud drive”应加冠词且首字母大写；“review it in different platform”中“in”应改为“on”，“platform”应为复数形式“platforms”。
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